Guilty House: Sun Sign

The copy is quite novel and imaginative. Anyway, I liked it. The writing style is quite good (is the author a liberal arts student? I am also a liberal arts student). The best thing about the author is that he gave the supporting character Gui Ke in the copy more performance and role, instead of focusing the spotlight only on the protagonist. I don't personally like the author's early portrayal of the heroine, but considering that the heroine is a growth-oriented character, I'm looking forward to Xiao Gu's subsequent performance (I'll give it four stars first, for fear that the author will be proud)

Overall it's pretty good, the writing is good enough, and the dungeons are okay. However, I don't really like the continuous dungeons that are always behind you. I prefer different types of blood gates, such as those at the beginning, especially Please Smile at Me, which already gives me the feeling of reading the original. Come on, author, you are going to take the high school entrance examination, don't be in such a hurry, you can write again during the summer vacation.

This book is quite good. It can be said to be a very high-quality novel among the fictitious houses. I recommend everyone to read it. The author is very active and can give you more comments. The only shortcoming is that the supporting characters are too poor and the heroine has poor psychological quality and can easily cry.

I feel like I can't get hooked on this book. After listening to it for a few days, I don't have the same feeling as listening to The Conspiracy. [Crying] I don't know if it's a plot problem or a problem with listening to the book.

Very beautiful, the characters have distinct personalities

After watching the first part of The House, I'm here to catch up on the second part. Come on, author.

I like it very much. It not only has the flavor of the original work, but also has innovative settings about "mutation". I am particularly interested in the character design of "Sun Sign", I hope it can be introduced in the book as soon as possible

It has the flavor of the original work [laughing] The battle between the wolf and the military spirit in Blue River Kindergarten is a bit outrageous. Will the ghost weapon in the seventh door not be able to kill the one in the second door? It's a bit broken. Please improve it.

It's weird compared to Guishe, but apart from Guishe, I think it's already very good! ! ! Very nice! ! !

I feel like this book just isn't scary enough for me. Compared with other books, it's really good, but it just gives people a very dramatic feel, and it's hard to give people that shocking feeling [crying]

The author's writing style is excellent. It is the first time he writes a book and he has shown a very high literary quality. The future is promising, and the content is also very attractive and the atmosphere is well created. What I am most looking forward to is the emotional line of the male and female protagonists. I hope there will be more progress and a happy ending. Finally, I wish the author to write better and better and have more and more fans! ! !

It's really beautiful! Both have their own strengths and weaknesses. The author is very powerful and the protagonist's image is well created [laughs]. I hope the author will work hard! !

The best fanfic I've ever read ~

After watching The Conspiracy, I found this to be quite enjoyable. I think we can use more ghost weapons. Didn't Ning Qiushui have two or three before?

The first copy is okay, highlighting the emotions between generals and soldiers, but it lacks a lot of rendering of the horror atmosphere. The author can describe the horror atmosphere more and create an ups and downs of horror atmosphere. You can refer to the description of the horror atmosphere of the ghost copy in Mysterious Resurrection.

The logic is a little worse than the old novels, and the wits are not that strong, but it's good.

It's quite nice. The author's writing style is well structured and gives me the feeling of reading the original novel [shy][shy][shy]

Okay, it's very well written, it feels like a treacherous house.

The writing is very good, the first copy was so touching [crying], the plot is deeply rooted in people's hearts [like]

The difficulty of the first door is very difficult

Personally, I feel that many dungeons have a good look and feel (better than trying to make up for it), but the physical strength of the male protagonist makes me miss Brother Ning, and the female protagonist is too soft-tempered and not as good as Sister Bai. Overall, I will give it four stars based on the follow-up performance [laughter]

The plot is very good, full of horror elements, and it is connected to the treacherous house. It still needs a short drama, I look forward to it!

The high-quality works in the fandom seem to be very exciting and interesting.

Very good, good luck to the author

This is unexpectedly pretty

Good, good, good, good, good, good The author actually liked it

It's good to read the fanfic of Guishe

The author's writing is very good, the characters are distinct, and the storyline is reasonable. It's just a pity that too few people read it and there are too few paragraphs and comments. Please give the author a big boost.

It's good to watch, but the main character in it is a bit different from Qiu Shui. I hope it will be changed.

So far it looks pretty good, because I am also a junior high school student writing a book, and I am about the same age as the author. Although the book is not a fan of Guishe, it is also an infinite flow... I am digressing, but I personally feel that the author's book is about 8 points.