Naruto: I Killed Sasuke in a Rage from the Start and Toppled Konoha!

It's a mess, two stars start walking

Inexplicable plot.

You are not logical

What is this thing about? It's so messed up. No wonder you didn't get a single rating for your six books. Didn't you think carefully before writing?

Mark it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

A mess…

The protagonist is too bad

A mess. .

It's the first time I've seen someone so frustrated.

Pupil Technique is an evolution. Do you have that much time to evolve? Will the enemy be stupid enough not to test you and treat us as fools?