Transforming! Reborn as an Elven Lord in Another World

A very good lord development article. (There was some dissuasion in the early stage, personal opinion) But when will the protagonist become truly powerful? For now, it's just a lord story in the appearance of Xiaoka. Not bad, getting better and better, come on

It's not bad. The five stars are to encourage the author and have nothing to do with the quality of the article. Let me talk about the perception first. I can only say that it is average, not excellent. I am a newcomer after all, but it is not bad. Overall, the writing is considered acceptable on Rotten Tomatoes. It is readable and worth reading compared to the rotten articles on Tomatoes. Some places are a bit confusing, such as the dwarf at the beginning. The protagonist has never wondered about his origins. As a lord, this is not a good thing. Some places are a bit idealistic, but it is not a big problem. Also, author, have you ever thought about the technological level of the world you write about? I feel a little confused. I hope you can write about this question carefully. (I feel that this world probably has technology, but it only develops in powerful countries, and "country people" like the protagonist are probably not seen. But whether this is the case depends on what the author says. I am just guessing. After all, I really can't figure out why there is a world where iron can be forged, and why there is no technology such as stone mills and ovens. Or it is only common in fast-developing big cities, or the author simply didn't think so much and wrote about the technology tree of this world in a daze) In conclusion, this book is an excellent or average book on the Tomato platform. Because the author is a newcomer, many parts of the writing are confusing, but it is not serious. I hope that the author's writing skills will increase in the future and this problem can be solved.

The writing style is about 8:00 on Tomato, but +1 for rare fan lord stories 🙂 After 10 chapters, the plot becomes more and more interesting. Tomato stopped running at 9 points

Katisya was lonely in her later years. She thought for a long time that night, and she thought of...

The story is good, the subject matter is well chosen, the lord novel has no competition, and the writing style is a bit immature. It will be better if the writing style can be improved in the future. I would like to give a suggestion to the author. Now that this book has been recommended, it will accumulate more readers. If you do not accumulate enough readers during the recommendation period, it will be difficult to accumulate more readers later. After all, it is still difficult to get recommended.

After reading a little bit, I feel that the subject matter is okay, more will be posted [you will read carefully]

New writer, dear readers, please let me go.

I really like the style of this different world, and the wording is also very good, so I ask the author to work harder. Although I have not completely finished this book, I also know that there must be a great plot behind it.

The writing is very good, at least 8.5 Stars. I can only say it is very beautiful🤓👍

By the way, no one would really write the if line about being captured by the human slave-catching team if Sally had not come to save the protagonist 🤦