Demon Slayer: Connected to All Worlds, With the Audience as My Backup

This is the movie I want to watch. The original plot has been memorized for a long time. What matters is the reaction of the viewers! Come on, author! I'm really looking forward to how the characters in other worlds will react in the next famous scenes.

A little picture requires a chapter of dialogue. This is written in the year of the monkey and the month of the horse.

The characters watching the movie are basically all three emotions: anger, joy, shock.

It's pretty good to watch, but the problem is, there's too much nonsense. Almost every segment has to include content about characters from other worlds. There's too much talk, and not much in one chapter. It's really, quite speechless (눈‸눈)

It's okay, but there are too many audience reactions, which makes the progress a bit slow.

How can I put it, the writing is not bad, but awe, shock, these words appear too much, every link is awe-inspiring, which makes me a little awe-inspiring towards you, the author 😂 Try to reduce some repeated emotions. People in Hashira and Bankai also experienced great storms, but it is not like Tanjiro becomes awe-inspiring every time he makes progress. It would be good to describe more other emotions or express them in words instead of writing. In addition, this canopy seems to be visible to ghosts (I saw a close-up of the misfortune at the beginning), so the protagonist should make realistic adjustments to some details of the canopy. For example, after Tanjiro went to the mountain where the water pillar cultivator was exposed and was exposed, the personnel should be transferred (including the Nine Pillars Collegiate Committee). At present, I think it has not been transferred. I may watch a section in the future, and then see if I want to continue watching. Anyway, keep it up author, you have some potential, I hope you will get better and better.

I was so anxious to read it. Basically, there is one line in the episode, and then I have to describe the reaction of the people of the world. Written like this, a demon slayer can directly write a thousand chapters. The first part is too long-winded and too procrastinating. Even if there is time travel later, I will not be interested in seeing the exciting parts of this novel. Moreover, the reactions of the people of the world are all decent. According to normal logic, it is still possible. There are a large number of characters who should be indifferent to these, but are interested in light curtains, behind the scenes, or research, but none of these characters exist. The decent characters seem to have no sense of crisis. They all look at the light curtains and angrily shout about family, friendship, and bonds... It is simply outrageous...

The author writes very carefully, and there are many characters watching the movie. The writing is more detailed without excessive abbreviation or shortening of the original text, which will make the progress seem slower. Readers who like fast pace and short dialogues will not be comfortable with it. But there is no way, the author has selected many moviegoers, and it would be strange not to write out the reactions of each moviegoer. However, slow work leads to careful work. I like this rhythm very much. The movie-watching experience and personal opinions of the characters are described in more detail, and the personal characteristics are highlighted. I hope the author will be full of ideas and make more updates.

If you want to talk about a short plot, you have to write all the thoughts of people in other worlds. Can't you write more of the plot and less of other people's thoughts? It's not that you don't write. You can choose a few worlds for each picture and express your thoughts in turn. This author really wants to finish writing them all for him. He would cut off the shit section and smoke a cigarette, and then cut off the shit section and smoke another cigarette. I don't know if you can understand this feeling.

This book is really in line with my taste. I really look forward to the chapter about Big Brother, about butterflies, about beans not afraid of the sun, etc., So please give your best to the author! It must be updated to the end! I will always support the author greatly!