Reborn in Detective Conan, I Write Kindaichi Cases That Come True?

I read the comments in the comment section and then read the book. The inconsistency in the fight between the left and right brains and the protagonist's fear of Conan are relatively big problems, but other parts are okay. I can only say that the choice of the subject matter is attractive and it can increase my score.

The expansion, plug-ins and some behaviors can only be said to be sparse and ordinary, nothing very surprising. But the author's narrative text made me very comfortable reading it. 🤔 To be honest, as a veteran born in the 1990s, I started reading novels with physical books. Especially in the later period, I read finished published novels that were published in Xinhua and reviewed by senior editors. Therefore, I often feel a little uncomfortable when reading online articles. Originally, for online articles, editors will not help review manuscripts, so the final quality control of the article basically depends entirely on the author himself. As for readers, even if some people read a lot and feel that there is something wrong, their expressive ability may not be able to express it accurately. In addition, in Internet articles these days, both authors and readers are increasingly concerned about settings and gimmicks, but they are increasingly disdainful of narrative expression. This leads to the fact that the creativity of many themes is very good, and the author's conception is also good, but the quality of the writing, his narration, and his expression are really a mess, which can be very uncomfortable to watch. Especially in the past two years, many online writers have studied Japanese light novels and relied on dialogue to promote the plot. However, those who cannot write dialogue well and only know how to write questions and answers can forget it. Some even just write their inner thoughts. It is the most poisonous thing to describe directly using the so-called inner voice and the author's narration. Therefore, apart from anything else, it is worth reading just for the first few chapters and the author's very comfortable narrative text. There is a lot of plot missing in the middle. I don't know why. Moon Shadow Island and the like are mentioned frequently, but there is no foreshadowing or any interlude. But how should I put it? After the plot of Didan High School ended, apart from the strong narrative ability, everything else was lacking. In the case of Zhizi Village, you must first make it clear that the protagonist is not doing it for gaming, nor for anything else. I just want to stop the murderer, save people, and prevent the trick I wrote from being used in the murder. Then the protagonist's behavior has no logic at all. You know exactly who the murderer is, who the murderer's target is, and what methods he will use to attack. You even think about controlling him by revising the novel. So if you really want to stop that episode, just block him. Even if you know the complete method, it is not difficult to search for evidence. The ability to control may not be enough to stop the murderer, but it can allow him to leave a lot of objective evidence that he might not have left behind. In this situation where information is one-way and transparent, it is very simple to deal with a helpless teenage girl, okay? Where did that fear and despair come from? Those who didn't know better would have thought that the person standing opposite you was the TV version of Hannibal. Then the overemphasis on Conan is a bit outrageous. The most powerful that Kudo Shinichi could do. In fact, there are only two left, the tranquilizer gun and the football. Or he can use his father and voice changer to let the police interfere with your actions, but this interference is limited, especially if you have a certain social background. Those of you who don't know what you wrote may think that Shinichi Kudo is Jack and Will in the TV series Hannibal, two FBI criminology experts who are capable and powerful.

It can be seen that the author is very serious in writing, but is it too smooth? The protagonist's work in the novel is too smooth. Whether the work can be popular or not, it still needs to cater to the market. It is meaningless to be directly praised by others.

It's really good, both romantic and artistic, the ultimate darkness embodies the ultimate light, the tragedy and beauty of human beings

I just want to say that Kudo Shinichi and his father Kudo Yusaku are also mystery novelists, and the novels have also been copied to commit crimes. Is Conan a little too sensitive?

It's all very good, but your skills are not perfect and you can't write wonderfully. (You can also consider changing to a more serious platform. What I watch on this platform are basically funny ones with a lower reading threshold)

When I read it, I always felt that the author's mental state was abnormal 🤦 🤭

Very well written, keep up the good work and don't care about other people's comments

How are 222 and 223 the same?

It feels really amazing to watch it with my mind free, and I get goosebumps [I learned it] [I learned it]