HP Deha: the Savior Also Has to Take Bridal Lessons

After reading it for a while, I felt that this book was very good! Harry was not written as a spoiled wife or anything like that. . (Double Strong I Love You) enmm feels like it replaces the concept of "pure blood supremacy" with "A supremacy" I'm so glad Lily and James didn't die! ! [Shy] Anyway, I'm possessed. Like this one very much. What's more, the author's update speed is also very fast! Come on👁🥺👁 Uh, the chase is over. I feel like the author's writing is a bit hard-to-get. I like it. . 👁👁

It's a really good book. I didn't expect that a fanfic could metaphorically relate to women trapped in the old society. O can also compete on the Quidditch field without being limited to other people's eyes. Recommended!

This book is very delicately written, and the characters are very vivid and vivid. It vividly and vividly describes Harry's various expressions when he travels into another world. In fact, in my opinion, the existence of omegas in this world obscures the status of women in real life. Today, there are still some phenomena of patriarchal preference and inequality between men and women, and Harry's actions of being a stranger or resisting those who are stronger than him seem to only prove that he is an alien, that he is different from others, and that he is not recognized by others. But I don't think so, just like in real life, women can also do some things that boys do. So I think the moral is particularly good. Something that resonates with me.

It's a great book. It's the best book about Deha that I've read on Tomato so far, and it's also the best book about this kind of overhead. However, the advantages and disadvantages are too obvious. I hope the author can change it. Let's talk about the advantages first: the various character creations are actually quite good, the characters are basically not OOC, the writing is beautiful, and the author's literary skills can be seen in some paragraphs. The various plot settings are also pretty good. It allows readers to follow some of Harry's mood changes in the plot. At least when I first saw Harry meeting his parents, I still felt quite sour. Let's talk about the shortcomings: When reading this book, I actually always felt a sense of powerlessness. I suddenly couldn't breathe while reading it, whether it was about O's dilemma or the various activities that failed no matter what I did. I feel suffocated, I feel the double card, but in the situation of ao, what I see is that o is stronger, a is stronger. Harry has accomplished too few things successfully by himself. His soul is in the fourth grade, and the body of o is even too small for the second grade. Both Harry and Draco are too young. I think no one at this age can understand what love is and can understand love by themselves. Personally, I think this love plot can be pushed back a bit to the second grade! ! Puppy love at the age of about thirteen or fourteen, and do they really know how to use some powerful magic in their second grade? The flaws do not hide the flaws, and overall it is okay. Regarding the social situation, I have been thinking about it, because I can't think of how Harry can break the situation in that situation. The kind of wife who is raised in captivity and taught to be called a has no dreams of her own.

It's particularly beautiful. I think the ups and downs of the love scenes are great. At first, he thought he could go back right away, so Harper didn't pay much attention to the people around him. Until later, he knew he was going to stay here for a long time. The feeling of being out of this world was completely highlighted! This new article is really delicious

This can be said to be a masterpiece, with a very novel theme. Harry Potter traveled from the original world to another world. He broke the traditional concept, "There is no Quidditch player who is an omega." "Then I will be the first one." "Please save him." "Omega should be like Omgea." "A bird in a cage until a bird longs for freedom comes." In the end, he became the savior of the world. However, I have one more thing to say: Tom, we need you!

This book is quite good, but not many people have read it. There is a reason why I can't raise my score. Advantages: The author's writing style is very good. I was really surprised at first. The subject matter is very novel. It's really good! The early plot is interesting, and Harry and Xiaolong are not OOC at all. It was fun to watch it directly! ! Disadvantages: But speak your mind! ! Author, you are possessed by a dragon! ! Your mouth is too venomous. It is normal for the world to have AO injustice. But the author, you are just like the king of a country and a captive from a foreign country! A bit... And the author thinks that the latest chapter is a bit off-topic by going back to the original world. It completely damages the image. I can't understand his behavior with that man! Suggestion: I hope the author changes the background [after the war and Harry's death in battle] so that it would be better (so that later on, we will not face the problem of two Harrys returning to their original world). Please Then can we strengthen Harry and Xiaolong? They are too weak. Finally, I hope the author can let someone (Dumbledore or Xiaolong) discover Harry's past experiences in the later stage (otherwise the dangerous activities Harry participated in will look like he is self-righteous, inexplicable, and show off), which will make it more comfortable to watch. ｛The author is really awesome👍I apologize if there are any shortcomings in my suggestions｝ I actually don't like this article very much

God, the writing is really good. I am waiting for the book and text to be updated in the middle of the night. It's really well written, and I don't think there's any OOC or anything like that. And the setting of the long-haired Ron O and Hermione's gentle A is also very good. How can I really say that Ginny loves but can't help it? The author really has a wonderful way of rejuvenating!

Great! I have read several DeHaan novels and all of them portray Harry in a feminine way. Only the larger ones made me see the high-spirited, brave and heroic Harry who dares to fight, is bold and careful, has the courage to do everything for his friends, and is always kind. Lord Savior [sending my heart] I love it so much [sending my heart] I just want to tell the author, can it be faster? W(ﾟДﾟ)w is not enough, not enough at all [please update] For the sake of my five-star rating, please update more [laughs]

Yes, yes, just write it like this. I like all so much. Ha, the soup base is so comfortable. Grandma Harry looks so comfortable. Hey hey hey hey hey hey, I will spend this holiday with you. No matter how you think about it, it must be so beautiful that it will blow my mind. Although she is a nanny, she portrays Harry's own arrogance and perseverance. Yes! This is the most charming thing about Halibo! Everyone will love you! My savior!

This book is really good. I didn't believe it when my friend asked me to read it. But I didn't expect it to be so beautiful! ૮₍♡♡₎აThe author's writing style is great, and the characters and psychology are well portrayed. Every word of your novel is exquisite, every chapter is beautiful, every chapter is poetic and picturesque, and it makes people intoxicated.

There are very few OOC characters, and the plot is also very interesting. Who knows the sense of redemption that comes from reading this book in a book-weary period!

It's super good-looking, well-written, and the plot is smooth and not laggy. The relationship between Harry and the young master did not get better all at once. It was a step-by-step relationship and accumulation. It was the reflex arc of the young master's belated realization. It was the disgust in Harry's heart that changed. It was the undeniable emotional experience of the two. The young master slowly changed for Harry, and Harry was willing to go into danger for the sake of the omega's situation. It is the most Deha fanfic in history. I hope the author will get better and better :-D

Yes, yes, it's very good-looking. The most important thing is that Lily and James are not dead [laughing][laughing][laughing] It sort of fulfills the regret of the original work. Potter's character is also considered to have no cosplay. It's not a cute wife or something, but why are there so few people [crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy]

This is the most novel Deha fanfic I have read on Tomato. Harry traveled to the ABO world not to obey the rules here, but to help the omegas of this world. His intentions are really deep! The emotional line with Xiaolong is also developing step by step. The tsundere attack is the most delicious! From not liking Harry at the beginning to being attracted to the confident and bright Harry from time travel, the emotional line is always clear! Can't the author really be like the donkeys of the production team and finish the update at once (bushi)? I saw the latest episode before I even realized it! ꒦ິ^꒦ິLooking forward to the following content, don't let it be unfinished! (◍ ´꒳` ◍)

Very nice to look at. This article is not the kind of article that only contains love content, but it very well retains the charm of Harry Potter as the "savior" in the original work. The theme of this book also involves the more meaningful female awakening at the moment. I have seen a very special article of Deha.

So pretty! The characters are written very delicately. I knelt down to read it. It smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good. It smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good, smells good!

It's still very nice to watch. Rather than bringing Harry to a more stable world, it's more about making him a savior in another sense, breaking the stereotype of OB in this world. Overall, it's very good.

It's so delicious, Dehavn. [Admiration] Is it because everyone is concentrating on reading and not many people are rating it, so the score is low? [What] This book really portrays Khalifan's personality charm vividly. This book made me understand why Harry is the savior and why Draco is attracted to Harry. Who wouldn't love a warm, brave and kind savior? [Blow a kiss] Draco was so touched by Harry's wet feeling after his change of mind [full] and his own growth was also very interesting. The arrogant Malfoy always bowed his head for his family [shy]

It's super good-looking, the subject matter is really novel, and the extras are also my favorite genre. I thought the name was for a novel, but I didn't expect it to be so interesting when I clicked on it. It's really refreshing, and I feel that the emotional transition is more natural, without any abruptness. How about falling in love suddenly, but the slight flaw is that I think I should add a little more description of Harry and his parents, but the wife really wrote it very well (//∇//) If the wife wants to make additional extras in the future, I will keep chasing until the end. Moreover, the description of meeting Draco in the original world in the extra chapter is very good, and it is very consistent with the original work. The author's description of the character is really good (›´ω`‹)

I have read it before, give me a rating [Blow Kiss] At first I thought it was a simple time travel (I didn't see it was Deha), the writing gave me a feeling of female revolution (?) The plot is well written and the GGAD part is super delicious!

It's really good. I'm half a fan of the original novel. I also read some of the fan fiction, but the design of this book is very exquisite. I also saw some comments saying that it would be better to wait until Harry has finished fighting Voldemort's ending. But the fourth grade is a very good time, because Harry and Qiu officially developed a relationship in the fifth grade, and they have feelings for each other in the fourth grade. But during this period, Qiu and Cedric confirmed their relationship, so Harry had no emotional line in the original world. Some of the passages in it made me hallucinate the original work, and there was nothing particularly OOC about it. (There are some minor flaws. For example, Ulrich appeared in the third part, that is, in the third grade, and Harry passed through it. I'm in fourth grade, but I don't know her at all, but it doesn't affect it in general, it's just a small detail) Harry's parents are still alive, Lily and Snape have not broken up, and they are still friends, because there was no Voldemort in this world before, so Pettigrew is also there (actually, I can't accept it, but I haven't finished reading it yet, I'm not sure if he will betray me again, but from some small details, I guess it's still Voldemort who wore the clothes before) The "pure blood" part has been weakened, and there will be no uncomfortable plot description. The author's views are very upright, and the writing is also on point. I have read more than 40 chapters so far. I will comment after reading them all.

Very beautiful, very beautiful Very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good

A very favorite book!ヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ" The world view is also very clear. I like this world view very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Deha 99 will last a lifetime!!!!

This is a book that outsiders can also read. Putting aside the CP inside, I really really like what the teacher said about this book. By writing the contradictions in AO, it reflects the contradictions in the relationship between men and women in real life. As a girl, it was really heart-warming for me to read it.

It's awesome. Harry's step-by-step process of breaking the world's prejudice against Omage is exactly in line with women in today's society. The step-by-step process of going from zero to one, from nothing to something, made me deeply aware of some of the incorrect values ​​in today's society. But this book can only be read by us, Sister Deha. I would like many people to read it. The other two little ones are also very cute, especially Malfoy, who is very arrogant. 😋😋😋 Omega was typed incorrectly.

The purpose of this article is very profound. It feels like it is not just a simple humanistic piece about DeHartong, but also reflects some current social issues. The purpose is very profound. Moreover, the image of Harry's self-respect, bravery, and hard work here is very impressive, and the author's psychological description of the character is very good! Overall, this is indeed a good article!

There are many places where the logic conflicts with the original world of Harry Potter, but the flaws are not hidden, especially the thinking about O, which is very similar to the situation of real women. This part is very worth watching. I hope the world will be fairer and that each gender will have the right to make free choices (especially women who have lost their rights)

Super pretty! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! The important things are said three times, basically not OOC, sweet (but some parts are really cruel), the article is very good 👍, the sentences are beautiful, the article is coherent, every part is very reasonable, the author is also cute ^-^, but I feel that there are fewer people watching it, the author basically keeps adding a chapter every day, and occasionally makes up for it when not updated, and the reviewers are also cute (o^^o), I am not very good at writing book reviews, this is the first time I have written such a long article, the author's article is really good-looking! ! ! Don't miss it if you pass by (*≧ω≦) Woohoo, I can't let go of Teacher🐒's book. It's really good. I beg the author to publish a new book as soon as possible📖

The content is very sweet. The two young lovers grew up little by little, from looking down on each other at the beginning, to helping each other, to being sweet and sweet. It is a type that I like very much, and the writing is very good, and it deserves five stars!