Double-Crossing the Tang Dynasty: Li Er Drooled While Looking at the Fujian Ship

It is a good book with no flaws. To borrow a word from the first floor, I am also a fan of Qidian. The money spent in a year should be more than twice that of the first floor. The overall plot is smooth and non-toxic. The characters are also standing up, and the various reactions of the protagonist and supporting characters are relatively objective and logical. Okay, now that we've talked about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. Maybe it's because of writing your first book? There are actually quite a lot of small problems with this beautiful author. Just like a sentence in Book Friends, there are obviously some places that can be omitted. After all, it is a cool article, but the author insists on giving an explanation. It doesn't matter if you don't explain it. Once you explain it, you have to explain it. This has caused a lot of problems. The place is not delicate enough, and there will indeed be some minor mistakes, but fortunately the author will correct them when he knows they are wrong, and the modification speed is quite fast. As a novice author and because it is free, I am very tolerant. I will give it four stars at most from the starting point, but five stars encourage me! In summary, brothers can drink it, it is not highly toxic and can be eaten with confidence. This novel is like a pack of spicy strips. It always tastes good, but if you eat it as a staple food, there is still a risk of diarrhea!

One glance at AI. Too obvious. [Laughing and crying] But the author probably has a good grasp of the subject matter and outline. It doesn't look like a big problem to normal people.

The author has opened up a new track for the wearer, and the storyline is compact and vivid. It is estimated that many readers came here to see the little rhinoceros as a group pet. Please write more about this little milk baby. This little group pet makes many readers feel uncomfortable.

It gave me goosebumps all over my body. This is really the most enjoyable book I have ever read [crying]. It unabashedly peeled off the window paper between Li Shimin and Li Yuan, and brothers Li Chengqian and Li Tai got back together. Especially the part where the protagonist takes a group of people to the modern city of the Tang Dynasty that never sleeps. What Li Shimin and his group said is so exciting! There is also the Zhenguan Tiantuan to engage in the industrial revolution together. It is so exciting, so arrogant with a plug-in in hand! [Shy] I personally think this book is better than all the books about the Tang Dynasty. The excitement is carried out throughout the book. The protagonist leads the Tang Dynasty step by step towards a more glorious future. I am full of pride!

To be honest, the author's writing skills are good. As a gourmet who spends a thousand yuan a year in the starting point, it is quite interesting to watch. However, the plot does not look like a purely family novel. It feels like it is still going to follow the industrial revolution route. Also, I would like to ask if the author is a girl? I feel like the daily family life is well written!

A first-rate good book, with clear logic, detailed descriptions, and vivid characters. Maybe in the first one or two chapters, Li Shimin is a bit crazy and unrealistic, but after reading two more chapters, you will find how careful the characters are. It is hard to imagine that you can see such a book on Tomato, at least it is a good book with a score of 9 or above!

There are a lot of minor flaws, but both the control of the characters and the rhythm of the plot are good, the writing is very comfortable to watch, and the protagonist's character is also flesh-and-blood.

The rating of 7.8 Is really too low. I feel like it could be a nine out of 10. It has more than 700,000 words. I read it in three days. It shows that the content is extraordinary. Overall, the portrayal of Li Shimin in the first few chapters is a bit strange. Sometimes he gets angry and sometimes he is honest. But after reading it, you will become addicted. The characterization of the characters is particularly delicate and the rhythm is very comfortable.

Not bad, the literary talent is enough. Very imaginative and very reasonable

A fairly complete novel. I have read Chapter 180 so far. It has to be said that Li Shimin here is finally no longer a wealthy businessman who sells his daughter every day in exchange for the protagonist's modern items and knowledge. The novel as a whole provides a profound analysis of the conflict between the monarchy of the Tang Dynasty and the modern system, as well as the essential conflict between the agricultural era and the industrial era brought about by the protagonist. This is a very readable and good novel. Every detail written by the author profoundly reflects the author's thinking on the comparison between the Tang Dynasty and modern times. It is really worth reading!

It is a bit stunning at first glance, but a bit lacking. It is like a jade embryo, which is constantly polished in front of the craftsmen, and finally looks like a brilliant star. It is an interesting historical book that is excellent enough and has a lot of room for growth. It is one of the few excellent books among Tomatoes that satisfies readers' past and present fantasies. I admit that I have read a lot of books. Although there are many awkwardnesses in the book, no one is perfect and everything is never finished. That's what makes him so unique. At first glance, 1/10 is not fake. However, if we can refer to the excellent and detailed AI, we may be able to improve it to a higher level when polishing and combining it with ourselves. Congratulations, dominating the list

Whether reading novels on Tomato or other platforms, I can't read them more than on Baidu. In terms of his literary style, ideological level and control of various details, this is the ceiling of all time-travel novels. He does not regard two people in time and space as charity to each other, but It is truly based on the narration and description of people, government, government, time and space. The author's writing style has a deep understanding of the system. It can be seen that this is a novel with real political thoughts written by a truly knowledgeable person. If you read it, you will definitely be surprised.

I have read Chapter 349 so far. I originally wanted to give it an 8.5, But I still gave it a 10. I have read a lot of books of the same type, including the highly praised "Fake My Surname of Langya", which I only gave 4 points, and "Datang Time and Space, Little Sizi Comes to My Home", which I gave 9.5 Points... The reason is that although the latter has a mindless plot, it is very enjoyable to watch and has a strong sense of immersion! ! Let's talk about where the 1.5 Buckle is: Author, have you noticed that the chapters have a high reading rate? Is it possible that Li Yue took the Tang Dynasty people to travel to modern times in those easy-to-understand chapters? On the contrary, many chapters like "Making a Surname" with many annotations (popularizing science and showing off skills) lack the interest of the online text itself? Some chapters that were too cumbersome, such as: many details about popular science, laws, and reforms in the Tang Dynasty, I skipped through because I couldn't remember it and found it too boring. There were even many words (lexicon) that I had to look up to express... Of course, this is just my personal opinion. People in the Tang Dynasty were shocked and fascinated by 1400 years later! I feel the same way! This is why I gave it an 8.5! To sum up: Compared with the complicated and tasteless science popularization skills, I prefer to see the cognitive collision between the two eras, so! Let's bring more Tang people back to modern times!

The plot is good and different from the usual one who travels to the Tang Dynasty and directly brings goods and sells gold, makes money, improves the quality of life and develops the Tang Dynasty. The disadvantage is that the protagonist can still put himself and Li Shimin on an equal footing at the beginning, but he insists on adding an ancestor. Later, as the personal risk is reduced, he unconsciously finds himself in the position of the true grandson. Everything goes well.

In fact, in the early stages of reading this book, I felt a sense of fragmentation. Because of the butterfly effect, if these policies were implemented in the Tang Dynasty, it would have a lot of impact on later generations. But then I thought about it, if the protagonist traveled to another parallel universe, then everything would make sense. I hope the author can read my comments so that readers like me who like to substitute content can read more comfortably. Finally, I think the author's works are excellent both in terms of content and characters, and I hope that the author's works will get better and better. Thanks

Well, the writing is relatively good, and it is considered the best in this category that I have seen. The characterization is very detailed, and the inner description of the human heart is also very good, especially the characters are very consistent with themselves, especially the prince. After his leg heals, he will gradually become a normal person with mental health. This is what I really want to see, and other people will also have their own ideal endings, so it is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard, I will keep reading [exploration]

As a tricky old bookworm, I have read 6 chapters so far, and there is nothing wrong with it so far. The time-travel opening and the character description are relatively clear. I don't know if there are any poisonous points later on. If you have no problem with it according to the author's level, you can read it.

The plot is really good, and I want to keep watching it, but the description is a bit shocking, the emotions are too vivid, and the emotions progress too quickly. In general, there are no major poisons, but there are minor ones. I really wanted to see the plot develop, but after watching it, I felt a little awkward and wanted to quit.

How should I put it? It can be seen that a lot of care has been taken to outline the worldview, but it is still a bit rough, but it doesn't hurt, it is a cool article. Originally I just wanted to give you three stars, but now that I have seen more than 500 chapters, what else can I say? Five stars!

The vivid portrayal of historical characters creates a wonderful chemical reaction with the modern protagonists. History is always full of regrets, and this book just makes up for the regrets between father and son and brothers of the Li family in the Tang Dynasty. Push!

To be honest, this book can be said to be a good time-travel novel. Whether it is the literary style or the description of the characters, it makes people sink into it. It is different from ordinary tomato novels. It can be seen that the author is a veteran

This is not an ordinary historical double story. The author is knowledgeable and understands politics. The storyline develops naturally and smoothly, with details and good control over the macro-pace. It will not make people feel bored. It is a huge hit👍

After reading it in two days, I felt that it was well written. I watched the anime plot of Li Xianren in the first 100 scenes, and I caught up with the big army in chapter 816 of the plot novel. However, the various science popularization equipment and imperial edict writing took up a bit too much. The plot of science popularization should be made up for by two more chapters. Among them, the contact, recognition, promotion of cooperation, and learning from each other's strengths between Tang Dynasty China and modern China are also good, but there are too many different perspectives in various branch plots.

I still prefer novels written in detail. Everything the protagonist does will be reflected in the story of the little characters, which will make people feel more involved, rather than a novel like Long Aotian where the whole world revolves around the protagonist. Overall: The author's writing style is very good and his narrative ability is also strong. This is really one of my favorite novels besides Yuan Tong.

The ideas are fun, the plot is not bloody, and it is very brisk. It is not like the rush of writing a mind map outline and then starting to push the plot one by one. The description is more delicate, and there is no sense of urgency in pushing the plot. It looks very comfortable, and it is a slow-paced and slow-release writing style. I personally like this style better. Nowadays, many authors seem to have swords pointed at their heads. If the data of one plot/plot drops slightly, they will start to move to the next plot. It is really like marching in a hurry, and it is very uncomfortable to watch. When writing a book, you still need to well shape the characters and let the characters be involved in the story. A good story is a natural plot. Don't force the plot for the sake of data (this paragraph is not about this book). This book is really good, with an overall score of 9.1. Give it five stars

I have just read dozens of chapters, and the writing is pretty good. I haven't seen much of the plot. So far, there are no surprising points. The characters are well drawn, and at least they stand up. I, a native of Xi'an, still have a sense of involvement. I look forward to the development of the plot in the future [please update]

I really don't understand this book, which is 7.8. The author's writing style and understanding of history and knowledge are far better than most Tomato authors. Moreover, many times he thinks about social systems and the meaning of life, which I admire very much. I don't know why some people give it a low score. Is it because there are no dirty jokes? Still haven't slept with each other like a stallion? I really can't understand it. All in all, apart from being a bit short, it's a really good book and the author is awesome! Hope to keep updating.

Very good, not bad. I love watching it. Come on!

I really like it. I feel that every time I read this kind of time-travel novel, I have a deeper understanding of the dynasties and emperors described. In some places, people who read it are very excited! I don't like to read serialized articles every time, but I like to read the ending, but this one really makes me want to keep reading. I beg the author to update it. Do you dare to finish it and let me see it [making a face]

The writing is quite good, but the genre is different from what I first thought. I personally like to enjoy myself and work along side my career, rather than neglecting the main line of my career or even my family for the sake of my career. I prefer to enjoy and get things done. This responsibility is a bit too big. I like a laid-back prince, who can take care of children or have fun. I'm really not interested in career. But the writing is still good, the score is a bit low, in my opinion it should be at least 8.5 Or above