Transform Yourself into a Short-Lived Cannon Fodder and Villain to Reach the Top of the World of Immortality!

Generally speaking, it is a good fairy tale. The current development seems to be quite satisfactory, but the emotional line between the protagonists is very good. From understanding their feelings to expressing their love for each other, the development is fast and reasonable. The handling of events in the article is also relatively fast, and it does not drag on for more than ten chapters. Overall, it is a good and unmistakable article about cultivating immortals (PS: The author also writes very quickly. I took a look at the homepage and when I was commenting, not only did I update three pictures of this book, but I also updated another chapter)

It's very interesting. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of traditional upgrading-style two-male protagonist who cultivates immortality, and the emotional line is also very easy to connect. This kind of dependence and mutual bond is much better than just upgrading and fighting monsters. The only shortcoming is that it is not finished. I hope the author will update more [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The author's writing is really beautiful. The young lovers are cute and sweet. This kind of ambiguous feeling is drunk and delicious! But it's a pity that it's still being serialized. If falling in love with serialized articles is a mistake, then I'm totally wrong [shy] Come on, author, I will keep pursuing it [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's super, super good-looking. I like this one better than another book about cultivating immortals. It has a complete world view and a smooth plot, and the emotional line is also well written. Attacker and Shou are people with the same characteristics. Attacker is very powerful. After being betrayed by his master and losing all his cultivation, he quickly planned an escape route. He stayed rational and did not fall into the devil's path. After his meridians were broken and he could not cultivate the path, he decisively chose a future. A path that no one has ever taken can be said to be a desperate one, and the teachings on Shou's cultivation are really charming. Although Shou is weak in the early stage, he still works hard to practice and keep up with the pace of the attack. He is not willing to be the one holding back. The two support each other. They are very orthodox upgrade-style fairy texts. They are really well written. If you keep this rhythm, you will definitely become popular. Please give it a try [Sending Hearts]

It's not bad, it's just a lot of classic routines, there are more than a hundred chapters, and there are three times where the protagonist buys things and the supporting characters want to grab them. There is also the fact that the protagonist has received several opportunities that belong to the villain. I feel that this is similar to that of Ye, in that they both take things from others, but the difference lies in whether they are the protagonist or the villain. The writing style should be clearer and the vocabulary should be accurate. Seeing the smile that is currently used to describe Gong, as well as the word "every man is innocent and carries the treasure with him", my god it has appeared several times. For people like us who watch it together, we are really tired of it. In addition, the same plot once or twice is okay, but any more will really not be good. It's not working anymore, I've suffered a lot, and maybe I still need to grow up. But I can still read it, but the books are running out, which makes me feel uncomfortable. I jumped horizontally repeatedly at three and four stars, maybe three and a half.

I said, if this book is okay, the author must stick to it! First of all, as for the plot, although it is not too exciting, it still has a main line and logic. (The plot is not exciting mainly because I have been reading the novel for more than seven years. This is not too outstanding, but it is still remarkable). In terms of characterization, the author has some strength. Although this character design is very popular, the popular character design is not that important. The key is whether it can write its own characteristics. At present, the characteristics are not very obvious, but the writing is still three-dimensional and realistic. For example, Xiao Luo is the image of a sincere young man. The author gave him a golden finger, but it was not illogical. It would be better to write about his first battle. Although he defeated the enemy, he was in embarrassment. Senior Brother Qi's portrayal was also good. When he found out that he accidentally injured Xiao Luo, his first reaction was not to hope that he would stay, but to hope that he would leave so that he would not hurt him again. The villain is hateful but has some brains, which makes the plot a little more intense and exciting. The author also buried several foreshadowings. It can be said that it is a good novel, but! Some aspects are quite satisfactory, I hope the author can write more brilliantly. Come on!

It's very beautiful, and the author's writing style is also very good. I hope the two protagonists can level up faster, so that the person who comes through the time (who can't type, hehe) will die early, and he will be so angry! But overall it's very good-looking [shy][shy] seems to have a deputy cp.

It's so good. Come on, author, please update quickly [Adore][Adore][Adore][Flowing Kiss][Flying Kiss][Flying Kiss] It's heartbreaking and I look forward to the following plot. Xiaohan and Yueyue will grow up quickly!

It's a fairy tale that I like very much, with two male protagonists who are growth-oriented, but it's not frustrating to read, and there will be a little pain in the front. The plot is very good, the writing is good, and the author is very careful about the background construction. There is no misunderstanding or bloody love between the two protagonists. After realizing that they like each other, they naturally get together. (｡´-ω)(ω-｀｡) The proportion of plot and emotion is about 73, but you can tell from the occasional details that the two people love each other, and I think this is enough. The way the two get along is very natural and gentle, a long-lasting love with a touch of rental house literature. (.'▽'.)♡ And the most satisfying thing is that I have a small pet peeve, which is the long description of the protagonist's appearance, but this article does not. [Shy][Shy][Shy] I just want to know the general type of the two protagonists. Dedicating a large space to describe their appearance often makes me have the illusion that the protagonist is a vase. Also, I saw someone said earlier that she is more of a spoiled wife. Well, everyone has a different understanding of a spoiled wife. I think the protagonist Shou is a bright and shy person. The protagonist, Gong, is a very gentle person with a sense of justice. [Laughing][laughing] There is also a dragon. I guess that dragon and the ice phoenix are a pair of deputy CPs. The dragon is a bit annoying at the beginning, but it will get better later on. The only drawback is that the description of the supporting characters is a bit flat, which is innocuous, but I still hope the author can enrich it. Also, I would like to ask the author if he has considered adding a more attractive female character in the future, because among the currently known female characters, only one is okay, and the others are not very good to the senses. Of course, if there is any offense, I apologize (๑´0`๑) This is my first time to write a book review. The author writes really well. I love you (*'ε`*)

Tied [laughs][laughs], I like to see this kind of protagonist upgrade step by step, double power! ! ! There are thrilling and dangerous moments, but also a warm and stable life. It made me laugh all the time [laughs] and the subject matter is also very attractive to me. Revenge flow, the subject of time travel has the same hatred as the protagonist of the original novel, and together he creates obstacles for the original traveler.

Five-star praise, great. I was in a book shortage and saw your novel. Although the writing is a bit delicate, it is super beautiful. There are some details that I think need to be dealt with. For example, the jade pendant. After the protagonist entered the space, the jade pendant fell out directly. It felt so dangerous. If the protagonist is upgraded in the future, the space can enter the sea of ​​time (I forgot which two words are). There are also two male protagonists. I hope they will always be so sweet. Five-star praise, thank you very much.

I haven't finished it yet, but it is also a very good article about cultivating immortality. Among the few casual articles I have read, this one is already considered very good, and it is a long one. The author writes very quickly, so you don't have to worry about running out of articles to read. It is mainly about the plot line, mixed with emotional lines. I compare it to What I like the most is that the protagonist of this article has a golden finger, but not particularly old, and has a growth process. It is very comfortable to read. The relationship between the young couple is sweet, and it warms my heart. The two-way relationship is the best. I cried, and the deputy CP is also very sweet! One of them really hit my XP mark. Bingshan should be paired with Chatterbox Heng Heng. I'll lock these young couples to death! But there is one thing. I don't know if this is the first book written by the author. There is a big problem with nonsense. One of the things I mentioned before is mentioned again after turning one or two pages. Sometimes it is repeated multiple times, which makes me a little uncomfortable. Apart from this, there are no particularly big problems. I haven't seen any red flags yet. All in all, it is a very good article on cultivating immortals. I highly recommend that anyone who is interested read it!

I read two hundred chapters in one go and I like it very much so far. The relationship between the main character and the male protagonist develops smoothly without any delay. There are no misunderstandings. They understand each other perfectly. After expressing their feelings, they kiss when they need to. Hahahaha. I like every pair of deputy CPs, especially our Mr. Ao, who is both sad and happy, and is a great life treasure. I hope his wife wakes up soon and stops eating the protagonist's dog food every day [laughing]. There is also the villain Ye Chen who promotes the development of the plot and should be offline soon. After all, the mysterious old man is a new boss. Finally, I would like to thank the author for his great spiritual food [love]

I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is neither coward nor inferior. The fluctuations in emotions are handled very naturally and the plot is smooth. If you want to read a fairy tale, you can give it a try. Author, please keep up the good work and update. Come back again during the winter vacation [Thoughts]

It's so good. The relationship between the two people is gradual. Except for the slow update speed, the quality assurance is that each chapter has a lot of content. There is no annoying plot. It beats 90% of the bad persimmon novels. The career line is also very good. Anyway, it pokes me. Come on, author.

It's a very smooth upgrade flow, with all the elements, and the protagonist's relationship is natural. If it can be written with a normal update frequency, the rating will rise steadily. I hope that the subsequent plot will not only be busy fighting monsters, but also write more emotional lines, and the villains can also be more self-inflicted. After all, they don't seem to have brains, and they can't just "suppress" the protagonist. Moreover, it seems that the protagonist's appearance is rarely described in this book, but it can be written appropriately. In fact, I jump directly to the first ten chapters of the general upgrade stream. Basically, the protagonist is humiliated, humiliated and humiliated. I don't want to read it. However, in the early stage of this book, the protagonist is very smart and hugs the protagonist's thighs without making people feel stupid. The characters of the two protagonists are well established, and even if there is little description of their appearance, it is very vivid to think about.

How can I say that the pace of the first 20 chapters was a little slow at first, and the training was a bit too detailed, but it became different by chapter 30. At first, I complained about Shou, thinking that he was just the aura of the protagonist, but later I discovered his resilience. How can I say that I hope Shou's image is more plump. Compared with the generals, it is still a little thin. Overall, the senses are good. I admire the author for three chapters in one day, and he has a long flow of upgrading to immortality. , Or dual male protagonists are too rare in Tomato. I have seen many of them before and bought the copyright. More or less, I have seen it before. Although the routine is similar, I like to watch people hunting for treasure [smirk] [snicker] [snicker]. The author did not handle it well in some places. For example, the dragon's words are not very appropriate in some places. There are some logical loopholes. I forgot what they were from the previous review, but it is not a big problem. Come on! Yes, yes, yes, I remembered about Shou's time travel. I mentioned earlier that his soul is incomplete, and he is most likely the original owner. This setting is perfect. But when the author wrote, he sometimes called it his parents' relic, and sometimes he said the original person. Please change it, and you can add cognition later. There is a cognitive barrier that hinders the two souls from becoming completely one. Later, Shou discovered it and changed it. Oh, and Shou's behavior. In the front, it seems that the intelligence is not very high, but in the back, it is not consistent. The front is slightly adjusted, and there is also the mental test of attack and shou. , Gong just accepted Shou's time travel, but Gong didn't know about it at the beginning, and he didn't write anything about Shou telling Gong about time travel. It felt like there was a sense of separation. Also, the pairing of deputy CP Ling and Hua, how could it be said that the relationship didn't come naturally? There was also the matter about the pond😓 also changed, and Lei Gu was afraid of clothes. Into pieces (Aren't you afraid of other people? You don't need to add the robes that have been protected from lightning strikes before, and other monks are here, so it's impossible for everyone to wear them, or just set the robes to be indestructible, which is a little helpless) Personal opinion, for reference only, but I really think it needs to be changed

Wow... I have to say the emotional drama, I am so shy, I love to watch it, it is beautiful... I have become a cultivator and I must have emotional drama... The kind of plot that has no CP and is more outrageous than cheating. Sometimes it makes me crazy to read a long article... [Full] Growth type, the kind of cheating that makes you invincible without starting. Those with great luck have the abilities that a person with great luck should have. After Ci Yue traveled over, he also began to slowly forget the plot. The two male protagonists went from hiding to being chased to a dead end, and slowly grew up. They did not kill their enemies. After all, those being chased could only be teleported to other areas. At least they were not so invincible that they could not stand it anymore... ,

It's beautiful, and the writing has its own characteristics. Although it is quite satisfactory among most immortality novels, and the setting is also very popular, but overall it is remarkable. The author has written these with his own characteristics, the emotional line is smooth and natural, and the character portrayal is also very good. There is a secondary CP, so those who don't accept it should avoid it. Anyway, I think it's pretty good-looking. The emotional lines of each pair of CPs also have their own points of contact, and there aren't too many. The main thing is that there are more main CPs. The plot line may be a bit popular, but the two protagonists are quite cautious. Anyway, my impression is very good. Although I was a little anxious if I didn't put it away in time when I got the opportunity later, but every time I was one step ahead of the villain... And I really like watching this kind of growth. Both attack and reception are getting stronger step by step, and they are also very hardworking and smart [Like] But overall it looks good and suits my taste very well [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Young couples just want to be sweet [Love][Love][Love] It's so beautiful and updated very diligently! Not enough! I saved 50 chapters and finished them in one go! I think the author has created every character very well! Now I am really looking forward to the appearance of Lei Bao breaking out of his shell [blowing kiss]

Very well written! In Xiuxian novels, I just like the feeling of two people fighting side by side, supporting each other, growing together, and then slowly developing feelings during daily interactions. The plot line and the emotional line advance together. This is my favorite, and the emotional line is not abrupt. After Senior Brother Meiren was betrayed, he met a little sun like Ah Yue, and he followed him unswervingly, believed in him, and fought side by side. Who could not like Ah Yue? Senior Brother fell in love with him silently hahahaha. Ah Yue is an orphan, and no one has ever taken care of him, taught him, and protected him like my senior brother. I especially like how my senior brother touches Ah Yue's head. Hey, he feels like a daddy. He is really doting on him. When they saw two people entering the illusion of the dragon test, they faced such a successful life in the illusion and did not choose to stay. Both of them firmly said "he is not here" and left resolutely. It was here that they confirmed their feelings for each other, and then finally got together! I was really excited to see this! ! ! Author, please don't get tired and don't stop! ! Keep updating, I'm keeping it up, and I'll continue watching when it's finished! Otherwise, I will see the latest chapter soon [crying]

So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘He is a god It was my rose that illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist and I was so cute that I shed tears Not only will the world no longer be short of water, it will be the nemesis of depression 😋 It will also be the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that I shed tears, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water

How can I put it this way? It may seem a little boring at first, but the more you read, the better and better it gets. I hope the author can continue writing and not be perfunctory at the end, but the first part is indeed very interesting. If you like this kind of play, you can check it out.

I think it is a pretty good novel about cultivating immortals. There are not many male protagonists who are in love throughout the novel. The novels about cultivating immortals are mainly about cultivating immortals, but the sweet parts are also very sweet. It is still in the stage of pure love. Oh, our senior brother Qi really looks very cold, but he is actually very pure in love. And Ci Yue is really cute, every time he is shy, he is so cute, I want to laugh when he blushes [full]

If you like reading sweet stories, this one is still a bit sloppy. Ci Yue is slowly becoming stronger in the cultivation system. Together with Han Heng, it feels half daily, very good👌🏻 Enter text. . . It's so beautiful😍Men are menstruating when they see it😇Women are crazy when they see it😋This is the nemesis of depression🥺It's the alarm clock for vegetative people👿It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😝So handsome. He is a god. He is my rose. It illuminated my dark life🥴 and gave meaning to my world🤯 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor🥳 It made me realize that God does exist🤩 I was so cute that I burst into tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water🤪

It's a fairy tale with a strong male flavor. I like it very much, but there are a little few updates now. If you like the teacher, you can finish it without cheating.

It's a good-looking and pure book about cultivating immortals. I worked hard to improve my strength in the early stage. I really like the relationship between the two protagonists. I've been wanting to read this kind of novel about supporting each other and working hard to cultivate and struggle together in the world of cultivating immortals. Now I finally found a book that fits the description. It's very good and not as boring as a real fairy tale. I read it to the end and I feel that the author's outline should be quite long. I am looking forward to the story of the two protagonists going to the big world together. The author's writing is very good. I hope I will keep writing. I love you ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤

The author's writing is very awesome. The xql is very cute and cute. The plot develops in one go. It can be seen that the author has made great progress. There is still some delay in the front, but the plot and emotions in the back become more and more interesting. I hope the author can maintain this level. Come on, it is really awesome.

It's really good to read (I personally recommend that if you haven't started reading yet, don't read the book reviews, as it may affect the perception of the book. This is what I have summarized after reading the book on Tomato for so long). The details are well written, the author's writing style is super good, and the overall plot is very enjoyable to read, but it is not It's mindless and cool, and while writing the plot, it doesn't lose the emotional line. The interaction between the two people is also very sweet. Beautiful 1 handsome and 0 chef are ecstatic, and then it is not enough for the author at all. Don't be tired, don't rest, hurry up😋🥹👍🏻 Teacher! When will Qi Hanheng repair his Dantian? ! ! I'm already crying 🥹

It's a good-looking, traditional fairy tale, in which the protagonists support each other and grow from weak to strong.

I rarely give a rating to a book. This book is really super, super, super good-looking. When the two of them communicate with each other, it's very natural and straightforward. Although Shou is a time traveler, he is not the type to save anyone he sees. He will consider his own safety and the safety of his senior fellow apprentices. Both of them are constantly growing, but they are still strong (eyes closed) (satisfied) If you like cultivating immortals + growing + traveling through time, you must not miss this book! I've only read a few chapters so far, and I enjoyed reading it! Looking forward to the following chapters! Big cheers for the author! ૮ ⑉ ᗜ ⑉ ა