Starting with the Jade Disk, Becoming an Immortal Is Inevitable

It can be seen that the author is probably a newcomer. The plot concept is not bad, but some parts of the description are a bit confusing, but for a newcomer author, it is already good. I will give it five stars to support it.

It's acceptable, it's pretty smooth, and there aren't too many emotional scenes. I'm tired of seeing too many female protagonists in other stories. It's pretty good for purely improving one's strength.

It's very interesting, I hope there won't be a female protagonist.

Not too stressful

It's bland, and some plots are a little draggy, but the advantage is that there are almost no serious poisonous points.

Xiaobai's writing is cool, but the rhythm is well controlled and can be watched, which is good.

Except for the poor writing style, everything else is fine

Good

Overall, it's pretty good. The author is probably a novice. He has some anecdotes at the beginning, but it's okay at the end.

Well written, keep up the good work!

Very nice. Please give me more support, author.

The writing is okay, but it's a pity that the ancestor didn't survive.

Not bad. Give the author a five-star rating to give the author some motivation.

The writing is okay, the plot is not that dragging, but now the main reason is that the number of words is too few, making it unsatisfying to read.

It's pretty good to watch. I don't really like fighting across large realms, but it's okay to activate the Yuanying Lingbao to kill the golden elixir without consuming it. The combat power hasn't collapsed. I'll wait until I get fatter to watch.

It's pretty fast-paced and has a bit of human touch. I don't understand why the rating is so low.

Alas, isn't the author updated?

Not bad, keep up the good work

Five-star support

I forgot the time when I saw it

Give me a five-star support

Give me a five-star encouragement, keep working hard

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Speed speed update

Still very good

"Who dares to say that he was born rich? It's just that the predecessors planted trees and the descendants enjoy the shade."

It's time to cultivate some spiritual pets. It would also be good to have a few more helpers.

It's nice to look at, and there's nothing wrong with it so far.

It's not fine chaff, but it's a relatively good grain, and the updates are a bit slow.

You can write well, come on, the author is great