After Cultivating to Immortality, I Became the Most Troublesome Existence in Heaven.

As the designer of this story, what I want to create is not the kind of exciting story that lasts from day to day. Lin Zhiyi is three years old. No matter how talented she is, she still has to go through the growth process of wrestling, being homesick, and being ridiculed. The fact that her cultivation is stuck is not a bug, but a game between the suppression of heavenly law and the roots of Yin spirit. This kind of "laying a thick foundation" setting is to make becoming stronger come with a price and a process. The aura and plot correction power of the original heroine Su Qingxue are the "fate and resistance" I want to explore. The friendship of five little dumplings is the light in the darkness. Qian Duoduo uses gold to clumsily express his concern, and Li Hanfeng hides protection under his cold face... These details are the warmth I want to write about. Feng Linyuan, the master, looks arrogant but actually protects his shortcomings. He turned the spiritual house into a moving scene, which is the clumsy love of his elders. The system goes from being a mechanical missionary to planning for the host, and even the path of the "evil female supporting character" can be different: protecting the people you care about and being strong, isn't this a kind of justice? Lan Zhuochi was electrocuted n times before he woke up. I want to say that it takes pain and help to break away from the control of the plot. Xuanhuang has gone through thousands of cycles just to change his life. It is obsession and sacrifice. None of this is in vain. On the road to immortality, geniuses will also cry, villains will also be hurt, and friends will quarrel and reconcile. What I want to write is to save up the capital to change my life bit by bit in a script that is destined to be tragic, and to live a warm story under cold rules. When I wrote about Lin Zhiyi taking his friends to the Sword Sect, he wanted to show that "real geniuses attract each other instead of opposing each other." The black-robed elder made things difficult and the named disciple humiliated him to pave the way for Feng Linyuan's attention later on. Precious things need comparison to show their value. The original heroine was not vicious because of female competition, but wanted to write the tragedy of "being controlled by the halo and losing her true heart". Heavenly Suppression is not about suppressing the protagonist group, it is about saying that "to be truly powerful, you need to endure injustice first." All grievances will become the foundation for future counterattacks.

This book is very in line with my taste. The characters of Wu Xiaozhi are very three-dimensional. The characters written by the author are very upright (the protagonist group). The master is good, the partner is good, and the system is good (a very novel point is that the system has emotions. It is very good for the heroine. It is true empathy and is no longer an ordinary code) Lin Zhiyi and everyone's friendship and family affection are very touching. And the female protagonist is very strong and works hard to improve herself. Even if God does not allow it, Wu Xiaozhi still presses forward [Send heart] Very good group portrait article Bang bang bang! After reading hundreds of chapters, I gradually felt a little bored. How should I put it? I felt that the description of the characters was not so full. I began to think that although the heroine was a little princess, she was very strong. Later, I slowly forgot the feeling at the beginning. The author repeated a little bit of words later, and the plot was a bit boring and boring (only my personal opinion, please do not make excuses)

It looks great and recommended, and the group portraits are really well written! The plot is addictive and the author's writing skills are improving! Anyway, I saw it once, and I have to wait for the update. If you like it, the group portraits/system, and the plot twist, you can try it! For cp, go and see it yourself [laughing] [laughing] I won't say much about the specific plot, just go and see it yourself. The family line is also beautifully written. The friendship between the five little ones is very interesting, and each character has its own characteristics. It's not too perfunctory. Lin Zhiyi works very hard! I really enjoyed reading it. The author's writing is so beautiful. I think so [blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful, and the sense of group portraits is quite strong. I think we can write more group portraits. The original male and female protagonists were written a little too much. I don't really want to see them. I hope there will be no CP. I hope there will be family lines, friendship lines, and love lines in the extras. Baby Yiyi is so cute, super cute. Li Hanfeng's cold face is also super cute. A group of children are so cute. How could there be such cute creatures?

This book still deserves a five-star rating. It is obviously logical and has an outline. If all the pitfalls can be filled in, it will be a good book. The writing is a bit immature at present, but it is also very smooth and not boring to read. The author can just write according to his own ideas. In theory, the original heroine's golden finger is really big, but in fact, our heroine's golden finger is also big. She has not suffered any grievances in this life, and she can solve any problems. The rhythm is not bad, and it feels like a world view The pattern should be quite big. The author is playing a big game of chess, and the people in the game are observing and guessing. The readers are also observing and speculating, but the magic pen is in the hands of the author. 1111 Don't give up on the article. The author writes and fills in the pits. The quality of the book itself is definitely not bad, and the author is really diligent. It is possible to write seven to eight thousand or ten thousand words a day, but he must also pay attention to rest and don't squeeze out. It is not the kind of novel that can be read at a glance. It is very readable.

It's non-standard and beautiful. Really, this is the best group portrait article I've read in the past two years. The five little dumplings in it are really great. Each has its own characteristics. They are not different but they form a whole. No one is missing. The master and the system are also very good, especially for Yiyi, one who insists on the way of heaven, and one who opposes the main god and falls into multiple reincarnations. Even the "decent" people on the surface have flesh and blood. Now that I see that the big villain is Tiandao, I don't know if there will be other bosses in the future. In short, I will continue to pursue it. I hope that in the ending, everyone can get rid of the established fate of the script and embark on the path they want to take.

This novel is amazing. The plot is different from other similar works. It is very new and keeps people interested. There are foreshadowings. There is a bigger secret after the plot. It is shocking and gives me goosebumps (it's so shocking). Si Hao is no worse than those famous works. The author's imagination is very big. My book-weariness period has been cured! ! ! ! !

This is the most interesting novel about immortality that I have read in all these years, except for books like Ye Qiao and Yun Miaomiao. It makes me want to read on, it is fascinating, and it is one of the few novels that has moved me a little [Admiration] Of course, I hope the author will perform steadily and not end up unfinished, and fill in the gaps that need to be filled [Shy] I hope the author will continue to write with great strength [laughing] [Send heartfelt] [Like] [Like]

The babies are very cute, and the master and system are also very good. It is a good-looking baby story in the "Bad Heaven" theme of cultivating immortals. The original female and male protagonists have a lot of roles and have a strong sense of presence. Although they are in the control group, I don't want to see them jumping around... The protagonist group has not suffered a loss, but the people around them have been affected by the aura of the original protagonist and are still unable to wake up. I feel a little aggrieved. I am still waiting for a counterattack. I will check it out after it is tied.

So cute! Everyone is cute! I'm about to cry. I made an exception and read this serial. The result is so good. Author, when will you finish it? I scrolled down the table of contents. It's all about kids 😭😭😭 I'm going to cry, and there's that marriage-in-law thing, can a kid really say that? If I were an adult, I would still be able to do CP or something, but it would be for children. . . It's a bit weird (maybe it's my sexual brain) The second point is that it was okay in the early stage, but the more I read, the more I felt it was a bit verbose. Every place was written in such detail, which I personally felt was a bit unnecessary. Moreover, Meibao once had to follow the master to the toilet because she didn't understand. I think Sister Bao is written like a child who has no sense of boundaries. Although she is only four years old, a four-year-old should understand normal life, right? (?) But the writing style is still good, the emotions are delicate, and the plot design is different from other fairy tales, it is very novel! 😍

It's really super good-looking, the author's writing is online, and the plot is reasonable. A group of children watching this show have soft hearts, they are naughty and sometimes well-behaved. The heroine is also very sincere. If she has any intrigues or dissatisfaction, she will tell her face to face. There are also some foreshadowings, such as Xuanhuang. To sum up, there is no loss in investing in stocks.

The author's writing style is very good, the five little ones are particularly cute, and the characters that appear later are also very distinct. But I hope the author can reduce the amount of cp feeling in the back-and-forth. It's not that I don't support knocking, but I think the meaning is too small. It's a bit strange to write some doting interactions in secret now. I am only an 8-year-old child (personal suggestion, don't criticize if you don't like it) And in the end, it was clear that Yiyi won through hard work, but he also said that he still had puppets up his sleeves. It felt like hard work had become a joke, and it would be better to let Yiyi lose.

It's very beautiful, and you will feel super happy after watching it; the growth of the protagonists is mutual, and they protect each other. The author even wrote about the growth of the system, which makes me particularly touched. For details, you can read about 90 chapters. The master is also working hard to support the protagonists, and also participates in the growth of their will, so everyone is working hard, and no one gives up because of difficulties. Although it is very powerless when watching Tiandao do things, it is a very special happiness☺️ The plot written by the author is very interesting! I hope the teacher can read 6 chapters every day. It's not enough! If possible, I hope to publish a physical book in the future! (Looking forward) @There is no way to do it. The teacher is super awesome! Keep up the good work!

It's very interesting to watch. The design inside is very exciting. I can see the struggle between the will and the so-called destiny. What I remember being deeply impressed is that the system plans for the heroine step by step, especially when writing the plot. There is also a master who is willing to break the constraints for the heroine. Xuanhuang's thousands of comebacks. The friendship bond of the five-person group in it. Su Qingxue, the male protagonist and the so-called heaven in it are really annoying, especially the level restrictions are very annoying. I even thought about whether the will is the true Son of Destiny, and then the fake Heaven came, Su Qingxue became the Son of Destiny, and the system is the true Son of Heaven. Although they are very uncomfortable to watch, the plot is indeed very interesting and the content is exciting. The author's writing is very beautiful and the characters are well portrayed. I hope Yiyi will break through the shackles as soon as possible [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's good to watch, and the friendship between the five little ones is very touching. Whether it's the master, they are all good people, especially Tongzi. It's really miserable. I hope that the day when Tongzi can get rid of the shackles will come soon. It's tied, the author will update it quickly

This book is one that I feel I haven't given up on writing since I read it. At first I thought I might get bored reading this kind of non-CP novel, and thought it might just be a novel where the heroine fights monsters and upgrades without any brains. Damn it, after reading it later, I thought the author was really good at writing it! It's completely different from what I thought. I enjoyed watching it even without CP. The heroine's own talents are limited by the plot and the way of heaven. The system's golden finger function is not very prominent, but the companionship function accounts for a large part. People who watch it feel very warm. I also like the milk baby group! They are all so cute, but I think the wording is a bit monotonous and the plot is strange. However, the logic of the plot is also very strong, and the author is very innovative and thoughtful. It's very, very cool! I hope it will be better and there will be no unexpected unfinished results in the later stage, so I will chase it to the end! [Send heart][Send heart] However, I think the author can polish the characters of the other four groups. They are all cute but do not have certain characteristics. The writing style of describing their progress and moves is also relatively simple and immature. Some high-quality male comics write more exciting fighting scenes and the language is more expressive, which is worthy of reference and learning. Although the plot logic and concept of the current description are good, it just lacks a bit of feeling.

It's very, very, very, very good-looking. It's not that kind of mindless and cool story. The protagonist is not born strong, and there are many ups and downs on the way to growth. It really feels like growing up with the protagonist since childhood, and there is a feeling of watching the protagonist slowly grow into a very powerful person. It's really like my family has a girl growing up. It's definitely not that kind of mindless and cool story. It's so good that everyone must read it. The main reason is that the author is very diligent! Crazy give our author a big shout out! ! !

Good, good, good, good, it's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative people😭Tears flow out from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱 So handsome😘It is God, it is my rose that lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist in me I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people.

It's beautiful. Yiyi is very cute. I like Master and Yiyi very much. Xuanhuang's episode feels like I will definitely suffer from it in the future. The author will update soon...

I didn't have much impression after reading the first few chapters. The writing is great and the plot is also very exciting [shy] Tongzi's emotions are really reflected in the writing (the picture is super strong! [I'm about to cry] [crying]) Every character is so good 🈶 It feels like a living person. It's really, really, super, super good-looking! ! ! [Sending Hearts] (Forgive me for my lack of language) One of my favorite books in 🍅 is Can I update 9 times a day [Please update more] Chirp Mi Chir Mi [Flying Kiss] [Flying Kiss] @There is no way to do it

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

It's really good to watch. The characters are well portrayed in it. The characters' images are not static (the names are also nice). The content is very novel. There are unexpected things and tear-jerking language. I highly recommend everyone to watch it [Like] Now the more I look at it, the better it looks [Adoration]

It's very interesting. I thought it would be boring at first, but it turned out not to be the case. The world view is quite big and the plot layout is well drawn. The heroine is very cute, with family and friendship. What shocked me the most was Xuanhuang. I really didn't expect that his true identity was him. Moreover, the author explained some things that needed to be explained very clearly. The most noteworthy thing is that this is the best system I have ever seen, and it is also the best system for raising babies. Compared with other systems for raising babies, I think this is the system closest to the awakening of AI. It has emotions and can empathize with the host. Although it is formatted and loses its memory due to unknowability time and time again, it is still working hard. The protagonist, his friends, and Shi Hu are all very good. I really can't stand it anymore. This broken sentence and this writing style are particularly uncomfortable for the listeners. Apart from the poor writing, is the plot okay? The scene between the heroine Dabi and Lan is the biggest failure of this book and the main reason for the bad reviews. This book makes strong women more flattering than men

At first I thought it was just an ordinary group pet article, but later I found it was different from what I imagined. The writing is delicate and the plot is very novel. I didn't expect that the system turned out to be Yiyi's brother. The relationship between Yiyi and his master is very good. The friendship between the five little ones is also very good. The family relationship between Yiyi and his brother is also very good. The emotions are very rich. There are many plots that made me shed tears. The plot of Yiyi and Hanfeng being injured. After Yiyi goes to the upper world, build more intelligence networks. The five little ones are looking for Yiyi together. The father, emperor, mother, queen and prince in the human world do good deeds in the name of Yiyi. Xuanhuang's cycle again and again. The ghost king's no hesitation. The support of the sea emperor. There are many more. It is really very interesting. I look forward to the following plots. I think the protagonist group can grow up faster. I don't think I need to add some descriptions. They are repeated too many times. In fact, they are a bit boring and a bit annoying.

This book is really beautiful. Don't be dissatisfied! The article is really written very delicately, every detail is in place, every link is followed by every link, and every foreshadowing is well written. I really recommend it? Originally, more than 300,000 people were reading this book, and the gift value was more than 4,800, but now it has dropped to more than 600! In the past, the ranking would not fall out of 100, but now it is over 300! And many people said, but they only went into more detail, and there were no water stains. The article was really beautifully written!

The author updates very quickly, and there are no glitches. It looks very comfortable, the plot is interesting, and the writing is good. The little princess Yiyi is super cute, super smart, and super powerful. Moreover, the author still loves his readers very much. He will make him a villain if he dislikes anyone. He will also reply to many readers, and he is often seen very happy. The great writing style can be applied to the sublimation of the composition in the examination room, and the writing is very clear [learned] (only the previous article) The author writes about the group of animals very well👍🏻, each one has its own personality characteristics. (Only the previous text) Okay, let me be honest, the author's writing style is a bit dull. The heroine's psychology is expressed directly, rather than reflected through actions, details, and demeanor. For example, "she was angry" and "she was wronged" instead of letting readers feel it. There are many repeated sentences in the following text. To be honest, I prefer the writing style of the first article, which is very similar to a student's composition. The second article seems a bit perfunctory and makes it uncomfortable to read. Give five stars and hope the author can write better [love] As the core golden finger, the "evil female supporting character self-rescue system" played a key role in promoting the plot and revealing the destiny setting in the early stage. However, in the later stage, it only teased or praised the heroine, lacking deeper mechanism expansion, and sometimes even interrupted the protagonist's growth logic, weakening the initiative of "self-rescue", which made it seem a bit useless. The work attempts to balance "refreshing writing" and "anti-routine", but in the actual narrative, the need for a sense of satisfaction in "crying and cultivating the world of immortality" often overwhelms the in-depth discussion of "resistance to fate". Many conflict resolutions rely on the protagonist's words or temporary bursts of power, and the "cost of growth" is not portrayed in depth enough, causing some plots to appear deliberate and weakening the idea of ​​"counterattack requires a process" that was originally intended to be conveyed. Daily interactions and group pet plots take up a large proportion. Although they can enhance the warm atmosphere, they also make the main plot advance slowly. Some chapters repeat the pattern of "encountering a crisis - being cute and resolving - gaining recognition", which can easily cause readers to suffer from aesthetic fatigue. Especially readers who are looking forward to fast-paced cultivation and upgrading may feel that the progress is not crisp and clear enough. Summary: The context does not look like it was written by one person It has been changed to Samsung. I have read Chapter 305 and I am ready to abandon the book.

I watched the video by watching the video. Personally, I don't like watching Milkman very much, and I feel that the language and ideas are childish. This is the case in this article, but I think the author's ideas are very novel, especially the explosion of feelings after the system and Xuanhuang is the character Qian Duoduo. Because it can shock people, for example, many major events in Tianguan are revealed later. Of course, each author's writing is different. The author can improve on the language of the system or Feng XX, and break out the roll call sentences. The system [If the heavenly tool is sufficient, why condone injustice! If destiny is determined, why give variables! If everything is empty, for whom is this reincarnation soaked in blood and tears staged? ! ] I like [Blowing Kiss] very much. Maybe in order to create the personal image and the concept of group portrait, the author will write the behaviors and reactions of the five little animals together. Maybe it is to reflect the personal image, but it is a little stiff. In short, the overall article is a pretty good one, with a good framework and conception. I would give it nine out of ten (the above content is purely a personal opinion. Everyone has different feelings when reading the article. There is no absolute right or wrong [Blow kiss] I have read all the updated ones so far. They are generally good. Both the protagonist and the villain's personal images are very three-dimensional. The character of Su Ha is very well created. He is a very smart and egoistic villain. The part about seeking benefits and avoiding harm is very well written. People from all sects are reflecting on this matter. I think it also reflects the current situation of society. It is still a very simple language and speaks weighty words. (I have a question here. The article mentions the ability of the Five Little Ones to reach the middle or even late stages of the Golden Elixir. However, in the few immortal cultivation novels I have read before, the Golden Elixir and Foundation Establishment are a qualitative leap, and they often use cross-border fights to highlight the strength of the heroine.) I feel that if I write at this pace, I will continue to write for a long time. There are some holes that have not been filled in. It may be more surprising and enlightening to reveal them later. (I feel like something major will break out later, I look forward to it.) Because I mentioned before that Su never thought of hurting Lin, he was just (especially) jealous. I wonder if it will be cleared up in the future? There are also the souls of the other world at the back, the power of the rules of heaven, and the memory of the system that is always deleted. I am looking forward to how it will be written later [exploration] To be honest, this novel may not be that special (bs), but it will attract people to read. Lin is also a heartthrob. He exists, and he is loved and loved at the same time, but he is also strong and kind, and his friendship is also very good. Lan Zhuochi, Li Hanfeng, Nangong Ci, some of them have opposite-sex feelings for Lin (forgot his name), Qian Duoduo also has it, but he still has the feeling of being a big brother. I am the male protagonist Lan Zhuochi, but I don't know Will the author Chu know how to write about emotions? But he will definitely have to wait until they grow up. It will take a long time. As for the constraints of heaven and earth, he will write a lot of adventures. In order to solve this problem, is it entering the secret realm? (Guess) The current combat power ranking is Lin, Yun, Li, Qian, Feng (what are they called) Dance lightly). I think Yun Yi is very cute, silly, and has a feeling like Tokitou Muichiro [Blowing Kiss] "Say whatever you think of in random words" Anyway, I still think this book is very interesting. It is the first one. I think it is very nice [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

This book is really beautiful. If you are like me and often read stories about big heroines, you may not be used to it. When you first read this book, you didn't understand its group portrait characteristics, so you felt a little bored. Especially when you read more than 100 chapters, the author is used to describing each character once, but after reading it, you will find it very interesting. After you get used to the author's writing habits , you will feel that everyone is very unique, especially in the 300 or 400 chapters, the description of each person and the foreshadowing are very good. In short, it is very interesting. If you think it is not very interesting after reading the previous chapter, you can continue to read a short paragraph and you will feel that it is really interesting. It is one of the rare books that I think is well written. The sad points and the funny points are also connected very well. All in all, it's very beautiful. I recommend watching it. It looks good, and the post-processing also looks great. But it should be that there are too many things happening to each of the protagonists, and it always feels like the relationship between them is not as good as before.

Xiaozhiyi and her friends are very nice, sincere and cute, know how to share (only good friends), and have a sense of unity (only good friends). Child Yiyi is just a little crybaby [making faces]. The other friends are also good babies, and Tongzi is also the one who raises Zaizai~ Xiao Zhiyi, we are so destined, your name is Zhiyi, and my name is Zhiyi. From now on, we are half-sisters! It's too dangerous there, come to my sister's arms, she will protect you~[Send heart] I like it very much, I like the group portraits, I like the friendship between teenagers, and... I like you, my dear! [Blow a kiss][Make faces] Daddy, there are people behind you~ Daddy, your writing style is very good! Come on come on! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

This is an eye-catching collection of portraits of immortals. The world view constructed by the author is grand and delicate, and he devoted his efforts to the characterization of each character. The protagonist is no longer a one-man show, the five little ones in the book each have their own charm. Their growth is intertwined into a bright star network, making readers feel like they are in the real and ethereal world of immortality. The writing is smooth and picturesque. Whether it is the warmth of daily life or the majesty of battle, the descriptions are just right and have a strong sense of substitution. The emotional line is not very good, obviously there is no cp, but the author has buried countless heart-warming details in the interactions of the characters. This ambiguity caused readers to repeat themselves in the comment section. Although it is slightly ambiguous for readers who firmly want to see "Friendship First", it is another kind of human touch that makes the bond between the characters deeper. Overall, it's a nice book. (This is my suggestion, don't spray it if you don't like it)