Magical Boy Wants to Become Stronger

It looks good, the protagonist has personality, but I wish there were no Lily

The protagonist is very calm and the fighting scenes are profound, but there are too few. Can there be more? I finished watching it in more than two hours [crying]

It's still okay, there really aren't any bad points. I don't know if it's because there are too few chapters, but the portrayal of the protagonist doesn't seem to be particularly clear, but it still has its own characteristics, and there are also innovations in the plot content. I just don't know if the author can stick to it and continue writing it.

I've read it, it's pretty good. I saw someone saying "Poison" before and didn't click on it. After reading it, I found out that it's probably because the name fights, but there are not many battles about the protagonist. To be honest, it does not match the title, because many people will see the protagonist who is crazy and fights non-stop, but in fact there is not. The protagonist is eager to fight but is very rational, so it disappointed some people. Well, let's simply evaluate it from a few aspects. In terms of plot, I personally give it four stars. It's not perfect, but it can well create suspense and lead to the follow-up, giving people a sense of expectation. It doesn't have any old-fashioned classic plot. It incorporates some jokes but is not overused, giving people a sense of comfort. For example, the relationship between the protagonist and Amy is quite warm. Four stars for the characters. Although it may be weak in some aspects, the main characters are well portrayed. Some aspects may be a little deliberate, but overall it is not a simple sketch. There are some other things I want to say, but after thinking about it, it is unnecessary because it is relatively fragmented. In short, don't be fooled by the title. This is a growth story with warmth and memories, but the process is mixed with pain. The journey is not over. Also... I just read it today, and as soon as I saw the corners of Rian Shili's mouth rising, I saw the author saying that he was going to make a knife... Gu. ... The evaluation should be more.

It suits my taste, but I feel like the author could add a group portrait tag. Other people's perspectives are a bit too biased. Just looking at the existing tags may be offensive. However, I personally prefer this kind of world view, which is slow-burning and narrated from multiple perspectives. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

It seems okay so far. Judging from the writing style, I feel that it is a female author. I personally think that the protagonist's short height (170cm for men and 159cm for women) conflicts with the calm and fierce personality of the protagonist. . . . The latest chapter, please come on, author

It's very good. It's very natural in the later stage. In the early stage, I feel that the male protagonist is a bit divided. One moment he is expressionless, and the next moment he has many emotions. Especially in the first battle, the introduction describes the battle mania. As a result, there is no emotion like a machine during the battle, but the subsequent battles do not have such descriptions. This is very good, but sometimes it is a bit secondary. For example, when Duanmu fights, his appearance is expressionless and calm, and then he will say the next thing during the battle.

Well, there is a sense of déjà vu of AI in it, and the coolness of the combat is not reflected, but the overall framework is quite attractive. I hope there will be more battles in the future to improve the protagonist's abilities.

Have you used AI to revise your essay? There is a bit of ai smell in some places, but the flaws outweigh the virtues, and it's okay in Tomato

In fact, it's really okay to talk about the plot, but now that I see it, there is almost no emotional line. For someone like me who pursues emotional lines and main plots, it's not very good (personal opinion, appropriate reference), but because the introduction doesn't say hundreds or singles, I can give it a 5🌟 But seeing as the author's last book was interrupted due to some things, I can only give it a 4🌟. There is also a sentence that the review is just my personal opinion. Don't feed yourself off this book😡😡😡

Okay, I like the male protagonist's fighting, but there aren't enough fighting scenes. Moreover, the protagonist is of the spiritual perception system. I hope that the protagonist's magic can be described more in the future. After all, it is also purely physical and does not have the feeling of a magical girl. Of course, there may be reasons why there are still too few articles. Anyway, the author should update it soon, I want to see the magical girl mouth and teeth [laughing evilly]

It's okay, nothing toxic so far.

Are the two protagonists still split into two? When does the protagonist completely change?

The writing is very good, it is high-quality food. As a growth stream with a clear main line, some people think the plot pace is slow. I think it is okay (after seeing the latest chapter, I think it is faster). Unfortunately, I like to send knives and I am not a good person. In addition, I support Hakimi's single female protagonist [laughter]

The writing is very detailed and I really enjoyed reading it. But you can change the label. The style is very similar to the Aster next door. Also, now that I see the protagonist suddenly breaking through, it's hard to imagine whether his combat power will collapse later? And those who say fighting is fun, you need to grow too. I think what the author wrote is very reasonable, but it needs to be done step by step. Seems a little too fast

Author, don't forget your selling point, we want to fight → have fun↗! ! ! !

The characters are described in detail, with flesh and blood, and different characters are described from multiple angles. However, the plot will appear to be a bit draggy, and some book lovers who like fast progress may not understand it.

It's pretty good-looking, with basically no major flaws.

Hope you can survive

Gua, it's a magical girl!

The concept is similar to "Starting from the Magical Girl to Dominate Eternity". Unfortunately, the number of words is too few at the moment and the impression is average. I will evaluate it after 500,000 words have been written.

There are more daily routines and not many combat plots.

It's a good-looking and very innovative book. I'll wait and see what happens next.

Looks good, looks good, suits my taste, xp Fang Yun and the people around her always see it inexplicably. Summary: This section is over.

It feels very interesting

Handsome, really so handsome(//∇//)

The future is promising, but a bit short

Personally I think it's good,

This is beautiful

Not bad, not bad, very good