Don't Eat It, My Lord, They Are Tourists

I thought I was the only one, but I didn't expect that the book reviews downstairs also said that I read Zhang Xiaohua's taste. The author really recommends to refer to the first chaos in history, and the lines can be more market-friendly and humorous. Just a suggestion, it's really rare to find a novel that captures Zhang Xiaohua's taste

It's worth taking a look, it's not bad. There is no need to bring the rules of reality into it. Let's look at the following words. If it is wrong, I will follow up. It would be better to have fewer emotional scenes. If you want to write about it, don't write about it. The above is my personal opinion. At present, the negative reviews are all for emotional scenes. Follow-up reviews will follow. I am sure that the emotional scenes are too problematic. If the emotional scenes are not changed, they will most likely be scrapped. If there are no emotional scenes, it can be ranked four to five stars. If there are emotional scenes, it will be rated two to three stars.

The writing is quite good, and I really had a vision of Zhang Xiaohua when I read it. The popularity and ratings are not worthy of your book. If you can maintain this pace, you may not be able to envision the height of "The First Chaos in History". After 50 chapters, the author's own characteristics take over.

I just read Chapter 8, but I found it very interesting. It feels a bit like the most chaotic book in history, but that book was all about historical figures. The monsters in Journey to the West do feel like a pretty good theme.

It's a very interesting setting, and the writing is pretty good. Is it actually a romance genre on a male channel? It felt wrong when the ex-girlfriend reappeared, the kind of woman who could fight with the male protagonist for six years, because the part where they broke up inexplicably at the beginning of the story was really a highlight. Moreover, writing such an interesting story with such a large proportion of love plot makes me cry to death [crying]. The above is purely personal perception. So far, I can recommend it to those who like male love dramas. It may be different in the future.

Funny and humorous, great to watch, five-star review [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] It's true that I'm high, and it's also true that the story behind the story involves the flow of love [face covering]

The subject matter is quite interesting, but there are more urban classic show-off and slap-in-the-face plots, especially the ex-girlfriend-related scenes. Although it is a zoo, it has only been a bear and a lion for so long, and the true identities of some monsters behind it cannot be revealed. It looks like it will become an amusement park in the future, and they will make money by relying on those magic spells. I hope the author has better ideas.

Very well written and very interesting Why is the rating so low? It's obviously pretty good.

It's all good, but I'm speechless after looking at all the hints and can't imagine the protagonist of Erlangshen. When will he know who he is? [Awkward laugh]

It's definitely a good book, the characters are vivid, and there are all kinds of jokes, funny ones, funny ones, driving ones, hahaha, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. After a few chapters, I suddenly realized that I couldn't help but go back and read it again, and then write a review. It's a good book, and the rating is definitely low.

It's of high quality. It could be made into an anime. Especially the plot is coherent and the plot has the feel of an animation. It's not an exaggeration to say that it already has the charm of a sacred book. How come the rating is so low?

Although I am unhappy with the fact that he basically doesn't kill anyone, his faults are not concealed, and the gap between him and the enemy is made up for by crushing him. Overall, it ranks among the top five Tomato books I've read, and the quality is quite good.

My friends persuaded me several times before I was willing to open this novel. Unexpectedly, I was gripped by this novel as soon as I opened it. When I first read it, my eyes were filled with the ups and downs of the plot, and I felt like every word was stepping on my heart. On the tip, I read it heartily. I couldn't help but pick it up and read it again after half a month. I was shocked and amazed. It turned out that the author had secretly buried all the foreshadowings between the lines. The written words and inks are all just sketchy and gray lines that coincide with the fate of the characters. Every time I read it, new details pop up and make people's hearts warm. It took a long time after closing the book. The principles of treating people slowly and appreciating it hidden in the story are still in my mind, and I can't get rid of it. I deliberately found the most suitable plain white book, and every time I re-read it, I quickly wrote down the sudden insights seriously, for fear that I would forget this touch in the next second.

It's a very interesting daily novel. The characters of each big demon are very interesting. It has the most chaotic shadow in history. It is worth recommending.

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Okay, okay, a bit like Zhang Xiaohua. . He keeps showing off and slapping her in the face, and every few chapters, it's like how his ex-girlfriend is doing and she can't get over it anymore. It's a bit of a waste of this writing style and imagination. It's more about running a zoo and the humorous interactions between the monsters and the protagonist, and less about mindless and cool writing. No wonder the rating is not high. The few minor villains that were dealt with were so low that they lowered the quality of the entire book. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food.

Somewhat obviously the first messy style, though! I have to say but, the content has a tomato-like feel (actually it is funny and refreshing), it is very suitable to read when you have nothing to do, to relax your nerves.

The writing is very good, the style is a bit similar to the first chaos in history, the subject matter is great, it seems to be fairy grass at the moment

The plot is good, the characters are good and not too toxic, but the content is too small. Please do your best, the author.

Personally, I feel that the writing is very good, without any poisonous points. The story line is relatively smooth and the characters are well interspersed. The only shortcoming is that it is a little less exciting and has too little linkage with the so-called "749" that follows. There are so many chapters, but in fact it just doesn't highlight the power of the demon.

I've been following it for a long time, and I can't stand it until the latest chapter. Let's talk about my book friends first. Many book friends said that I haven't read the book Xiao Hua, so I would like to share my thoughts on this novel and my subsequent guesses about the plot. Most of them I have read very interestingly, and I am looking forward to who will come next. There is basically a pattern for collecting monsters. If you are not convinced, Erlang Shen Dharma will be included as soon as it comes out, and then The heroine, most likely it will be the spider. Not to mention the single heroine, then the monsters in the spider's body will be separated in the future, and then Su will become an ordinary person, the protagonist Erlangshen returns to heaven, and then the two of them will be together. If it weren't for the fact that the protagonist is just an ordinary person, how can he be with the spider? Then Zhu Bajie and the little white dragon are here. I wonder if Tang Monk is not born yet? Will Little White Dragon look for the reincarnation of Tang Sanzang again when he comes? Wukong is coming soon, and I really don't know how to get along with monsters. If Wukong is written as weak, it will be great, and then it can be ignored. As for the book, overall it is good. Compared with others, this one can still be read. If you are bored, you can read it.

But people's physiques cannot be treated in the same way. When I was in junior high school, I was hit by a nuclear bomb and was knocked unconscious for two days before I woke up. Afterwards, I went to the cafeteria and ate 50 kilograms of rice and 30 kilograms of beef. Then I beat more than 50 classmates with my bare hands and went out to shovel a tiger. The physique of an athletic student is by no means unworthy of its reputation.

Very enjoyable to watch. However, the Great Demon from Journey to the West has no ability to control it. It is unrealistic to be so easily obedient. It would be a big deal if just one of them goes out to eat people. It is too optimistic. The protagonist can deprive them of their abilities. It is actually a good intervention, but it is basically useless. It is all settled by Erlang Shen Dharma Body. Collecting the three demons of Shituoling is like child's play. They feed on human beings, and they will be obedient as soon as they are beaten. Collecting the demons like a matryoshka doll, alas. The Great Demon Fight takes place in an ecological park. The losses include fallen trees, collapsed houses, and even the stalls on the street outside can't feel it. It's not just messing around, it's okay to create a barrier and not let people out if they don't obey [grievance]. The more I look at it, the more boring it becomes.

This book only has a score of 7.5. Maybe it's because the writing was too slow and the author didn't polish his writing well? Starting from Chapter 60 or 70, I gradually gained the rhythm of a great master. Chapter 89 or 90 started to look really good. Is this the author's first time writing a book? The level is really good. I hope you can write faster. It's really rare to be able to write such funny everyday articles. I feel like it's the most chaotic in history.

If this book is written as it is, it will definitely become a hit on paid platforms.

Very promising, the idea is novel, the setting is very good, it looks very comfortable now, keep up the good work I really want to say this when I see this. So pretty. Very interesting. Not boring. Chase

The book is very beautiful, has the flavor of Zhang Xiaohua, and is very interesting. But after everyone is done having fun, you can also read another book about Yang Jian, "Life is long and the water is always in the east - Yang Jian". Give yourself a break and refresh yourself.

Looks good, Brother Monkey and Zhu Bajie, will they come too? Great writing, keep it up⛽⛽⛽

It's so beautiful. The last one was the most confusing in history.

It feels pretty good. Come on, author, code quickly.