Deep Sea Hunter: Brother, You Are Not Allowed to Sleep Here

It is rated as a super big cup. The author is very interesting and keeps up with current affairs. I also like the character of the protagonist very much. The plot also makes up for the regret at the time. There is no heroine at the moment. I hope there will be no CP so that I can knock whoever I want. The doctor in the plot is so cute, the cute doctor makes me spin

How can I put it this way? The author's writing style is pretty good and there's nothing uncomfortable about it. According to my current understanding (the author did not explain clearly), the protagonist is a hybrid version of a deep-sea hunter and a heir (?), But his subconscious resists the assimilation of the large group. In fact, when reading this book, hey, let's just talk about me for now, it's for the Deep Sea Hunters and Heirs. But after the first incident, the protagonist went to Rhodes Island to save the doctor. That's not to say it's not as good as the main plot, but it just doesn't feel fresh, and indeed, the progression of the plot doesn't seem very bright either. But I still decided to give 5 stars for encouragement. Come on, author, you have to work hard to write the new book! (And the last bit of selfishness, I want to see Didi [cry]) I saw Didi! The author is a good person! It should be confirmed that the heroine is Skadi. At present, the author does not strictly follow the main line and has his own ideas. There are no poisonous points, and the plot is relatively stable. I look forward to the author's exciting plots in the future! Keep writing, author!

The writing style is really good, it is very funny and has no flair. Now that I have seen Casimir, the author has a thorough understanding of the situation at the racecourse. The characters that appear are not OOC. I hope there is no cp. After all, there are only a few people left in the deep sea hunter. Their bond and mutual dependence cannot be described by such poor words as love.

Goodgood watched half of it and found it to be a super big cup. It is lighthearted and cheerful. It follows the main line, but most of them are original and daily. The protagonist is a funny character who is very likable. There is no hard and funny point about shitting and peeing. The author keeps pace with the times and is too dense. At present, I think it is a single female protagonist, Skadi (but I still hope it is pure cb without cp. If the author Rouse is really a single female protagonist, Skadi, can he change the introduction and add a warning? It would be too bad to trick people without cp into killing them). Anyway, it is very interesting and worth watching! Are you so out of context? Author, please wait for me, don't force me to beg you to update, it's the first time I see such a full fan original character, the knight chapter is really beautiful😭A real Don Quixote, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo more maybe, I that, I really want Sancho to win this competition, he will win, right author? 👁👄👁 Wooooowoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo maybe,... Go, goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,...

Disadvantages: The battle descriptions are long and boring and often span one or two chapters. This is especially obvious when looking at Siyuan's lifeline. During the integration chapter, there was a serious OC phenomenon, and Shuangxing, Patriot and others basically had no description of them since they came to the island, as if that part of the plot was just written to let them go to the island. The psychological growth of the protagonist is not very obvious and is basically concentrated in the first volume. In addition, there are also scattered shortcomings such as some inappropriate jokes and inappropriate jokes. Advantages: The author's writing style is quite good and you can mostly understand what he wants to express when reading. In terms of character creation, the image of Sancho in the third volume is very popular. It is a pity that only this character is so successfully created, and the other characters are average. The plot arrangement is okay. In summary, A-, to be honest, it is not easy to have a work like this in this fan circle. It is a work worth watching. Ps: The above is purely my personal opinion. If you have other opinions, then you are right.

According to the title introduction and the content of this article, it is a single female protagonist named Skadi. The main character is a fusion of hunter and sea boy. So to match the youth sea boy in the title, the senior hunter (?) Is Skadi. Eh☝️🤓 Could it be the domineering hunter Skadi and the youthful seaside Finn? Skadi and her little wife (?) Finn

I don't know what cup it is, but I like it very much😋 It's the first time I meet a local male protagonist who combines three-dimensional memes. The plot is very boat-like, especially the Casimir chapter. I like it the most. The main plot of Siesta and Dosores is a bit boring, but the description of the alien part is very exciting. The Jie Yuan chapter is more flavorful than that in Meat Pigeon. I don't know much about Zhong Terror, but I feel that the atmosphere in the story is very strong and the transitions are also very powerful. Anyway, I like it very much☺️ There is one point. The college student who traveled through time and became a sea heir is not mentioned again. Was he completely refined by Finn? There is no such person in the subsequent plot about identity, which is a bit regretful.

Xinran, the original plot is very interesting. Some descriptions can be seen as childish, but generally it is smooth and natural. The protagonist's personality is lovable and the interactions are cute. Apart from the jokes, I don't see the little hair strength. Good reviews.

Looks good, I recommend it! Click to watch "Deep Sea Hunter, Haidilao Complete Rescue", yes, yes, if your child has a big appetite, he will eat all the lunches like this, hahahaha

The title of the book is relatively light novel, but the writing is really good. The protagonist is very handsome and cute. It should be a single female protagonist. There is no hint of ambiguity at the moment, but I will give it a heads up first. The most important thing is that there are no small heads and the rhythm of the story is very comfortable to watch. I feel like the author is an idealist, and the stories all have beautiful outcomes, but that's the meaning of fandom [sending my heart]

The writing is beyond awesome. . . It has a sense of melancholy from the original work, the depressing kind, where everyone is in silent sadness but encourages each other to find directions, chats and farts to liven up the atmosphere. I can't tell, but it does have a lot of character, it's not a flat work. But sometimes the memes are abrupt and strange. Other than that it's very good! Very good! I drew several pictures in a row. Oops, I forgot to post them.

What is the legendary adventure of a boy pocketing someone else's pocket and pocketing someone else's pocket!

It's a blast for Finn... The writing is very smooth and beautiful, with just the right ratio between sensational and funny, sober and serious, and the fighting scenes are top-notch, and sometimes you can even feel the aesthetics of violence. If the author can maintain this level, not cheat, and finish normally, I am willing to join my fanfic list of the year. It's no secret that I stayed up all night until 5 o'clock to read it... I was so sleepy... By the way, Garrison Agreement is really fun.

Everything else is good, a very good book. I liked Finn very much and was very fascinated by it. The following started to express dissatisfaction There are spoilers Later in the third volume - Chapter 15 of the fourth volume is really written like I don't know what the world is like and everything has gone to outer space. I patiently read through 6 chapters, but it's not labeled as a spin-off. I just finished a volume and I understand that the author wants to relax the pace, but chapter 15 is too long, forcing me to use full-text search to jump to chapter 16. I'm waiting to see the follow-up. I really don't know how those who follow the update can endure the update period of these 15 chapters. After all, no one knew how long the author would update it at that time. Just like I don't know how long it will take for this inexplicable extra chapter to end without using full-text search. Why is it that WOC hasn't ended yet when I click on the next chapter? Watch Finn Ulbian rendezvous with Rhodes Island and meet the Skadi Ghost Shark before leaving. Let's see if Lao Ma will go to the island ← After the third volume, it seems like she disappeared. I really wrote people to death for the sake of sensationalism. I thought it would be like the team's allin, and I was a little surprised. Of course, after skipping chapters, I knew that none of it was there, but it didn't matter. I was very happy to see a coherent follow-up. Come on

Good luck, meow, among the Ark fandom books that are still relatively stable and updated, I came across two interesting ones, and this is one of them. It's quite an entertaining book, but as of Chapter 23 of the third volume, I can't recall the memories of my past life. The past life related mainly exists in jokes. Powerful, powerful, of course I am talking about the physical strength of a deep sea hunter.

People who have never played this game accidentally stumbled into this fanfic, and it feels pretty good. But there are some shortcomings. I have read dozens of early chapters, and I feel like I am following the plot of the game. As a result, once I enter the plot, the narrative of the novel becomes unclear and progresses very quickly. For example, in the town where I was born, it ends in a dozen chapters. It feels like it is also assisted by AI. Some of the dialogues are long and short, and there are a lot of them. To put it simply, it is just a human-machine talking. Next is the Doctor. I read in the book that everyone was very happy after the Doctor appeared, so I was looking forward to the interaction between the Doctor and the protagonist. But I was disappointed that there weren't many, and it didn't highlight the abilities and character of the Doctor and the protagonist.

The writing is sophisticated and smooth, and it is very comfortable to read. The plot is coherent and not cliche, and the logic is complete. It is among the best in fan fiction. The plot of Dosores is mediocre and not as good as the previous two films.

Despite the low rating, this book is undoubtedly a good book! It's very delicious, the pace is not draggy, the plot is compact, and it's funny. The protagonist is a combination of a sea heir and a deep-sea hunter? The author is updating steadily, recommended to join! [Sending Hearts]

It's well written and very interesting. I wish I could pay more attention to some minor issues. For example, the male protagonist never goes back to get his sword at the beginning. I've never played Werewolf and I really don't understand it. But overall it's still very interesting. Come on, author. The emotional line is not very obvious, single heroine Didi? Or multiple heroines? Leave one star first, and then save it until the follow-up relationship line is written, then come back and watch it all at once, and then add the five stars.

Come on, I'm already looking forward to the time when Gladia and Biscuit come to pick people up. Parents (cross out) the majesty of captain. Can the author update ten times a day?

It's great. It's a ten or even nine out of ten. It's really pleasant to read two chapters on the bridge.

The writing is smooth and the logic is clear, but the update is a bit slow. It is rated as a Super big cup!

It looks pretty good. The protagonist's funny character has caused the darkness of this land to dissipate a lot, so the overall atmosphere is light and cheerful.

A super awesome Ark novel, the plot is very smooth, not embarrassing or stupid, the plot has its own ideas, the writing is not bad, the protagonist is a bit dull but not like that, it is very interesting, Hai Superman, come in and read it generously [Like]

The plot is big, the update is medium. The author's level of genius is huge.

I like the setting of the protagonist and the plot of coming to Rhodes Island, fighting in the city, meeting Didi and 52, and I also like all the jokes. I deducted one star because the AI ​​flavor is too strong. It was okay before, but in Casimir it was a bit too concentrated, such as all kinds of "it's not... It's...", Some comparisons and fragmentary details. It may be that the author gave the written outline to the AI ​​development meeting or the first draft to be polished by AI. I can't ask for anything from free articles. I hope the author will write better and better. If possible, I can get rid of the AI ​​taste.

The author asks, is the protagonist a sea heir or a hunter?

Nice. I saved a lot of regrets, and I also have a lot of regrets, especially Serafion and Skadi. Although Didi can form a new bond with Finn, her Seraphine is no longer there after all. The only thing I feel is that the plot processing in Qicheng and Longmen is a bit too simple, and it does not fully reflect the complex thoughts of the plot characters and the confrontation between various forces. This is actually not as good as the Iberian part of the opening chapter. Another question, does the senior sister in the title of the book refer to Didi?

Both the book and the male protagonist are oversized, so I hope there is no emotional line (

This book is a masterpiece among Ark. It is not as good as Qi Yan's, but it is still in the middle and upper reaches. "Except Update" updates are too slow. Just about two a week. I had this time, and I went to chase other books. When I came back, I had to read a few more before I remembered what was in front of me.