In the Horror Dungeon, He Was Pampered by a Sickly Beauty and a Fierce Ghost.

The emotional scenes are well portrayed. The male protagonist slowly accepts the female protagonist and slowly becomes attracted to her [please savor it carefully] I feel that the plot and reasoning scenes are still youthful, I hope it can better reflect the male protagonist's IQ, and I hope the author's writing will get better and better [Sending my heart]

If the setting involving the timeline is not used well, the plot will be very confusing, but the author's writing is good, clear and logical, and a perfect closed loop. It was originally a five-star. But after the character Niu Tian was in the dungeon of "Tongfu Inn", I didn't like her anymore. I think she has no sense of proportion. When she saw the heroine coming over, she took the initiative to give up her seat next to the hero. She had a sense of boundaries. She hugged his wrist right next to the hero and planned to sleep in the same room with him (luckily she didn't). (Otherwise, it would be Samsung). Nowadays, there are even "brother~sister" scripts. "Brother Zhuang, Brother Yang, Brother Zhuang Yang" can be called any one, but I have to call him brother~ If he hadn't met the heroine, I'm afraid the brother would shout until the finale. If the author created a good female supporting character, he would be more popular, instead of half of the female players and female ghosts in the whole story having a crush on the male protagonist. [Personally, I feel that although the male protagonist only likes the female protagonist, he still has a certain ambiguity towards Niu Tian in his behavior]

This book is mostly weird and semi-yandere, with yandere plots interspersed with weirdness, but the yandere plot doesn't have weird things interspersed with it, so it's still very good. The heroine is a moderately yandere, to the point where she kills other girls before they even talk to the hero. There are a lot of sugar-coating plots and a lot of suffocation (the weird plot of clearing the dungeon and the inability to do so). In the end, the female author made people's hearts turn yellow [laughing evilly]

Good book, good book. The plot is very immersive and well-designed. (Reading the content, you can see that the author has definitely thought about it countless times before presenting it to the readers.) The characterization is also very clear. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is really enviable (secondly, the author is that girls drive faster [smile][smile][smile]) It is not the kind of mindless and cool novel that is on the street. I don't know why the rating is so low. Currently, in my opinion, this is a good book worthy of 9 points or more. It's really hard to stop reading. I really hope the author can finish the update in one go. Also, I would like to ask if the author has a fan base. If there is any latest news or deleted content, we can know more quickly [smile][smile][smile]

Okay, ok, in a novel of a dungeon game, each dungeon is not an independent plot (the stories of the male and female protagonists are connected in series, and the dungeon timeline is used to reverse the narrative, at least for now). The male protagonist is not invincible, but again, after all, the male protagonist, there must be someone who can write it (for example, if the dungeon is purely designed around the male protagonist, the male protagonist will change. I think this is useless. If I can really adjust this, then I am still reading free Tomato novels here. Isn't this just a joke? Right, there is no need to be too demanding). What's also good is that every participant has a relatively distinct personality, and their intelligence is online (I'll be honest when it comes to intelligence, I can't find many Tomatoes who can figure it out, so please let me know if you have any!) I originally wanted to say something about the shortcomings, but I forgot about it because I talked about it too much! Also, there are too few, it's really not enough to watch [Learned]

It's very novel, and the relationship between the protagonist and the ghost is also well written. Tomato is one of the few carefully crafted articles.

I am Shennong, I am non-poisonous and can be eaten. Those who say poisonous things in the comment section are impatient.

I got through it without realizing it, and the 6.7 Rating is unreasonable. In my mind, this jazz hero definitely deserves a 9.7. The author has great imagination, the plot is wonderful, and the emotional drama is very delicate [Like]

It looks good. Shoyo Mulberry is so addictive. I didn't expect it to end so soon. And what can I say, the twist is quite good. At least I personally like it. To use an analogy, it's like a plate of exquisite and delicious desserts. It's delicious. Although it's very different from what I originally expected, it's pretty good.

The outline is quite well written, the story is compact, interlocking and interesting. The ending after chapter 250 is just mediocre, the plot is mediocre, and the writing is mediocre. The ending might have been better if the old male protagonist died. The rest was written purely for the sake of writing. Overall, this is a good book and worth reading. The score is indeed low. 9 Is the right score.

The rhythm is very good, and the description of the plot content is also very interesting, but there are a few immature points in the chapters I have seen so far: Regarding the scene where the dungeon kills people and saves their lives, as the protagonist, you should not directly block the knife with an innocent person. There are two points here. One is "direct", which will show that the protagonist is not careful enough, and the other is "innocent person", although the article repeatedly emphasizes that it is for Survive, but there is a word called "moral mysophobia", which will filter out many readers. After all, if someone hurts you later, you can't blame others, because it is all for survival, otherwise it will be double standards. It is best not to have such plot points in dark articles that are not written. (Standing on the moral high ground to counter the enemy is also one of the great joys.) Even when Brother Huang Mao, who has been with the protagonist for so long, is killed by others, the protagonist thinks it is normal and does not feel there is anything wrong in what he did. There is no trace of sadness at all. It is very anti-human. Internet articles basically don't write about parents, and many people don't know how to write about them. The plot is also very difficult to write, because the final outcome of the protagonist's parents is death, and then the protagonist is sublimated. It can be seen that the first few chapters have been polished, but the later chapters have been somewhat degraded for updates.

I changed the description of the plot of Zhuang Yang being kidnapped. I didn't pay attention when I wrote it before. I just thought that disappearance cases would be handled in this way [shocked]

In fact, I felt that the tragedy was even heavier at the end, because after thinking about it, I realized that Sangli had actually died in the past, and now they are just the Garden of Eden created by Zhuang Yang himself, which felt quite uncomfortable.

This book is really good, especially when it describes Zhuge Liang's 800-round battle with Voldemort on the Great Wall in order to avenge Guan Yu. However, Thanos almost wiped out the battlefield with a snap of his fingers. If it hadn't been for Zed's shadow clone and his shuriken, this wave of Barret's eight-fold mirror would have killed him with a sniper. Apart from that, I rather admire Sun Wukong. The sentence he said to all the teachers and students at Hogwarts, "Your Monkey King, Grandpa Q, is here to collect homework," shows Sun Wukong's dissatisfaction and resistance to the magic exam. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is in place.

Good book, I don't know why there is no traffic, Tomato rarely recommends it, it is not a brainless novel, and the logic is closed loop (I personally think it is better than the logical closed loop of Till Death), the rating should be 9 points or higher, I don't know why the rating is so low (I read it a long time ago, and always thought the rating was high, but I found out it is so low when I read it today, so I give it a five-star rating)

It's the best romance and ghost story novel I've read this year. It was okay in the early stages, but the more I read in the later stages, the more addictive it became (I just don't know why the rating is so low). But I feel like the ending is a little sloppy. I always feel like there's something missing, but I can't put it in words. All in all, I highly recommend this book. (I don't know what to say anymore) When I got to school and had nothing to do, I thought about the plot again. I felt that it was a bit unfinished. I always felt that the final plot was almost uninteresting. There were many holes that I didn't fill in (I didn't write them down in school). But it is undeniable that this book is very readable. The plot and character creation are great. There are no brainless people who deliberately break the rules. Generally speaking, it is very comfortable to read. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Not bad, above average, sweet enough, I don't understand why the rating is so low

The author is great, I order you to update ten times a day [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

It deserves five stars, the concept is very good, and the sweetness is enough, except that Niu Tian is a little unhappy and a little ambiguous, holding the male protagonist's hand

Generally speaking, this book is quite good, but I personally feel that the score is a bit low. Objectively speaking, this book is currently at the forefront of copy-book novels. In the character creation, the male protagonist has qualities such as boldness, carefulness, calmness, etc., But the most important thing I personally feel is that the male protagonist's rational consciousness is greater than perceptual emotions. This is very consistent with the theme of "the end of the world". In this context, society is often accompanied by When etiquette breaks down and happiness breaks down, no one can protect themselves. If the male director ignores his own danger to save others, to put it mildly, this is a demonstration of personal heroism. To put it harshly, this is stupidity. He sacrifices his life to rescue others for the sake of a few friendships. I dare to ask ordinary people who dares to do this (here, as far as novels are concerned, there are still many positive things in real life), the ancients said: A gentleman does not stand under a dangerous wall. In terms of the logic of the novel, the first three copies are closely related, not only highlighting the plot, but also explaining part of the "past and present life" of the male and female protagonists. This can be regarded as a highlight of the book. Another highlight is the position that the author arranged for the male protagonist in the first copy - a learner. Many copies of the text are The protagonist is in the position of a leader from the beginning. I personally feel that this setting is a bit false. Generally speaking, it is very good so far, but there is a common problem in copy stories. The plots in the middle and later stages are easy to be homogenized, which makes people feel boring. I hope the author can be original in the subsequent plots and logic.

I think this book is quite good. The plot design is very novel and the plot is not cliche. It shouldn't be rated this way. [Cover face]

It is very suitable for compulsive readers to read, and the author also controls the details very well.

The writing is so good, I can only say that it is completely inadequate.

Yes, the author also said that he would not join the official list. Come on, I hope you won't be too poisonous in the future, it's still pretty good so far [blowing kiss]

It's quite beautiful, I hope I can write it to the end [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The characters are very vivid, and the expressway is very fast. The author makes people's hearts yellow.

Very good looking, a must-have in the single female lead genre, no problem at all

The male protagonist Zhuang Yang and the female protagonist Sang Li are both well described, but I like Sang Li the most, Yang Sang 99! ! !

It's very interesting, suspenseful and forced love, very atmospheric, and the structure and concept are great, come on!

It's great. The plot, setting, and characters are all great. It's my favorite book. Hope it doesn't end too early