Starting from Demon Slayer and Creating Nodkarai

Okay, okay, I would rather watch Muzan's side about Teyvat. The plot of Demon Slayer Squad is relatively uninteresting and makes people want to skip it. There are also some "small problems" that I don't know if it is a private device or a typo. If it is a private device, there is no explanation for the existence of the "small problems" afterwards, which feels a bit suffocating. But overall it's pretty good.

A new and eye-catching theme, you can basically see the whole part of the Demon Slayer fandom at a glance, training, killing ghosts, making up for the regrets of the original work, and finally defeating them without any misfortune, the finale.

Note that the protagonist is not without misfortune. She has her own personality and ideological and moral values. As long as you can accept this, then this book will be quite good. I hereby give you five stars to express your encouragement.

Logically speaking, the Demon Slayer Squad, including Tanjiro, should all be Japanese. The reason why people kill ghosts is firstly because they want revenge, and secondly because they don't want more people to be eaten by ghosts. After dealing with the ghost-related matters, they should go back to their respective homes just like in the original work. Even if the author intends for the protagonist to arrange a mission for the Demon Slayer Squad to fight against the Abyss, fighting into the Abyss is not the same as exploring the continent of Teyvat, because they can understand Teyvat through books and other methods. The main character's system mission is to increase Teyvat's exposure, so all areas should be equally exposed to rain and dew. However, Teyvat is so big, with so many settings, characters, and forces, and there are many "side missions" that can better increase the authenticity of the world view and are extremely exciting. Without "traveling" to various regions, these are completely impossible to show. These are the charms of the Teyvat continent! The author is behind, how do you want the protagonist to arrange the protagonist group and others, so that they can have "motivations and reasons" to explore the world view of Teyvat?

Luna became Wu Ke. It can be said that Hong Yue was shattered and polluted by the abyss, and had to be reincarnated into Wu Ke. Because the erosion of the abyss turned her into the personality of a ghost king, and the curse was also the erosion of the abyss.

The two chefs are ecstatic, Tongmo Longchang Enlightenment is so well written, author, come on [blowing kisses]

"So, you have always guided us, but never served as a leader." Nosaka recalled some of Luna's remarks. "Yeah, I'm just providing you with this theory, the creator is someone else. The human world should be built and created by humans themselves. If I take action, the world will become what Moon God Luna wants, instead of writing your future through human will. I am just a guide, and I don't like to be a new authoritarian who is above all human beings. " I like this sentence very much

Personally, I suggest that the protagonist could add a setting in the remake: the moon was originally shattered, and the fragments fell into the world, which is the source of ghosts, the influence of ghosts on the world, the hatred of the victims for ghosts and the ghost king, and the obsession to truly call for the return of the moon, so the moon must wash away sins. It's quite interesting that the God of love returns because he harms people.

The teacher wrote well. When I read what the teacher said about the follow-up arrangements for the Immortal River's family, I was thinking about the two Immortal River brothers looking at the girlish Wuhan. They took out their mother from a pile of moon spirits and gave them a bunch of little carrot heads for their younger brothers and sisters. Then they pulled out a deer or a bird with a strange neck and said it was the father. The two of them looked confused, which I thought was beautiful😄

[Laughing evilly] The author's writing is really good, please update soon🦆. Also, I want to see the ghosts and the Demon Slayers having sex with the Abyss. Will there be any?

Yes, yes, this work is the best fanfic I have ever read so far. The writing is excellent and not brainless. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] But what I have to say is—— Author, when will you remember that this is a work that you haven't updated for months? ! ! Not enough! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Whether it's Demon Slayer or Genshin Impact, the character design has basically not collapsed. The author has a good knowledge reserve about the two works, the writing style is good, and the plot logic is smooth. The only shortcoming is that there are too few updates. For those who like both works, it can be considered a fairy tale.

It's very good and different. On the premise of ensuring that the story is clear and there are no big surprises, a unique subject matter is more important than anything else. I even feel that the unique subject matter is more important than the writing style and the content of the story itself [Chigua]

Very novel. So far it doesn't look like there's anything poisonous about it. More in line with my habits. World view construction A is, after all, based on the two major IPs of Genshin Impact and Demon Slayer. Character B is in line with the character design, but a little thin, which is understandable. This is generally the case in modern novels. Logical link A is self-consistent as a whole, especially the dual phase of the red moon is explained very well.

It's my first time to write a book review. It's so good and I love to read it!! Teachers write more, and children should read it ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑The writing is really cute, very imaginative but very reasonable. I don't think the teacher said it was wrong when setting it up. It's so refreshing to read♪٩(´ω`)و♪Teacher Qiuqiu must keep writing_(:з∠)_

It is novel and very consistent with the logic of the two worlds. I look forward to the day when Oni and Zhu join forces to fight against the abyss [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Super pretty (not enough😱

I just want to stop updating. I don't ask for anything, as long as the update can be completed, because it's so beautiful.

The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back.

Good writing, keep at it, don't give up [blowing kiss]

Awesome, no doubt about it

Good reading, good book, recommended

Looks good, looks good, looks good.

Come on, author, just don't mess with the eunuchs

Three times in the past few days, I've been able to read a good novel with less than 70 chapters. [Smile]

How to evaluate? I don't know, but it looks good anyway.

This book is surprisingly good. Isn't this book not considered a female channel?

You can take a look, the subject matter is quite new

What an interesting setting. The author was so cute and hugged her away.

Nice! ! Wuhu🥰 It would be great to drag everyone through the plot and other things. Everyone who is watching Demon Slayer will eat the same knife that I used to eat in the branch hehehe. The smile successfully transferred to my face [laughs] The plot of the author's two worlds is well combined. Come on, work hard to update!