
Turn in the System at the Beginning and Dragon Kingdom and I Have 100 Million Immortal Points
开局上交系统我和龙国有亿点不死
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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Top Book Waste Area, Novices Not Allowed to Enter!
So Is There Any? Warden Gherroth's, Uh, Just Play Wen
I want to read a book similar to "Delta: The Strongest Warlord in Azshara, a freshman". S6 has been online for so long, but there are still few characters like Heros, and you can write about the national destiny, like what? "National Destiny: Warden, ASH-12 jumps the gun at the beginning"
A Pure Document, Handed over to the Country
I want to see content similar to "Live broadcast selling time travel tickets, the world's richest people are going crazy". I want to read a book like the one below. It's a refreshing book. It's a pure and refreshing book.
Bking Article! ! No CP! ! the Kind That's Not Embarrassing! ! !
I want that kind of cool writing! Don't slap me in the face! ! Don't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger! ! Don't be fooled by false rumors! Please read the requirements clearly before recommending, thank you! !
The Country Is in Trouble and There Is No Other Way but to Die for It.
Loyal to the country, loyal to the people
National Destiny, Don't Act Like a Class, Be Systematic and Invincible
The Protagonist Travels Between Two Worlds, with the Country's Father as His Backing!
I want to read a book similar to "Across the Zombie Planet and Back to Earth to Shake People".
I've Seen Enough of the Same Thing. Is There Anything Different? Create a New System.
Such as Chongmei, Douluo, etc., Self-created systems, old bookworms should not be fooled
9.9′ High Score: Traditional Fantasy About Mortals Cultivating Immortality!
I want to read a book similar to "Looking for the Qin Dynasty: The Fairy Land of Yunmeng".













































This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in the Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!
The setting of this book is not much different from other novels of the same type, but the author's writing style is really good, especially the character creation of the male protagonist is wonderful. The setting of the skill "rebirth" is not the illusory so-called lucky chance of other rebirth novels, but a glimmer of life obtained at a real and painful price, which makes it more realistic for me to read. I don't have the feeling that "the protagonist is so powerful because of the protagonist's halo and the author's mother's love", but I am attracted by the protagonist's personality charm.
It's so cool to write. Originally, other civilizations on the same planet are hostile. Just write it to death. The Fourth Disaster ➕ Mechanical Frenzy is a perfect match! I hope to gather the other two in the future [laughing][laughing][laughing] Great cheers to the author!
5 Points, although there are some flaws, it was fun to watch fighting the first world. Steady, accurate and ruthless, yes, it just needs such efficiency, no grinding, looking forward to the second world, I can only say that the Blue Star part has nothing to worry about, look at the back, anyway, the first world is comfortable to watch. I'm currently at Chapter 69, I don't know what happens next. . .
This is a rare good story at the beginning. You can listen to novels and be excited while listening to them. Rare. The beginning is passionate. The back is a bit nondescript.
There is nothing wrong with the book. The mental state of being lonely for hundreds of years and re-awakening it is really well described. This is really fine. It was very enjoyable to read. Sometimes I burst into tears [crying]
This book has great potential, and the world view can be very large. As long as it doesn't collapse, it will definitely become popular. Come on, author, control the rhythm and don't mess up.
Too short [Learned][Learned][Learned] Author, did you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you? Standing at thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle No confusion at forty: Only by updating forty chapters every day can we continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are the destiny, and the entire website praises you so much Sixty and fluent: When you can update 60 chapters a day, everyone including readers will hear what you say will be fluent. When you are seventy, do what you want without going beyond the rules: If you can read 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want [laughter][laughter][laughter]
From February 20th to 21st, 2026, I saw the latest chapter 220 with 500,000 words, which is not bad. Everyone has brains and is a smart person. The plot is okay, mainly the male protagonist uses his collective immortality to defeat the enemy. Single heroine. Disadvantages: It does not reflect the wisdom of top think tanks very well.
I give it 5 stars. This is the simplest plot of this kind of book I have read. It is very interesting. It could use more interesting plots for the public. Especially dormitory F4 is so funny. It could use more of this type.
I really enjoyed it. There are 52 chapters of foreshadowing. It's not as long as I imagined, and there are very few pitfalls. It's basically solved on the spot. The content is basically all questions and answers. Although some of the details are briefly described, I still think it's appropriate. Otherwise, the foreshadowing would have to go beyond 200 chapters. The article of "Brainless Coolness" is already considered to have brains, and some settings are really cool. The infinite resurrection CD is one minute and the items will not be dropped. The bound person can be resurrected randomly, in place, and selected. The bound person can be resurrected with the gift, in place, and follow the bound person. It is really cool to watch.
First of all, the creativity is definitely worth 5 points. However, there are many places that cannot be explored deeply. If you read this book without thinking, it is absolutely ridiculous. The scene design is very grand and the plot is very procrastinating. Basically, you can read 5 chapters into one. If it is updated continuously, it will definitely lose a lot of people. It is estimated that they will die before 500 chapters.
I have read this type of novel a long time ago, but the writing is not as good as the author's. Maybe it is because I have read similar novels, so I can make up for a lot of things that have not been written. I wonder if the pace will be too fast for readers who are new to it. Finally, it's very interesting and resonant. The author will update it quickly [like][like][like][like]
As long as it's not a harem story, I think this is a relatively good story, although the symbiotic relationship between Zhang Xuan and Lin Yue is not very comfortable to watch. Because I have some mysophobia, I found it a bit disgusting, but frankly speaking, this novel is very good both in terms of imaginative subject matter and concept. The rhythm is also good. The ones I watched before were either about mother-in-law or about having mixed feelings. This one is okay, I like it better. I hope the author will continue to work hard and I look forward to the plot behind it.
Looks good, nothing wrong with it. Later, a [veteran] weapon spirit was created, and the protagonist was mainly shaped based on his youthful temperament. He understood everything from his mind and was equivalent to an alternative teenage version of his clone. So, farewell [blowing kiss]
Nice! Currently, my favorite part is the part where omnics develop feelings. The author was very imaginative and thought that the first battle would be a fight to the death with the omnics. Unexpectedly, it was a fusion, and the fusion was perfect. The imagination, plot, characters, and emotions are all on point. The part about respecting women's individual wishes was also very touching!
The book is very good. As long as the book is not too big at the end, it can achieve a rating of 8.2 Or above [Thinking] [Thinking] [Learned] [Learned] [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully]
Although the creativity of this book is not very new, the author's writing style and direction are still quite good. I would give it five stars, and it has the potential of about 9 points. It is non-toxic, edible, and tastes good.
Counting the good books in recent times, after all, I am quite strict, almost all have two stars, but this book, the protagonist, the supporting characters, the logic is really in place... There is no so-called pretentiousness, dog-licking... Only absolute reason and the endless fight between races.
For this platform, the quality of this book is already very high, far surpassing that of assembly-line novels. The author seems to have his own thoughts and does not follow the rules of writing like other authors. I hope that the author can show more emotional routes in the later period. This has nothing to do with whether it is good or not, it is just a curiosity of mine.
Although it is a bit idealistic, the concept and ideas of the novel are still very good, but there are too few [face covering]
The writing is very good, the logic is reasonable, and basically no poisonous points were found. Why is the rating so low?
This book is so magical. Every time I want to read it and delete it, something good will appear immediately, and then I will become addicted again. Then I don't want to read it the next day, and then I will become addicted again ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧
How can I put it this way? When I first watched it, I didn't think it was that good. I really wanted to stop watching it. But it started to become interesting starting from the Omnic. The current evaluation is definitely OK. I will comment on the rest later.
Although I read it relatively short, as far as the current situation is concerned, the content of this book is not good, and the pace is not draggy. The key is that it is much more exciting. It is not brainless or mentally retarded about various foreign countries, and it can even be analyzed reasonably. The protagonist's personal emotional experience is quite impressive to a certain extent. In short, it is a good book, and I recommend reading it (I hope that all readers who clicked on it can read a chapter or two first, and I recommend adding it to your bookshelf)
It looks good and is of high quality. I hope that after entering the battlefield of all races, I can still achieve the same level as now.
Gray is often very beautiful, with rigorous logic and novel themes.
I can't say it's good or bad, but it's shocking and touching. I often burst into tears following the plot. It's great. I've finished watching it. I watched it all at once. If you don't want to be disturbed by others, you can read it all at once. It's worth watching. It's very interesting.
So far it's pretty good, mainly because the protagonist's character is well shaped and the logic is self-consistent. For example, the biggest bug at the beginning was that the omnics were so powerful, but the protagonist relied on a crippled system that increased his lifespan and had no effect at all. How could he escape for 100 years? At that time I wanted to give a bad review. But these latest chapters perfectly explain why! And the description of the omnics is very interesting! There are various flaws in the book, but only Chapter 73, the description of artificial intelligence when negotiating with the queen of the omnic tribe, can be regarded as a god! It perfectly embodies the state of a mechanical race before acquiring emotions. All actions are based on calculation and "ruthlessness" based on logic.
I've only read twenty chapters, so I can't say whether it's good or not. Because I really like the atmosphere in it, I ignored some minor flaws. But this book is definitely suitable for people who are patriotic but have some brains.