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I just found out that he is an acquaintance, and he is the author of another book that I was kicked out of the readership before [face covering] (Essentially, I have been kicked out of the pool). In short, I have mixed emotions, but the book is good, keep up the good work (by the way, the review of another book was actually banned, 4 stars is not a bad review, right? [Petrochemical]

After reading it, I personally feel that it is pretty good. The writing is very good, and the psychological investigation of the characters is good. Although there are some areas that need to be improved, these can only be said to be minor flaws rather than poisonous points. But I read the comment section and thought some people were exaggerating about some problems. For example, some comments suggested that the protagonist suddenly became so crazy and yandere-like in Chapter 35. In this chapter, when the protagonist killed the soldier, Elvy had the idea that "there is something wrong with Sheena" and "Sheena has no regard for life", which reminds readers that Sheena's mental state is not right. As long as she does not look too fast, there is a psychological acceptance process. What Xina said to Elvy after taking care of the soldiers also reflects that she is afraid of being abandoned by Elvy, so she strives to show her value. And the protagonist's experience is quite bad, it is natural that he has mental illness, and this disease is: extreme lack of love. Therefore, the disease will only occur when getting along with female characters such as Elvy, but he is usually timid and introverted, so some readers think that the character has a separated personality. The protagonist's mental problems were explained in detail when he met the saint later, through the saint's mouth, which was equivalent to supplementing the rationality. As for facial makeup, I don't agree. At least at this stage, the personality differences are quite obvious. As for Lorian leaving a kiss on the protagonist, will the protagonist tolerate it? The original text reads, "This is Lorian's house, and she can't resist what she really wants to do." Moreover, Lorian has already developed a very favorable impression of the protagonist. Regardless of reality or emotion, the protagonist actually does not resist, and cannot be said to tolerate it. There are many more… Of course, there are some problems. For example, the protagonist is not like the social beast before time travel, but more like a mentally twisted little girl. In theory, someone who has experienced more than 20 years old should not behave like this; also, the protagonist's experience of changing and growing up was indeed skipped earlier, but the chapter is very early, so the impact can be laughed at.

Is there still a chance for the eldest lady at the beginning to return?

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It's completely different from the previous book. It's a new experience [laughing evilly] and it's not bad [laughing evilly]

It's bad. I rarely encounter normal authors and normal works. I haven't gotten used to it for a while. I usually read some sandstorms. Hahaha. It's very well written. Please give me your support.

Overall, it was okay. The change in the character of the protagonist was a bit abrupt, there was too little foreshadowing in the early stage, and there were relatively few key psychological processes. It was pretty good to watch as short films.

The writing is pretty good, and it's one of the best lilies I've ever read.

Awesome, people died at the beginning

It seems like you should go somewhere🦔 At first, I didn't have any clue and I really didn't understand it.

Has the author written books elsewhere?

Apart from anything else, it was not easy not to be captured by the Holy Core [Shocked]

It's a rare normal book, but many people's comments are lamentable, but 🍅 this is it

There was not a moment of mourning for the discontinuation of the previous book. The new book is so good

Come on, it looks good ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Sheena onslaught thank you meow

The plot is pretty good.

I was still thinking about why this book looked so familiar. It turned out to be an old friend.