Zhanshen: Qiye Is Mine, You Can Do Whatever You Want with the Rest.

Speaking from my own subjective point of view: Ever since Su Ze's clone came out, this novel has not been as good as before. Ever since Su Ze was bound to a system, it directly made me feel uncomfortable, and it became more and more uncomfortable as I read it (up to the updated chapters so far). I feel that the focus has changed and the heroine's role has become less. Even if Su Wan can cancel this clone at will, it will be much better. Regardless of the subsequent content, this book is the best I have ever read. [Laugh]

No matter what, I have to give myself a five-star review for the book I wrote [laughing evilly] I won't say more about some people. I'll make a conclusion before the book is finished. Read carefully. You read carefully.

It really looks good, but I don't know why it's not popular Author, please don't give up [cry][cry][cry][cry]

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In fact, it should be given 4 stars. Well, if you are just a newbie, it is actually not bad. Yeah, it makes me feel nostalgic. As for the writing style, it's that cute and new style. I haven't seen such cute writing style in a long time. The second is the poisonous point. For example, the clone system, well, if you want to write a book in the future, I suggest you change it, and then, uh, the system is a bit too active. I feel like this is a bit like the system from Maoke. Tomato is not suitable for such a system. My suggestion is to change it to be more human-machine. If you really like it, just pretend I didn't say it. It depends on personal preference. Another thing that new writers particularly like is to raise the protagonist's combat power to a very high level. This leads to a problem. If you say he is invincible, he is not very invincible. If you say he is not invincible, wow, his combat power is a bit too high. So it doesn't look very good. In fact, not many romance novels are written about high combat effectiveness, because it is a bit too much, because it cannot reflect the emotional relationship between the protagonists. As for the advantages, it is the characterization. In fact, the characterization is quite good. Then the writing style is rather nostalgic. I can only say that it is nostalgic.

Back again? Why was the previous book taken off the shelves?

I really have to control you in the whole halved ending [smile]

The plot and stuff are okay. But in fact, it is not recommended to add another system. There is a system that is easier to accept. If there are two systems, conspiracy theories are more likely to arise. For example, does he have a certain purpose? Or the system is deceiving you, in order to win over you. If you add another system, you will easily feel this way. There is a kind of permeability like a sieve.

This book won't be jailed and crashed [smile]

The teacher is so awesome, the plot is so sweet, and the logic is very detailed

That's okay, why couldn't the protagonist be a girl before traveling through time?

I have read dozens of chapters and I feel pretty good. I hope the author can update it faster.

Hee hee hee૮(˶ᵔᵕᵔ˶)ა, although the author's writing skills are not very good, but the writing is also very sweet [love]

OK, it's very interesting, I'm too lazy to comment. [Code hold]

I have a friend who was so angry that the author was too slow to update. He cried and fussed, so pitiful, so the author should update quickly!

Yes, well written. However, Xiao Qiye is me! So, deduct one star! !

The plot can be very well written

Watching Zhan Shen for the first time

A very nice fanfic

It feels pretty good, but what about Jialan?

It's beautiful, so beautiful. The author is a bit erotic and a bit sublime.

This article is very consistent with the content of "Slaying Gods". The pace of the article is relatively slow and suitable for leisure.

The author can do it! By the way, have any of the author's books been removed from the shelves?

Very good, good, come on✊

It's kind of interesting. I said that there was a book on my bookshelf that was taken off the shelf [laughs]

Very good! Even though I've never seen God of Destruction, I think it's pretty good.

Good looking and recommended, not lacking in strength

Okay٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ Good-looking, so beautiful

It feels pretty good, good-looking, strong

I think it's very nice