Classic of Mountains and Seas? Which New Elido Is This?

It's great, I finally have a normal protagonist, with a pure heart and a relaxed atmosphere. Many of the protagonists in other Juezu Zero fanfics are young people with problems, and they seem to be unable to write about their tragic pasts.

My own book, please give it a five-star review [note] Here's a good review, although I'm shameless, but I like it.

It's a very good book. The chapters of Biwing Bird are very good. The protagonist has a three-dimensional image and good and evil. Every character is like a real person. It's a very good book. If you don't like it, please don't say bad things. If you think this book is not good, then this is also a book that I like.

The plot is well written, but the writing is a bit jerky. Also, author, if you write so much in a day, won't you exhaust yourself to death? All in all, it is a potentially good book, and I would like to give it five stars for encouragement. Author, why do you have so many typos? The same goes for punctuation marks. There are many places that should have them but don't [smile]

After reading a few chapters, I found that there are no big problems. However, one question is whether there can be no additional explanations in parentheses in the book. This will give people a strong sense of separation. It felt like I was watching a TV show and suddenly a commercial came on at the climax. It makes people uncomfortable. Then there are these words in parentheses, which can be placed in subsequent chapters. Explain in detail in a dramatic way.

Why couldn't I find this great book earlier?

The plot is good, but the writing is a bit green, so keep writing.

The writing style is very lively, and the plot is very novel among fans. I hope the author will continue to write [like]

It belongs to a rising star in the future. Some areas still need polishing, but this is not a bad writing. The main tone of the story of this book is more fantasy, so you have to be mentally prepared to read it.

The content is more exciting than the introduction and title of the book, it is so well written＼(^▽^)／!

It's quite good. The combination of Classic of Mountains and Seas and Jueju Zero is very novel and worth watching [Cool]

The author is very talented and this is a good book

I really like it. Come on, the author is awesome.

It's pretty good, but there is no description of emotions or actions when the characters speak, and it feels like a dialogue box [face covering]

The plot is very good, please support it!

Very good and addictive

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

The combat power levels also need to be divided into details.

Great, please give me more. I really like the interaction between the ancestor and Gu Jue.

It's pretty good, but are there a few chapters or paragraphs missing in the middle? Why is it that in Chapter 2, Ancestor has just come out and just met the protagonist, in Chapter 3, Yuzu has become very familiar with everyone else and calls him Ancestor? [What]

It feels ok, I hope to come back