Fairy Tale: Take a Picture of the Alibaba Maid at the Beginning

The writing so far is really good. I just need to see that the main character in the future should not take the warrior route alone. Most people like the Master Party and focus on the legal system. Since there are many female protagonists, don't leave out female protagonists, especially those in fairy tales. Come on (ง •̀_ Come on, come on and update

It's nice to watch, and the real world starts out a bit cliche but not much. The first copy of Alibaba and the Forty Thieves is now very good to me. It's very interesting. I'll give you five stars if it maintains this level in the future. What's the real-life plot in Chapters 42 to 53? [Smile] I'm not saying it's bad, but it's too cliche. Especially the cold school beauty named Bai Shuangshuang, who later developed into a genius with ice talent and became curious and fond of the protagonist. All it takes is a best friend, Fatty, and everything is complete. It's not that clichés are bad, but the real-life plot in these ten chapters of yours is really boring.

The fairy tale is very well written, but the realistic part is a bit superfluous. It was going well in the front, but suddenly I lost my mind. I knew that I could get all the treasures by killing forty thieves, but I had to make a second trip. I had to let the other party find out. If the other party didn't find out, I couldn't write it, right?

Write less about cities and more about fairy tales. The fairy tales are really nice.

Since there are many female protagonists, don't leave out any female protagonists, especially those from fairy tales. Come on and update

A very well written masterpiece! It would be better if the woman in the story could be brought to reality, I hope it can be realized in the future; the story about traveling through books is very novel and well written; the real world is a bit cliché, but I like to read clichés, it's a really good book After reading around, I found this book to be the best in different world adventure + dungeon style. It's just a bit sad that the heroine in the story can't be brought along.

Happy, a rare masterpiece from Tomato. The fairy tale world written by the author is basically original except for adding some secondary settings, without adding any levels or anything like that. It would be awkward to write a fairy tale without giving any level. I suggest that in the fairy tale world, those named treasures should not be given any level. Just set them as miracles born from nature. Their strength depends on their own efforts and mechanisms. I really want to see an authentic fairy tale world, where the blessing mechanisms and vows are simply unlimited. I remember going to kill the soldier with the tinder box. The original book was very unpleasant. The tinder box was definitely considered orange. There were three dogs in the original book. The bronze dog was definitely the size of a horse, the silver dog was as big as an elephant, and the gold dog was definitely hundreds of meters tall. Being able to run deep into the palace and steal the princess without alerting anyone must be like a shadow that can pass through walls. Kill the king, and the ministers violently rule the country and kill him hard. Collect blessings from various fairy and witch mechanisms, and find various miraculous props to become stronger. I hope it won't be a second-generation fairy tale world setting created by alien gods in Greene's game setting.

After listening to people's advice to eat enough, and based on the great feedback from readers, I have greatly revised Chapters 1 and 2 of Reality, and cut half of the word count to more than 2,000 words. Get to the point. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss][laughing][laughing]

It's very interesting. The plot concept is also good. It's realistic and exciting. I hope it can be updated faster. Thank you. I've completely destroyed those novels that play with mentally retarded jokes. It's hard to write novels well. This book is still very good.

The second version of the fairy tale is very novel. The recommended direction is to make it more enjoyable. The unpleasant parts of the original fairy tale are made fun of the protagonist by completing the tasks. If it can maintain the rhythm and excitement of the first copy, it will surpass 90% of the books. It is recommended not to do it just for the sake of completing the tasks. When it becomes popular, just write a fun article and people will read it.

Surprisingly good, the calls are well rationalized, unlike those so-called dark fairy tales that are popular nowadays, all of them are weird and weird.

Personal opinion, some comments on the author: In fact, the writing is quite good, about 8.5 According to Tomato, but there is a beauty of left and right brains fighting each other. The simulation is basically a standard cool story, and then the reality is a standard Dragon King slap in the face, and then it's a bit slow. Those who like to read cool novels will frown after watching the simulation and see the reality, and those who like to watch the kind of Dragon King pretending to be slapped in the face can't stand it after seeing the simulation. This directly leads to fewer and fewer people reading the book, and there are even less people who follow the update. I see that it is purely because there are very few such subjects.

So far, it's okay. I hope the author won't write some hooky plots where passersby mock the protagonist for the sake of word count.

The author seems to be enlightened when writing fairy tales, but feels like his body has been taken away when he writes about reality.

Hello, author, I have moved your book to another platform. Collections, subscriptions, and rewards are pretty good, but your updates are too slow and I always get pushed! By the way, I want to buy a new car next month, and I hope you can work hard!

Well, there are many girls in the harem, but the description is really good, and the fighting scenes are not bad, but the things given at the beginning are too awesome, which makes it a bit awkward later on? It's a bit relaxing, simple and comfortable, but it is indeed invincible, and it is equivalent to another kind of invincibility, not bad, not bad

I think it's easier to read if I write about fairy tales as a theme, and there's no need to write about reality.

The book looks okay. Although there is no chance to be on the top list due to audience problems, it is still okay to be on the ordinary list. It has not been updated for two days. It seems that the author has cut off. It's okay. Brother cut off will also give you five stars to support you.

The beginning is full of tricks, and you can do it after entering the plot.

No, the reality line is too long. It's best to compress it into one or two chapters. I just skipped through it.

I have read a fairy tale before and it was good. This one is also good. Come on, the author. I also hope that the protagonist can be responsible and open up the worlds he has visited before. He can often go to the worlds he has visited before. People who pick up their pants and leave will be disgusted by us [laughing]

Quickly bring me the wife from the fairy tale or else I will receive 7 stars [angry]

It's quite nice and enjoyable to read. Originally, it might have been a very clichéd plot of pretending to slap people in the face, but later some readers complained about it, so the author changed it and listened to his advice. However, the first world comes with a wife at the beginning, which some people may not like, but when traveling through the dungeon world, you are wearing one, not a soul.

Five stars, at least for now, it's quite interesting, you can check it out

Keep writing, it's good

It seems pretty good so far, but it would be a bit regretful if I could only bring my abilities back with me.

Write more about the fairy tale world and less about the real world. It would be great if there was a small portable world where the heroine and the treasure could be placed.

Just write more fairy tale scripts and less realistic ones.

It's not enough. I mainly like to watch the fairy tale world. I feel that it would be more interesting if the main world were replaced with the ordinary world.

The fairy tale part is well written, but I skipped the realistic part directly. It would be better if the reality is replaced by the ordinary world.