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I am Shen Nong. This book is just average. Please read it for beginners. Others can leave.

Indeed, like those comments, there is something wrong with the first chapter (what if the author couldn't handle that paragraph, or was he copy-pasted from somewhere?) However, the writing at the end is still very good, and it can integrate various characters in the world without looking abrupt. Of course, there are also comprehensive disadvantages of this kind, that is, too many characters will lead to a scattered sense of experience. Another point is that there seems to be no transitional nature of events. The whole story is very fast-paced. The characters have very distinct personalities and are very unique. It won't be very frustrating either. It's because of this that I finished reading it. (Don't be stubborn, everyone has their own opinion)

We have everything. Fortunately, it's not too messy.

Except for the first one, everything else is okay, right?