Zhan Shen: I Own the Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda

It's pretty good among Zhanshen fanfics. I don't know why the score is so low at over 6 points. There were a lot of logical loopholes, typos and sentence fragmentation, and dialogues that made me angry. Even though it scored over 8 points, a lot of people said the writing was good. The setting of this book is quite novel. Not to mention how good the writing is, at least it's comfortable to watch. The assistant is refreshing. The protagonist is assigned to Shangjing, which is not like other books. He started like the same old routine as a classmate of Cangnan No. 2 Middle School and then was assigned back to Cangnan due to a miracle. I give it five stars for this alone. Come on, the author. Also, I think it was the label issue that persuaded some people to quit. When I first started reading the romance label, I thought the protagonist was a woman. What kind of romance was it and I quit immediately? If you can't change the label, see if you can change the introduction and explain it.

I can't imagine how powerful the protagonist's ability is during the battle between gods. It will definitely look good. Really super pretty

Very good, recommended! There is no CP and two male protagonists in the story, it is all about teammate friendship, but it is very easy to fight. The character of the protagonist is very likable, and many of the tasks and descriptions are not obtrusive, very smooth, a little cute, and often make some mean things, and it feels full of life. It made up for a lot of regrets, and it didn't hurt at all. The protagonist and his teammates have the kind of friendship that hurts each other by fighting with each other. This description feels quite appropriate. There is no emotional line, not a single one. Except for Xiaonan Lengxuan, everything else has been removed. I feel that this is good. There are no other abrupt emotional lines added, which is very good.

The subject matter is quite novel. It would be better if the dialogue with the system could be deleted a little bit (T_T) Come on, I hope the author can stick to it

This book is one of my favorite books since I have read so many God-Slaying fanfictions. Compared with other books, the protagonist is more "lively", and he provides many scenes that make people laugh. Very beautiful, highly recommended

Beautiful and beautiful ~ I found a treasure trove ~

Come on, author, don't let it end badly [Sending my heart]

It's great, a very novel direction. Unlike other similar articles, the support can only be a nanny or control. That would be too monotonous.

It's beautiful, this setting is so handsome [Sending my heart]

Oh yeah~oh yeah~oh yeah~

It's pretty good. Oh my gosh, I thought the protagonist was a woman when I watched it. But then the snake girl appeared later and she turned out to be a man. Maybe it's my stereotype of the Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda😱

It looks good. Come on, I hope there won't be a female protagonist. Sorry, I didn't read the introduction carefully. Please give the author a big boost and don't stop updating.

Update more often, just these few pictures each time. Not enough. Please send the author two more copies.

The setting is very novel, the plot and the characters are very interesting, and the overall situation is very good, and it looks good.

It's very beautiful, keep it up!

The content is quite new

It's ok, I personally think it's ok, pretty good, (◦˙▽˙◦)

Overall the writing was pretty good and the plot was just okay.

The author writes very well, and the story is very interesting and novel! !

Shen Yue and his system are perfect partners. One tries his best to protect the host, and the other buys the right to destroy the system so that the system no longer has the threat of extinction. This wave of two-way running is so touching [love] [love] [love] Shen Yue is usually carefree, but he is never vague when it comes to business. The external Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda is the best assistant in the world and has saved many people. It makes up for the many regrets in the original work. At the end, his mission is a complete success and the foreshadowing is also revealed. The process and ending of the first mission, as well as the reason for the second reopening and the new transaction, the logic is closed [Like][Like][Like]

I love the dual male protagonists, if you don't, please don't watch it.

It looks great and I love it [sending heartfelt messages] [blowing kisses]

Five stars, super beautiful

Super, super, super good-looking [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Good-looking, funny and funny

It's pretty, I like it better

Beautiful and highly recommended! ! !

Author, I remember you wrote two things in one place good looking This is really good and touching. The score is low because there are few people who rate it, but it is really the best for beginners. The writing style is not childish at all [laughing][laughing] Good reviews, good reviews

Why is the rating so low? I've read a lot of God-Slayer fanfics, and I think this one is my favorite.