Beng Tie: Onfalos, I Have a Reincarnation Evaluation System

This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting

It's great. I might have thought it was because there was no female protagonist. When I first read the book review, it said it had multiple female protagonists, but after reading almost a hundred chapters, I felt like it was all about friendship. I thought the author didn't know how to write about emotions. Xiao Bai is not that miserable anymore. He has a male protagonist accompanying him on his reincarnation journey. It feels like He almost regarded the hero's confession as an obsession. The subsequent description of emotions is still a bit vague, but it is very interesting, especially the relationship with Cerudra. It is too delicate and is a real slow-burn. Although the relationship is not clearly stated, it is basically a layer of window paper. In daily life I often give out sweets, but Samsara is really written about Samsara, which is almost the same model as Baier. If you are impatient, you may get bored if you read too much. Anyway, I am a bit bored, but I can't help but read on. The summary is that if you want to read Shuangwen and Fafafa, forget it, it's not too enjoyable. , After all, the ending of each reincarnation is not good, let alone Fa Fa Fa. The emotional writing is too delicate and slow-paced, and the author likes to write emotional interactions into daily life, which means you may not even feel that they are interacting ambiguously. It's fun for me anyway. After reading the review written for fifteen hours, you can believe me. There is also the issue of the heroine. I have read more than 200 chapters. The only heroines that can be confirmed now are Kerudra, Haiseyin and Demiuge. Xi Lian is not sure if it is. Although there is an intimate interaction, it doesn't feel like that. The Demiuge I am talking about is Mimi. By the way, there is also Diebao. In the early stage, he was crazy and sweet with Diebao, but in the later stage, he only wrote Haisein, Cerudra, and Mimicixilian are gone, and our Diebao has no role. It's not that we have less roles, but that we don't have any roles. We only mentioned it when it comes to fire or the trial of demigods. Some people say that except for Tibao and Feng Jin, they are all female protagonists. But to be honest, looking at it now, except for the ones I mentioned earlier, the others feel almost boring. Mao Mao's roles have also become less and less.

The reincarnation evaluation system + the black tide background of Ompharos has both the original feelings and new aspects, and the logic is very consistent. The main plot of the protagonist's reincarnation and counterattack with memories is clear. This is a pretty good book [I learned it]

It's pretty good [like], the writing is top-notch, [but the protagonist didn't cut off Hu Haiseyin at the beginning, and only cut off her Hu after a few lifetimes (it feels like Haiseyin moved from Emperor Kehuang to the protagonist), which is inexplicably subtle [thinking]] (I hope it can better show the bond between the three people of Kehuang, Heiseyin, and the protagonist) There are emotional highlights (but too few [get it]). Haiseyin explodes knowing that the protagonist has been reincarnated countless times (because there is no memory of reincarnation), and is afraid that she is just a drop of water in the ocean [[laughing evilly], come more, come more, like to watch] This book already has more than 500,000 words. Why should I write 5 million words? It is better to write 10 million words [Please update] [Let's write about Ompharos for the rest of my life]

Although I felt a little tired when I followed the first volume, I was still very moved when I finally got out of Omphalos. The suffering of millions of reincarnations will eventually bear different fruits. I will no longer look back at the past and face the future with my head held high. These different endings will definitely lead to a different romantic story, so the author will update quickly [crying] The child has suffered a lot. I want to read something sweet. Even if I am not good at writing, please encourage me to study. I want to watch the interaction of the Omphalos Brigade! ! ! [Code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold]

There is a problem that I think will seriously affect this book, and I hope the author will pay attention to it. That is, Omphalos is not just composed of these fourteen people. Where are there so many people? The protagonist's parents? The protagonist's motivation is selfishness, and he knew from the beginning that the data had never really lived, so maybe he didn't care. But Bai E? The savior would not be like this. He promised the blacksmith that he would bring a world without war. The motivation for him to embark on reincarnation is the entire world. And other people will not do this. Wan En will not forget Xuanfeng City like this. This situation now belongs to OOC. Even if they know that they are powerless, they should have an attitude or ask the protagonist or something. Nothing is a bit weird now, saving the world and saving someone from loneliness? If you just want to survive in this way, no matter how you live in Zhuhuo, you will choose Zhuhuo just for the sake of other people. Moreover, this will make the protagonist look a bit bad and conflict with the character. This is the bifurcation point of this article. I hope it can attract attention. The tone may be a bit elementary school and a bit uncomfortable, but I am really sincere in my opinions. Please forgive me if I offend you!

The author writes really well! The writing is delicate, the scene descriptions are graphic, the battle scenes are exciting but not awkward, the overall quality is very high, highly recommended!

Very good-looking, a cool story among cool stories. However, I'm curious. If the protagonist's answer is selfish, wouldn't Lycus watch him turn into Ironwood? [Smiling evilly] Directly tell Master Bo Shizun to bring it, grab it, and refine it instantly. [Sinister smile]

The Bengtie fanfic I have been following for the longest time, it's really good. [I understand] The low rating must be because it just came out.

Full marks (•̀o•́)ง💯, the protagonist follows the daily life of Omphalos in the reincarnation and explores the main plot of Omphalos very well, the characters are not OOC, the heroine and the emotional line are not obvious, I hope it is Lord Caesar.

I give you the most direct, the most truthful, the most thorough, the most naked, the most chilling, the most pointed, the most profound, the most realistic, the least modified, the least roundabout, the least roundabout, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most The most straightforward, the neatest, the most refreshing, the most decisive, the least ink-stained, the least procrastinating, the least sloppy, the most painful, the most ruthless, the least humane, the least showy, the least concerned about dignity, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, The most straightforward, the most direct to the point, the most direct to the core, the most tearing apart the appearance, the least pretense, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least polite, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the most straightforward , the most frank, the most candid, the most magnanimous, the most unfiltered, the most realistic, the most realistic, the most direct to the essence, the most see-through, the most unreserved, the most sincere, the purest, the most unconcealed ultimate answer: Hao Kan [Like]

It's already great that a new author can write like this, come on author [laughing evilly] [like] But I feel very sacred, scarlet, corruption, jungle, dungeon, ocean, snowfield, desert, forest, space, underground, cave, underground ice and snow, underground desert, underground jungle, underground mushroom, underground corruption, underground scarlet, underground sacred hell, oasis, glowing mushroom, granite, marble, spider nest, honeycomb, glowing moss, gray Embers, jungles, meteorites, towns, cemeteries, glimmers, small flowered stone inlays, mineral veins, moss chambers, gem caves, thin ice, underground huts, living trees, floating islands, living redwood trees, jungle shrines, ruined buildings, pyramids, enchanted sword tombs, embedded holes, campsites, abandoned minecart tracks, shrines of the heart, jungle temples [smile]

Ompharos' characteristic reincarnation simulation novel, the protagonist has strange numerical values, and the emotional lines of multiple female protagonists are well written. It really uses the characteristics of Ompharos to the extreme. It is not brainless, and it is highly recommended.

It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into writing this book. I am very surprised after reading it so far. The plot is very fresh, the overall rhythm is online, and the viewing experience is also very good. There are no abrupt points, so it is easy to immerse people in. I hope it will continue to be like this.

The protagonist's growth is so inspiring! From the powerless sacrifice in the first reincarnation to taking the initiative to exercise and accumulate strength with the system, the setting of "Hold on and rewrite destiny" not only conforms to the tone of Iron Breaker, but also conveys the power of persistence and struggle. The more you watch, the more you get more and more excited.

Very good, no need to say more, the reading time speaks for itself

I think it was well written, and the original story was changed to what they expected. I saw their efforts, struggling forward for that glimmer of hope, and reincarnation again and again. It was very beautiful, and just like Xi Lian said, this must be a different story from the past!

It's pretty good, it touched my heart, I like it very much. However, there are indeed problems. For example, the line on Wengxing is indeed a bit long, so I didn't read it for a while. What does the author plan to write after Pinoconi ends? Should it be a long story that follows the main plot, or should it be concluded at some appropriate time. Or wait until the main plot continues with a planet, and then start a second book to continue? I'm looking forward to the continuation of this book. Come on! ! !

It's very interesting. It's one of the better Omphalos fandoms. By the way, is there a female protagonist?

I am Shennong. Children, this book is very good. Don't hesitate to open the bag and eat it. No need to say more [laughs crookedly], as evidenced by the length of time I have been studying [laughs]. I declare to the heavens that this book is of the highest rank [laughs] [shy]

It is really our unique arrogance. We imagine how we can rewrite bad things by integrating ourselves into the story. We think we can do everything, but there are also some people who think they can't do it. At first, our arrogance is not that big until we experience it personally. After the experience, we can no longer suppress the arrogance in our hearts. We want to change all sorrows and want everyone to survive. And this arrogant arrogance will lead us to the ending in our minds, even if we sacrifice ourselves.

Because I don't know how to praise, so... Praise After reading this article, I can only feel that the charm is flowing, and the writing is full of character. The writing is elegant and not vulgar, without any heaping of complexity or pretentiousness. Deep emotion can be seen in the plain, and deep meaning is hidden in the simplicity. The writing is clear in context, relaxed and relaxed, and the narrative is natural and smooth. Reading it is like a breeze blowing on your face, and your mind is at peace. The intention is high, the emotion is sincere, and it has delicate feelings without losing the style and magnanimity. The mastery is evident in every word and sentence, and the talent is displayed in every word and paragraph. It is both enjoyable to appreciate and has a long aftertaste. After reading it, it resonates deeply and will be unforgettable for a long time. It is truly a rare masterpiece, which shows the author's writing skills and care.

One of the few well-written Ompharos fanfics. If you like reading fanfics about Beng Tie, I recommend watching this work. There is no plot with explosive combat power, only the protagonist's difficult exploration through trial and error over and over again in reincarnation, and finally Ompharos reaches a different ending through his own efforts. Of course, the journey of chasing fire is not a one-man show of the protagonist, but the result of the joint efforts from golden descendants to ordinary people, and then to the protagonist. This scene is described very well early in the article. But in the middle and later stages of the article, there are only love, harem, and reincarnation. The writing style of the long romance + decryption made it difficult for me to read, and the complicated reincarnation setting was even more difficult to understand. But fortunately, the writing of the final chapter when we return to reality is very good, and it doesn't feel much worse than the original work. It's a pity that there are no CG and performances. But I have a question. In the end, only the golden descendants are left in reality, and are the others gone? After all, we can only see these few people in the Cat Cat Cake chapter. The last thing I want to see is the protagonist mocking Black Tower's grandma [shy]. After all, the troubles belonging to Black Tower were solved by the protagonist in advance. (In the original world line without the Star Dome Train, Ms. Black Tower sacrificed herself. It can be seen that the fourth moment anchored by Bo Shi Zun begins with whether Ms. Black Tower is killed). I won't comment on it since the Pinoconi chapter has just begun.

Without a doubt, my rating for this book is: A+ It is an absolute super cup in fan fiction, epic and hopeful coexist, and it has reached its own height based on the original plot. Cheers, author [Love]

The writing is really good, Lao Gu and Lao Gu are really a pair of fateful mandarin ducks [cry] [cry] [cry], and Lao Gu ended grandly.

A heavy chapter, a new story If you were to live in a computer world where all its programs were simulating the same world, how would you create new life? Walk in such a world, find what you cherish, find what you want to protect, no matter who you are, all his actions are determined by selfishness, choose the ending you want. Truth and falsehood, does it matter? As long as the person you cherish is still with you, as long as you can protect him, as long as he is no longer reincarnated, what difference does it make? I hope this journey will eventually reach the stars

I have read this novel many times, but every time it was the title that dissuaded me. I really didn't want to read it, so I clicked in and discovered that the author's writing style is surprisingly good. I see that there are no bad points that make me feel awkward, and the writing is very good in daily life. I just don't know how the author plans to write about the number of reincarnations in the future. I feel bad for Bai E.

The logic is online, the setting of the reincarnation mechanism is not obtrusive, the goals and conflicts of each stage are very clear, and the writing style is also very smooth, without unnecessary nonsense, making it very comfortable to read.

Of all the novels written about Omphalos that I have read, this one is the one that moved me the most. In contrast, the text of this book focuses on the bits and pieces of similar but different reincarnations. There is no epic sense created by grand narratives and bloody battles. Instead, there is only a group of consistent heroes who, no matter how many reincarnations they experience, always stride toward tomorrow like moths chasing a flame. But, this must be a different romantic story, isn't it?

So well written! No matter Ompharos or everyone! Even though the story will eventually end and the end will come, there will always be and there will be beautiful shining moments in every day on this journey, those ordinary or boring days! Even though they are fleeting, I will definitely seize it. Those painful or real moments are proof that I have lived. This is a good book, opening it brings you closer to Omfalos.