My Ability Is Too Overpowered, So I Voluntarily Turn It Over to the Nation

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. The battle lasted hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong! If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. But I think Lu Bu can't sworn sworn sworn friends with Ace. He should sworn sworn sworn friends with Taro, because they both have two horns on their heads. When I was in the Land of Light, I witnessed Luffy stuffing his rubber fist into Belial's nostrils. At this time, Tom and Jerry came out and accused Luffy of doing this. Sun Wukong's golden cudgel should be used, otherwise Beria's nose will flow out from the right side, and then Prime Minister Zhuge will not be able to flood the Seventh Army. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! [Angry][angry][angry]

I can only say that diaosi should not write a high-ranking protagonist, it would be too dramatic. As a national treasure that can change the direction of civilization, he went to the street alone to find food when he was hungry, and went to the store to buy cultivation resources. This is trying to make people laugh.

"Well, Mr. Sun said that you can leave the Martial Arts Research Institute at any time. Then you can go out to eat. There is no food in the capital. You can go to restaurants or stalls outside to eat." It's poison at the beginning. It's okay if no one follows you. You have to find your own food. [Smile] It's not that you are so delicate. You are a top-level person. There is no arrangement at all. [Smile] The life of the rich is the same as Dundun's Crazy Thursday.

It feels okay, but every time the protagonist feels that the conditions are too high, I don't think so, can't I implement the lower things first, thereby reducing the conditions required for the high-level things?

What are the levels of superpowers, and how are martial arts realms divided? How are spiritual realms divided? A national strategic core is running around making friends? After the technique was created, the military did not say who had mastered it or to what extent?

I have seen similar settings before, or it is not uncommon at all. The plot is quite satisfactory, but there are some minor flaws in the details. The most difficult thing is that every paragraph has to mention fairness, fairness and justice. In fact, none of them can be considered fair. It is already the most unfair thing that the protagonist has a superpower that turns fake into real. I don't read the novel to see fairness. The protagonist has no cheats/natural talents and I still don't read it [face covering] My personal rating is 7.5. The constant mention of fairness makes people feel bad.

This book could be without so much pretense, brainless villains, mentally retarded passers-by and supporting characters. It would be plain and interesting. [Lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]Although it can't be called a fairy grass or a high-quality novel, the novel is really not that poisonous. I finally stopped eating history. I became a Shennong every day and I was already delirious. [Cry][cry][cry]

Develop more systems and develop them in the directions of all worlds, major dimensions, novels, animations, movies, and the main god Cthulhu, etc. You can create various protagonists.

You have to write the name Li Xiao hundreds of times in one paragraph. You are really good at it.

A lot of dialogue has been skipped, and the level of combat power and technological development is unclear. It's a bit too taken for granted.