Divine Condor************

The writing of this book is excellent, but the characterization is quite unflattering. Yang Guo is a talkative evil spirit who threatens to send Xiao Longnu to Yin Zhiping's bed (because Xiao Longnu didn't take the initiative to save him, but actually helped him. You are a Quanzhen Taoist priest, so it's good that they didn't kill you). He teases Guo Xiang just to make Huang Rong jealous, and then takes the initiative to tell Huang Rong that he doesn't like Guo Xiang, and reveals that he is not Yang Guo's true self, but another soul. There is a big difference between the character of Xiao Longnu and the original work, and she is familiar with Yin Zhiping at the beginning (which is a bit unreasonable). Knowing that the protagonist is in the coffin, she maliciously closes the lid of the coffin. It would have been enough to give her a lesson, but after being locked up for three days and not opening it, she was completely left to fend for herself. This cannot be explained by the word cold-blooded. Yin Zhiping was also portrayed as an unrestrained hypocrite from the comedy character in the early and mid-term, and he wanted to drug Xiao Longnu. I don't think this is considered poisonous. After all, it is common to step on Yin Zhiping, but it is not in line with the original image. Aside from the above, it's worth watching. The plots of martial arts training, fighting, emotions, etc. Are vividly depicted, and the plot is quite excellent. But giving away a girl is just talk without real action. Yang Guo and Yin Zhiping will not deal with it. Xiao Longnu will definitely not give it away later. Readers who are worried about green can rest assured, but this plot arrangement makes people uncomfortable. To some new readers: This book does have the unpleasant plots I described, but it also has a lot of merits. I really don't like Yang Guo's portrayal. There are too many plots about coveting female characters and his words are too frivolous, which makes him less charming. However, Huang Rong Xiao Longnu is very cute except for a few shortcomings. What I mentioned above The shortcomings are just some one-sided excerpts, not the whole picture, so I am still chasing this book now. This review is for readers who really can't accept these elements, such as people who read Shendiao fandom specifically for Yang Longzhi's love. But if you are currently in need of a book to relieve your shortcomings and can tolerate these shortcomings, this book will be a good choice. Editor 3: I thought I could bear it, but I can't bear it anymore. The protagonist is really disgusting and the plot is really disgusting. You guys should come and eat this.

It's so beautiful, and the emotions are delicate when you conquer Huang Rong. Xiao Longnu was not lenient at all when she gave it to Yi Zhiping. To torture readers like this is very similar to the style of female videos. With skin-to-skin contact, I am not ready to give it away. Everyone can come back [laughs evilly]

The writing is delicate, the style is both solemn and humorous, humorous, and the pace is neither fast nor slow, but just right. The details are well thought out and fascinating! Those who don't write books will applaud and applaud, those who write books will watch and worship! To sum it up in three words - it's so beautiful!

The writing is very good, Huang Rong's transformation is not abrupt, and the writing of Dragon Girl is also very interesting. It's hard to write fanfics like Shendiao because the characters are so deeply rooted in people's hearts. The advantage is that you don't have to think about the background. The disadvantage is that everyone can pick their brains.

The author is great. First of all, the writing style is very good. After reading more than sixty chapters, I think that I would rather have more female protagonists than Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu separated because Huang Rong is alone [crying] [crying] [crying]

It was well written, but I didn't like the plot of Little Dragon Girl. I always wanted to give her to Yin Zhiping. If you accept it, it will be an act of self-indulgence. If you don't accept it, you will lead the red line to Yin Zhiping. But there should be many people who like to watch this section. Yin Zhiping can kill or not, hey, just keep it for fun. Let's write a plot about Dragon Knight [shocked]

The psychological description is delicate, and the psychological changes of the characters are written down to the bone. Recommend

The plot is smooth, the writing is good, and it has a great sense of detail!

I've read a lot of fan fiction, and this one is quite special. The angle is very innovative. The writing style is also delicate and precise, and the story is told in a eloquent manner with high logic and credibility. Personally, I really like this style of author who carefully constructs the plot and dialogue. And I've read too many system articles, and it's really not as interesting as just traveling through time and changing everything else through your own efforts. Come on, look forward to more exciting follow-up!

Reasonable, thoughtful, meticulous and well-fitting

As a time-travel novel, it's pretty good all day long. The main story line is a bit different from the original work, but the inner portrayal of the characters is a bit like the original work! What I want to say is, where did the Emei sect come from when Guo Xiang was not born yet? 🐷

The writing is smooth, the concept is bold, the rhythm is tight, and the story is full of twists and turns. Gripping and fascinating: describes things or scenery that are very attractive, immersive, and fascinating. Wonderful[like][like][like]

Great writing! The plot is smooth, funny, and the writing is refreshing

The writing is delicate, the changes come naturally, and the author has a solid foundation

When I posted the review, I didn't finish it yet, so I gave it a score of 7.2 For the time being. Therefore, I want to score in advance and do justice. This book is not a mindless novel, it pays attention to the rationality of the plot. This book has delicate descriptions and smooth writing. It should be said that it deserves more than 9 points. Worth reading for most normal people.

It's great. It's just that Ronger's strategy is too fast, but the writing is delicate and it looks really cool.

The writing is vivid, the descriptions are delicate, and there is no nonsense. How dare Yang Guo try to bring Yin Zhiping and Xiao Longnu together in the beginning? Is this still a man? He must be very possessive.

It's quite pretty, the flowers are a bit colorful, but not too exaggerated. The pace is a little slow and the details are well described. Worth seeing

It's very interesting, fascinating, the plot is reasonable, and the ethical sentiments make people want to stop [laughing][laughing][laughing]

He has a good grasp of the weaknesses of human nature!

Present wonderfully, don't overshadow it with one sentence

Very beautiful very wonderful

The plot is new and bold, suitable for young people's tastes

The Legend of the Condor Heroes, this book is clear in its writing and reasoning, recalling the past stories and further exploring them in depth.

It is a very seriously written novel, especially the detailed description of martial arts is logical and has some hints of Jin Yong! The emotional descriptions are also delicate and the characters stand up! No nonsense

The current score is 7.8. The score is low but the writing style is very good. It looks very comfortable. Huang Rong's transformation is not abrupt. There are not many such articles. The scores of many articles look much different from the actual ones.

I watched helplessly as I read from tens of thousands to more than 800,000 now, and it should be over one million soon. This is about becoming a god with one book! I really want to cry with envy TT! The author's writing style is very good, he understands readers very well, and he is good at teasing. The only shortcoming is that he always wants to give Xiao Longnu away, which is really unacceptable. If he finally gives it away, many readers will stop here, right?

The writing is good and the content is interesting, but the updates are too slow. Can I have two more chapters a day?

Very good, my favorite style

Come on, author! It's so heart-breaking to wait. Come on, author, you can't wait any longer [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]