After Cultivating Immortality, I Became Heaven's Biggest Headache

As the designer of this story, what I want to create is not the kind of exciting story that lasts from day to day. Lin Zhiyi is three years old. No matter how talented she is, she still has to go through the growth process of wrestling, being homesick, and being ridiculed. The fact that her cultivation is stuck is not a bug, but a game between the suppression of heavenly law and the roots of Yin spirit. This kind of "laying a thick foundation" setting is to make becoming stronger come with a price and a process. The aura and plot correction power of the original heroine Su Qingxue are the "fate and resistance" I want to explore. The friendship of five little dumplings is the light in the darkness. Qian Duoduo uses gold to clumsily express his concern, and Li Hanfeng hides protection under his cold face... These details are the warmth I want to write about. Feng Linyuan, the master, looks arrogant but actually protects his shortcomings. He turned the spiritual house into a moving scene, which is the clumsy love of his elders. The system goes from being a mechanical missionary to planning for the host, and even the path of the "evil female supporting character" can be different: protecting the people you care about and being strong, isn't this a kind of justice? Lan Zhuochi was electrocuted n times before he woke up. I want to say that it takes pain and help to break away from the control of the plot. Xuanhuang has gone through thousands of cycles just to change his life. It is obsession and sacrifice. None of this is in vain. On the road to immortality, geniuses will also cry, villains will also be hurt, and friends will quarrel and reconcile. What I want to write is to save up the capital to change my life bit by bit in a script that is destined to be tragic, and to live a warm story under cold rules. When I wrote about Lin Zhiyi taking his friends to the Sword Sect, he wanted to show that "real geniuses attract each other instead of opposing each other." The black-robed elder made things difficult and the named disciple humiliated him to pave the way for Feng Linyuan's attention later on. Precious things need comparison to show their value. The original heroine was not vicious because of female competition, but wanted to write the tragedy of "being controlled by the halo and losing her true heart". Heavenly Suppression is not about suppressing the protagonist group, it is about saying that "to be truly powerful, you need to endure injustice first." All grievances will become the foundation for future counterattacks.

This book is very in line with my taste. The characters of Wu Xiaozhi are very three-dimensional. The characters written by the author are very upright (the protagonist group). The master is good, the partner is good, and the system is good (a very novel point is that the system has emotions. It is very good for the heroine. It is true empathy and is no longer an ordinary code) Lin Zhiyi and everyone's friendship and family affection are very touching. And the female protagonist is very strong and works hard to improve herself. Even if God does not allow it, Wu Xiaozhi still presses forward [Send heart] Very good group portrait article Bang bang bang! After reading hundreds of chapters, I gradually felt a little bored. How should I put it? I felt that the description of the characters was not so full. I began to think that although the heroine was a little princess, she was very strong. Later, I slowly forgot the feeling at the beginning. The author repeated a little bit of words later, and the plot was a bit boring and boring (only my personal opinion, please do not make excuses)

It looks great and recommended, and the group portraits are really well written! The plot is addictive and the author's writing skills are improving! Anyway, I saw it once, and I have to wait for the update. If you like it, the group portraits/system, and the plot twist, you can try it! For cp, go and see it yourself [laughing] [laughing] I won't say much about the specific plot, just go and see it yourself. The family line is also beautifully written. The friendship between the five little ones is very interesting, and each character has its own characteristics. It's not too perfunctory. Lin Zhiyi works very hard! I really enjoyed reading it. The author's writing is so beautiful. I think so [blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful, and the sense of group portraits is quite strong. I think we can write more group portraits. The original male and female protagonists were written a little too much. I don't really want to see them. I hope there will be no CP. I hope there will be family lines, friendship lines, and love lines in the extras. Baby Yiyi is so cute, super cute. Li Hanfeng's cold face is also super cute. A group of children are so cute. How could there be such cute creatures?

This book still deserves a five-star rating. It is obviously logical and has an outline. If all the pitfalls can be filled in, it will be a good book. The writing is a bit immature at present, but it is also very smooth and not boring to read. The author can just write according to his own ideas. In theory, the original heroine's golden finger is really big, but in fact, our heroine's golden finger is also big. She has not suffered any grievances in this life, and she can solve any problems. The rhythm is not bad, and it feels like a world view The pattern should be quite big. The author is playing a big game of chess, and the people in the game are observing and guessing. The readers are also observing and speculating, but the magic pen is in the hands of the author. 1111 Don't give up on the article. The author writes and fills in the pits. The quality of the book itself is definitely not bad, and the author is really diligent. It is possible to write seven to eight thousand or ten thousand words a day, but he must also pay attention to rest and don't squeeze out. It is not the kind of novel that can be read at a glance. It is very readable.

It's non-standard and beautiful. Really, this is the best group portrait article I've read in the past two years. The five little dumplings in it are really great. Each has its own characteristics. They are not different but they form a whole. No one is missing. The master and the system are also very good, especially for Yiyi, one who insists on the way of heaven, and one who opposes the main god and falls into multiple reincarnations. Even the "decent" people on the surface have flesh and blood. Now that I see that the big villain is Tiandao, I don't know if there will be other bosses in the future. In short, I will continue to pursue it. I hope that in the ending, everyone can get rid of the established fate of the script and embark on the path they want to take.

This novel is amazing. The plot is different from other similar works. It is very new and keeps people interested. There are foreshadowings. There is a bigger secret after the plot. It is shocking and gives me goosebumps (it's so shocking). Si Hao is no worse than those famous works. The author's imagination is very big. My book-weariness period has been cured! ! ! ! !

This is the most interesting novel about immortality that I have read in all these years, except for books like Ye Qiao and Yun Miaomiao. It makes me want to read on, it is fascinating, and it is one of the few novels that has moved me a little [Admiration] Of course, I hope the author will perform steadily and not end up unfinished, and fill in the gaps that need to be filled [Shy] I hope the author will continue to write with great strength [laughing] [Send heartfelt] [Like] [Like]

The babies are very cute, and the master and system are also very good. It is a good-looking baby story in the "Bad Heaven" theme of cultivating immortals. The original female and male protagonists have a lot of roles and have a strong sense of presence. Although they are in the control group, I don't want to see them jumping around... The protagonist group has not suffered a loss, but the people around them have been affected by the aura of the original protagonist and are still unable to wake up. I feel a little aggrieved. I am still waiting for a counterattack. I will check it out after it is tied.

So cute! Everyone is cute! I'm about to cry. I made an exception and read this serial. The result is so good. Author, when will you finish it? I scrolled down the table of contents. It's all about kids 😭😭😭 I'm going to cry, and there's that marriage-in-law thing, can a kid really say that? If I were an adult, I would still be able to do CP or something, but it would be for children. . . It's a bit weird (maybe it's my sexual brain) The second point is that it was okay in the early stage, but the more I read, the more I felt it was a bit verbose. Every place was written in such detail, which I personally felt was a bit unnecessary. Moreover, Meibao once had to follow the master to the toilet because she didn't understand. I think Sister Bao is written like a child who has no sense of boundaries. Although she is only four years old, a four-year-old should understand normal life, right? (?) But the writing style is still good, the emotions are delicate, and the plot design is different from other fairy tales, it is very novel! 😍