Traveling Through Another World, I Can See the Experience Bar

The plot progresses very smoothly, and a male video finally does not have those uncomfortable descriptions of female sexual desire, from the beginning to the end. For this reason, I will give it a five-star rating. Currently, the game is in a suitable range (not purely invincible), and the male protagonist is also growing a little bit. The only bad thing is that there is too little content at the beginning of the book. I hope the author will update it more. [Almost crying][Almost crying][Sending my heart]

Personally, I feel that the look and feel is very good, especially in Tomato. The author should not pay too much attention to other people's bad reviews. Just stay true to yourself and write slowly according to your own ideas. The author does not look like a veteran. The writing is not too mature. Just grow up slowly. The plot and writing style They all feel pretty good, just a little bit off. The feeling of Cthulhu is there. I read that the author did have a lot of bad reviews, but the early Tomato novels were probably like this. The books that are very popular in Tomato are all better. The writing style is relatively refreshing and there are no strange descriptions. It just feels a bit inferior. The protagonist is also a growth type. He is not invincible from the beginning, because many Tomatoes are fast-food and refreshing novels... The pace is fast, and there are many people who can read it. I can't quite accept this slow pace... The writing style is also a little lacking, and the expression is a bit vague. In fact, I am also looking forward to the author's second book, because the second book is often better, but I suggest the author finish this book. Come on, don't give up, and never forget the original intention! (As a long-time Tomato reader, I would like to give the author a fair evaluation [like] [like] [like])

5 Stars, after all, the writing is really good. Give the author some suggestions. 1. After this matter is over, relax the rhythm appropriately. The overall rhythm is a bit rushed, so it would be better to leave a proper relaxation period, and don't be too tight. 2. I hope that the plot of the stage will not be too lengthy. Writing a large amount of ink in one place without ending will cause fatigue after reading for a long time. The plot can be appropriately intertwined.

The protagonist's attack is very powerful but it doesn't make people feel that it is too high; The atmosphere and rhythm are very tight. For plots with many crises, I personally feel that a tighter rhythm is better. Danger does not give people a chance to breathe. It also made me nervous and immersive. In addition, I think the character of the protagonist is very normal. I see a lot of characters who have a big charisma and "revere ruthlessness". Obviously the protagonist is very humane. A capable person does not have to be ruthless and not care about anyone. He just needs to be able to distinguish the priorities; The current part is quite good, it's not boring, it's growing and developing, and it's not exaggerated to hang up (this is really the key point, the author is very good at writing, and the coordination is very good), I like it, I look forward to it.

If you are full of faintness, you must be full of faintness. The writing is concise and sophisticated, describing a crazy, dark world that needs reason in just a few words. Sorry, two stars are deducted. Compared with the major events that happened, the protagonist has not become stronger after more than 100 chapters, and has no direct combat ability. It makes people feel that there is no hope. At the same time, three major enemies have been clearly established. What we want to see is a protagonist who is not afraid of trouble, can solve problems, and has obvious extraordinary strength, rather than a protagonist who is just on the side of the road. He has to be rescued by others every time and is basically unable to save himself independently.

Forage. Compared with popular novels of the same type, the rhythm, foreshadowing, supporting characters, and environmental description are not as good as others, but there are not many poisonous points, so it is a rare resource. Just keep working hard and maintain the level. (Originally, the ending of the first chapter was quite exciting, but the pacing of the characters in the early stage was average. There was no sense of a peaceful and beautiful life and friends suddenly being wiped out, leaving the protagonist alone, unable to say what he wanted to say. Moreover, the loss of memory by the senior management was also rough in writing, and overall it felt almost meaningless. It was like copying a famous quote in an exam essay, but I couldn't bring it up. I hope this line can be written well in the later stage.) If the first chapter counts as 7 or 8 points, the second chapter of Bronze City can be regarded as the old lady's foot wrap. I don't know what she is doing. It can only reach 6 points, or 5.5.

Good-looking and good-looking, this is the Cthulhu I want. In a desperate world, there is still a glimmer of hope. Just like the Cthulhu myth, mortals can kill gods. They continue to struggle to survive in this desperate world, witness the hidden history of the past, and become the recorders and witnesses of the world. We will remember everything about them.

It's super beautiful, and it's valuable from morning to night. There is no gazing at women's perspective. Female readers really feel comfortable reading it. It doesn't have the feeling of ordinary men's stories. It is more about group portraits. It feels like the protagonist is a witness. Although there is a sense that wherever the protagonist goes, the disaster will happen. However, the disaster already exists, but the protagonist discovers or is ahead of schedule. The night watchman organization is also great, serving the people, and other His organization can also be consistent in dealing with foreign creatures. It seems that there is no backstab now. Everyone has their own small thoughts, but they are also willing to sacrifice their lives when facing strange things. He has a strong sense of the overall situation. The protagonist has experienced a big boss at the beginning and his ability cannot keep up, so he feels like a witness. In fact, the protagonist has done a lot of things later. It's very long and slow, but I really feel that the protagonist has really gone to such a world. It's very immersive, and many of the people are more real. Some of the chapters are longer, and the characters are also very complete. Many people can't accompany the protagonist, so the protagonist is the witness. Most of the time, he meets new people, and then new people. People are leaving one after another, and the protagonist is very gentle. He is not a chaotic protagonist. At first, he is doing it for himself, but after getting to know many night watchmen, he also starts to be a person. From the initial distrust to trust, there is a process. This kind of protagonist is better. On the premise of ensuring his own safety and survival, he can protect others. But it feels like the protagonist's journey has been too difficult. Can this empire still survive? We all have this question, but other organizations that work independently are also willing to fight with their lives on major issues of right and wrong, which is not found in other novels. And there are no slaps in the face, ridicule, or those plots. Villains cannot be said to be villains, that is, they all have their own ideas. Whether they are fighting for benefits or other things, they all have their own ideas and then implement them.

The book is very interesting and has the feel of a best friend. Although the author promises that there will be no heroine, the alchemist girl is really in danger recently. He inexplicably spends a lot of money to save her, without saying anything about her, and even saying that he would regret not saving her. He's obviously a person who doesn't want to meddle in other people's business... Well... There's no ambiguity at the moment, but I don't know if it's a bit sensitive or there are signs of it, so I'll wait and see.

The writing is really good. In addition to the author's love for collecting points, the horror of the system, the bonds of teammates, and even the small conflicts between different organizations and fighting side by side in front of the enemy are all described in detail and deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Even the supporting characters are plump, and there is no common problem with male authors portraying female characters. There are a few places where AI polishing may have been used (possibly), but overall the flaws are not hidden, and it is highly recommended. It's confirmed. Starting from Chapter 130, AI has been used extensively to write the text. Of course, it can be seen that there are drafts and then fed to AI, and then the text is revised by hand. Although there are already a lot of AI articles in this era, the first is that the paragraphs are too fragmented, which affects reading, the second is that the characters become flat and silent, and the third is that they are disrespectful to other authors and works. I usually give one or two stars to AI articles, but this one is really well written. In the Ke world, it is rare for the protagonist and his teammates to insist on justice and protection in despair. Reading a lot of people's reviews is not satisfying enough. If you're looking for cool articles, don't read Kexi, okay? This article is not a criticism of the Pique genre, but a bit of the core of the genre, in a serious style. At the same time, the protagonist actually has a lot of highlights, and it's always fun to cheat. In just six months, he has surpassed others for decades. So, don't let such a good work be ruined by AI.

It's a good book. The content of the story is interesting and the logic of the main plot is clear. The protagonist does not have the arrogance and superiority of a time-traveler. There are hooks but the opening is just right. It is not the kind that always hangs around and remains unchanged. The protagonist has his own growth and changes and is not static. I just don't know why the score is a bit low. Anyway, I personally think this is a book worth reading.

As a long-time bookworm, I rate this book really well. Although it is in the same genre as mystery, the writing is also remarkable. If the author didn't collapse later, it could really reach the height of mystery.

The setting is very good, and the plot is also interesting. The overall score is 9. It is the same type as Mystery, but more Chinese-style. But I don't know why the score of Chapter 200 is so low, 7.9. Some of the short stories have more than this score. Is there some friction between the author and his colleagues? [What], please give me a five-star review to support it [please update]

A very good gram novel, systematic but not brainless. The story is very rich and delicate, with a lot of foreshadowing. From a series of related events, you slowly discover that you are in the whirlpool arranged by various forces. Sometimes you will feel powerless, get hurt, and will be saved by others. It is a type that grows slowly. The protagonist has great value. It has a very upright outlook, is kind and has a sense of justice. It has not been driven crazy or blackened by unspeakable things. It has rich group characters. There are currently two big stories in the storyline. The second story is not finished yet. It feels like the world view is very grand. It is still in a relatively early stage. There are still many storylines behind the content that have not been unfolded, which is not enough to watch.

I have been reading novels on Tomato since the second grade of junior high school. I am currently a junior and I am a little experienced bookworm. I feel that the plot is on the same level as Zhan Shen. I don't know why Chapter 203 only has a 7.9 Rating. I think this one should be higher than 9. The only difference is that it is not as brainless as Zhan Shen and relies on various plug-ins and foreign aid.

It's a very good book, with a smooth plot and good character background settings. It's a book worth reading. I feel that the current rating is low, and it could be higher. The only bad thing is that I can't get enough of it! Although there are constant updates, I hope I can keep writing at this level!

It's great. The pace of the article is moderate. It's very smooth to read in one go. It's not difficult to understand. It's not as obscure and difficult to read as some Christian articles. The author's writing style is very good, and it has a medieval atmosphere. But there is one thing that I am confused about. The big world does not feel completely spread out. Is it just the empire and one human country or multiple countries? The map does not feel big. Maybe I didn't see much or missed it. In short, this is a novel that should not appear on Tomato. Also, only an author with such writing style is worthy of writing a heroine, although this is supposed to be a cp-free novel.

It's really good-looking, the setting is interesting, and the plot is well-written. However, the protagonist's abilities are a bit slow to upgrade, and the big event of the Deep Sea Church drags on for a long time, and the feeling is a bit lacking. But overall, it's a good novel. Come on.

The male protagonist has a smart and cautious character, the plot is logically self-consistent, the pace is a little slow (I find this pace quite comfortable), the writing is good, and the various foreshadowings are effective, and I'll wait for Tomato. The biggest flaw is that the gold finger values ​​are filled in with feet in the early stage. Ignoring this does not actually affect reading. The author should be more careful when writing the data, because this kind of intuitive value greatly affects people's viewing experience. What's written next? The protagonist's character has changed to the Holy Father? For a woman who is inexplicable and has a bad mouth, the risks are no longer considered, and the motivation for the behavior is gone. In a word, I am passionate. No matter what the cost, I will be unspeakable just to take away a woman. Who are you touching here? You can only move yourself😅 With your background setting, can the protagonist be more thoughtful and consider the consequences? And you spent 800 points to protect that alchemy genius girl, do you have to write like this? If you don't want to write a story without a heroine, just open a harem generously. Don't sell yourself like a sheep. When you see a woman, you don't have a brain and don't care about gains and losses. Just be passionate and I will protect her. What do you want to do?

It's quite interesting. The world framework is the traditional Cthulhu, but the plot is particularly excellent. It's a good Cthulhu article, and the character portrayal is also good. But it is not a cool novel. The protagonist is more of a witness, someone who experiences the story. The protagonist is not very strong. This is the look and feel of the first story.

Crusu + experience bar + extraordinary The plot is well written, but the male protagonist encounters too many things and has almost no room to breathe. There is also a male protagonist who is not very appetizing and has nothing to do with cautious flow. With his character and physique and the need to increase the experience bar of being exposed to taboos, he is destined to always be involved in various incidents.

It's very well written. I'm a bookworm. I don't like to see the whole world revolve around the protagonist. The supporting characters and villains can only roll their eyes and open their mouths in surprise. They have no thoughts to please the protagonist and let the protagonist do whatever he wants. The supporting characters in this book are flesh and blood. It's good.

Good product: Start with a strange dream, experience value system. The writing of "The Battle of Cthulhu" is very good, the writing style is average, and it is very refreshing for those who are tired of reading cool articles on Tomato. But the strength growth is too slow, and it would be too monotonous before a big growth occurs after the special event at the beginning. To sum up: Not recommended for readers who like to read cool articles. Readers with quality requirements can read it.

It's very good-looking. There are no shortcomings so far. The plot may be relatively slow, because it seems that the second copy is about 1 million words now, and the strength of the protagonist has not changed much. But as long as I can continue to finish the story, come on. I suggest that if you don't like the slow pace, don't read it. You won't like it after reading it, and I still want to leave a negative review. It was the first time I read such a slow-burning book. Fortunately, the author wrote well and didn't make me feel that the pace was too slow. But when I looked at the word count, I suddenly realized that there were already a lot of words. It was only the second copy, which made me a little shocked. Moreover, I felt that the world view was relatively large, and I didn't know how long it would take to make the protagonist stronger.

Good book, the Night Watchmen in this world is the weakest I have ever seen. I once read one and it directly erased 300 years of history and a certain region. The Headquarters Night Watch had a history based on economic conditions, product transportation, personnel vacancies, and the use of forbidden objects. The protagonist was found as soon as he appeared, and then it was unilateral. I said the situation, you nodded. Finally, it was determined that the old days had erased a piece of history. At present, I have followed the large army and looked at it. First of all, the huge empire does not even have a few high-level professionals. The protagonist is too weak. In fact, he has nothing but history. A piece of the empire's territory was lost in front, and it has not been investigated for nearly a month. Moreover, it was mentioned before that someone picked up a fragment of the map. This is completely The ancient gods have lost their strong character and the area has been wiped out, but even ordinary people can feel that there was something here before. Furthermore, the Bronze City and the Maginot Line of Defense, the empire did not even send a few second- and third-level roadside for support, and the exploration of the underground actually requires the protagonist to explore by a roadside. Can't we just clear out all the guardians? There aren't that many people fighting in the inner city, and there is also the Erudite Tower. Are the Night Watchmen sitting and drinking tea with no high-end combat power?

It's quite good to watch, and the Cthulhu world view is relatively complete. Although I don't like to be arrogant, but I have to say that the protagonist is calm, smart, not talkative, and a very reliable leadership talent [Like] [Like] The shortcomings are that the author did not check carefully when using the AI, occasionally words that should not appear [face covering] appear, and other characters' personalities are not obvious, but ignoring these, this book is of high quality. Well, if you want to watch the invincible flow, the upgrading of cool literature, slap in the face and abuse of vegetables, the weak and the strong, kill the virgin first, the way to death... Etc., You can click ❌, this is really not it The shortcomings are also obvious. AI writing has a common problem, the characters' behavior patterns are similar, and the overall control is insufficient. Some plots can lack white space and omissions, but they are all written very carefully. Therefore, when the imagination of the later novels is not attractive enough, it is easy to get cold. I hope this can last longer.

To be honest, the background setting is really good and feels good, but it does have shortcomings. It is not very exciting. Some values ​​are occasionally filled in incorrectly. In fact, the protagonist's upgrade speed is not slow, but due to the plot, the protagonist still feels that his combat power is suppressed. He is either pushed by his own superiors or pushed by the general trend to face opponents far beyond his ability, or is crushed by level or quantity. It is simply There is no time for development. After all, reading novels usually brings the perspective of the protagonist. As a result, the reader takes a look and sees that his opponent is crushing him. When he sees his superiors, they feel that they are too weak to protect themselves and have no time to take care of themselves. It feels aggrieved and helpless. I hope that the protagonist can get out of the current low period as soon as possible and be able to control his own destiny to a certain extent! Generally speaking, the world view of this novel is quite well constructed. Please give the author a five-star rating to encourage him.

To put it simply: Advantages: 1. The plot has good fluency, and some descriptions are delicate and can resonate with people. 2. There is a sense of mystery in the strange/taboo description, which makes people interested in reading (it is a bit of a Riddler) 3. The introduction part in gray and white is detailed, and it is obvious that the information has been consulted (or is it assisted by AI?) 4. The development of the grand worldview is relatively reasonable and stable, and does not collapse like other books. Disadvantages: 1. There are many typos and typos 2. The protagonist's combat power increases too slowly, just like Pinduoduo's knife attack 3. The experience display is too vague. Although it has been improved, it is still generally insufficient. Except for reason, the other experience items are not displayed at the current large level, which may easily cause slight reading difficulties. For the time being [laughing evilly]

It's a good book, and there are no flaws in the logic of the plot. Although some descriptions are still a bit conventional, and the summary is a bit stereotyped, but there are actually many places later that make people see the fear of Cthulhu's world view, but the old god's personal participation in the planning is a bit downgraded. I feel that many times the cults in Cthulhu are the wishful thinking of believers, and are dispensable to the gods. The combat power of this novel is really strong, but the atmosphere, world view and characterization are very interesting as long as you have the right appetite. It is very enjoyable to read on the radio. It is not the kind of crude "Ke Tide is coming". The author has polished it carefully. Random Thoughts: I think the slow pace is normal. In the Ke world, the existence of the gods themselves is taboo. Ants are incapable of peeking and will explode at a glance. The protagonist's behavior itself is going against the will of nature and is beyond human beings. So I think there is nothing to say about the rhythm. It is better to match the radio waves. Everything is bland, to be honest, it's pretty good-looking, but this is not a cool article that comes just for fun. You can leave now. The world view is fascinating, the writing is concise, and the characters are rich, okay? Then I have read more than 300 chapters, and I want to speak. This world is a huge grassroots team. Everything in the empire is light, risky, and ordered at the critical moment. Various departments are intrigues, and they will start to dexterously seek death if they are not paying attention. When something goes wrong, they will start to disappear and gently touch their own giant redwood trees. If the night watchman wants to control it, let the night watchman become a Brazilian strawberry. You are not allowed to drink water! (Taylor Swift's meme) Okay, is that what's sealed below? Yes, this is a very sensitive issue. There are things sealed below, and I have to carry out my own life of committing suicide. Do I need to give you a cow if I commit suicide? Yes, although we have to deal with taboos, we don't care about the consequences. The night watchman has to wipe our butts. Everything is a tightrope. We have no choice but to do nothing. Oh my god, the 100th time of the Ascension Society talks about "It's duty to seek death, and what you can't do is heresy."

This is the only novel that I have updated to the latest this year. It is well written and the plot progresses very smoothly. I read it in one sitting. There are no highlights, no heroine, and no emotional description, which is good. Just focus on the construction of the world and the growth of the protagonist. It is a victory to continue writing what has been written. Come on, keep updating!