Reborn as a Short-Lived Cannon Fodder, I Rise to the Top of the Cultivation World with the Villain!

Generally speaking, it is a good fairy tale. The current development seems to be quite satisfactory, but the emotional line between the protagonists is very good. From understanding their feelings to expressing their love for each other, the development is fast and reasonable. The handling of events in the article is also relatively fast, and it does not drag on for more than ten chapters. Overall, it is a good and unmistakable article about cultivating immortals (PS: The author also writes very quickly. I took a look at the homepage and when I was commenting, not only did I update three pictures of this book, but I also updated another chapter)

It's very interesting. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of traditional upgrading-style two-male protagonist who cultivates immortality, and the emotional line is also very easy to connect. This kind of dependence and mutual bond is much better than just upgrading and fighting monsters. The only shortcoming is that it is not finished. I hope the author will update more [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The author's writing is really beautiful. The young lovers are cute and sweet. This kind of ambiguous feeling is drunk and delicious! But it's a pity that it's still being serialized. If falling in love with serialized articles is a mistake, then I'm totally wrong [shy] Come on, author, I will keep pursuing it [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's super, super good-looking. I like this one better than another book about cultivating immortals. It has a complete world view and a smooth plot, and the emotional line is also well written. Attacker and Shou are people with the same characteristics. Attacker is very powerful. After being betrayed by his master and losing all his cultivation, he quickly planned an escape route. He stayed rational and did not fall into the devil's path. After his meridians were broken and he could not cultivate the path, he decisively chose a future. A path that no one has ever taken can be said to be a desperate one, and the teachings on Shou's cultivation are really charming. Although Shou is weak in the early stage, he still works hard to practice and keep up with the pace of the attack. He is not willing to be the one holding back. The two support each other. They are very orthodox upgrade-style fairy texts. They are really well written. If you keep this rhythm, you will definitely become popular. Please give it a try [Sending Hearts]

It's not bad, it's just a lot of classic routines, there are more than a hundred chapters, and there are three times where the protagonist buys things and the supporting characters want to grab them. There is also the fact that the protagonist has received several opportunities that belong to the villain. I feel that this is similar to that of Ye, in that they both take things from others, but the difference lies in whether they are the protagonist or the villain. The writing style should be clearer and the vocabulary should be accurate. Seeing the smile that is currently used to describe Gong, as well as the word "every man is innocent and carries the treasure with him", my god it has appeared several times. For people like us who watch it together, we are really tired of it. In addition, the same plot once or twice is okay, but any more will really not be good. It's not working anymore, I've suffered a lot, and maybe I still need to grow up. But I can still read it, but the books are running out, which makes me feel uncomfortable. I jumped horizontally repeatedly at three and four stars, maybe three and a half.

I said, if this book is okay, the author must stick to it! First of all, as for the plot, although it is not too exciting, it still has a main line and logic. (The plot is not exciting mainly because I have been reading the novel for more than seven years. This is not too outstanding, but it is still remarkable). In terms of characterization, the author has some strength. Although this character design is very popular, the popular character design is not that important. The key is whether it can write its own characteristics. At present, the characteristics are not very obvious, but the writing is still three-dimensional and realistic. For example, Xiao Luo is the image of a sincere young man. The author gave him a golden finger, but it was not illogical. It would be better to write about his first battle. Although he defeated the enemy, he was in embarrassment. Senior Brother Qi's portrayal was also good. When he found out that he accidentally injured Xiao Luo, his first reaction was not to hope that he would stay, but to hope that he would leave so that he would not hurt him again. The villain is hateful but has some brains, which makes the plot a little more intense and exciting. The author also buried several foreshadowings. It can be said that it is a good novel, but! Some aspects are quite satisfactory, I hope the author can write more brilliantly. Come on!

It's very beautiful, and the author's writing style is also very good. I hope the two protagonists can level up faster, so that the person who comes through the time (who can't type, hehe) will die early, and he will be so angry! But overall it's very good-looking [shy][shy] seems to have a deputy cp.

It's so good. Come on, author, please update quickly [Adore][Adore][Adore][Flowing Kiss][Flying Kiss][Flying Kiss] It's heartbreaking and I look forward to the following plot. Xiaohan and Yueyue will grow up quickly!

It's a fairy tale that I like very much, with two male protagonists who are growth-oriented, but it's not frustrating to read, and there will be a little pain in the front. The plot is very good, the writing is good, and the author is very careful about the background construction. There is no misunderstanding or bloody love between the two protagonists. After realizing that they like each other, they naturally get together. (｡´-ω)(ω-｀｡) The proportion of plot and emotion is about 73, but you can tell from the occasional details that the two people love each other, and I think this is enough. The way the two get along is very natural and gentle, a long-lasting love with a touch of rental house literature. (.'▽'.)♡ And the most satisfying thing is that I have a small pet peeve, which is the long description of the protagonist's appearance, but this article does not. [Shy][Shy][Shy] I just want to know the general type of the two protagonists. Dedicating a large space to describe their appearance often makes me have the illusion that the protagonist is a vase. Also, I saw someone said earlier that she is more of a spoiled wife. Well, everyone has a different understanding of a spoiled wife. I think the protagonist Shou is a bright and shy person. The protagonist, Gong, is a very gentle person with a sense of justice. [Laughing][laughing] There is also a dragon. I guess that dragon and the ice phoenix are a pair of deputy CPs. The dragon is a bit annoying at the beginning, but it will get better later on. The only drawback is that the description of the supporting characters is a bit flat, which is innocuous, but I still hope the author can enrich it. Also, I would like to ask the author if he has considered adding a more attractive female character in the future, because among the currently known female characters, only one is okay, and the others are not very good to the senses. Of course, if there is any offense, I apologize (๑´0`๑) This is my first time to write a book review. The author writes really well. I love you (*'ε`*)

Tied [laughs][laughs], I like to see this kind of protagonist upgrade step by step, double power! ! ! There are thrilling and dangerous moments, but also a warm and stable life. It made me laugh all the time [laughs] and the subject matter is also very attractive to me. Revenge flow, the subject of time travel has the same hatred as the protagonist of the original novel, and together he creates obstacles for the original traveler.