Female Majesty: Something's Not Right with My Cold Disciple

Kou Gua😡, certified by Shennong, this is what Shennong wants to watch, it's a masterpiece that needs no further explanation, it's an isolation-induced yandere, with a reason, a process, and a brain, the plot is delicate, the writing is comfortable, and it has just been updated to the point where the yandere has to eat, Jinkouya! Shennong has already had an intracranial orgasm [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Kids, here I go again At present, the general plot is that the male protagonist Bingqing failed to survive the tribulation and was imprisoned and taken care of by the yandere female protagonist. Then the male protagonist gradually let go of the so-called master-disciple plot. The advantage is that the writing style is quite good. Whether it is the environment, the characters' mental processes, small actions, etc., They are all very well grasped and well written. Maybe it's because of my personal reasons that it feels a bit strange. This kind of writing and style would be very good in any fairy tale. But if you say it's a female-dominated novel, then I might not be able to see it. I feel that the male protagonist's design is quite strange compared to this style. Instead, the male protagonist is made to be cold and resistant to emotions. If you don't mind what I said about the look and feel being a bit strange, then this is really suitable for a deep look. It's a complete five-star masterpiece and worth a look! In fact, it is written according to the ideas of female channels. The male protagonist's style is more feminine than the styles of many male channels. Buhao kids, why is the male protagonist written like a big female protagonist, so toxic?

66666 My blood was boiling after watching it, and I rolled into maggots on the bed. Great support for the author, it is definitely a masterpiece among the treasures.

The plot is good The heroine is quite likable and the design is good It's also good that you designed the male protagonist to look like a human model that has just begun to take shape. It gives people a feeling of being ruthless but not ruthless, and then offending both sides to death. Then the reasoning is a bit unlike what humans can infer. The heroine's words and sentences are wrong. When she first entered the small dark room, she said that she saw it in the wild. After entering, she said that she was carefully prepared. Just by telling a lie, you can tell whether he has a story or thinks he is kind. It's just a feeling that you are very smart, but in fact you are not smart at all and you still pretend to be aloof. The heroine really likes you. The male protagonist looks like a human being anyway Recommendation level: Not recommended→_→

Compared with novels of the same type, it doesn't look awkward at all, and the writing is very smooth and natural.

This is the most delicate book about the relationship between a master and a disciple. The process of the female protagonist (disciple) slowly chasing the male protagonist (teacher) is very exciting. There are not many books of this type in Tomato. There are more updates from the author.

Must be five stars! The author writes the contrast between "the end of love" and "the recovery of seven emotions" very delicately. Jiang Xian went from pursuing the truth to being wrapped up in his apprentice's love, and Ye Zhaoxue went from pretending to be well-behaved to boldly showing love. Every look and every conversation was tugging. The plot of the calamity falling and the medicine breaking the defense is very cleverly designed, which brings out the sense of taboo and fate between the master and the disciple. The atmosphere of the Oriental Fairy Tale is also very good, and you can catch up even more! The master-disciple bond and psychological game at the beginning are indeed very attractive and eye-catching. But after reading more than forty chapters, the plot is still limited to the closed interaction between the male and female protagonists, lacking new characters and expansion of the world view, and the narrative rhythm is too slow. Although this kind of "two-person turn" writing method can deepen the relationship between characters, it can also easily make readers feel tired. I hope that the pace will be accelerated in the future and more branch plots and supporting characters will be introduced.

Chong Shiwen's pulling before eating is the most beautiful. The author wrote it well.

This is a true evaluation. The emotional aspect is really good. The heroine is a little crazy, but not too crazy. This is the best way to write it. There's a little bit of meat, you know, if this kind of subject matter didn't exist, many people wouldn't be able to see the back. After all, the male protagonist is not a native and is a bit too feminine. Of course, I don't mean to ask him to take the initiative, after all, this is the world view. As your strength improves in the future, you can have some chips in your hand so that you won't completely become a cabbage. From the current point of view, it is a single female protagonist. Of course, it does not mean that it cannot be written as a female supporting character. It would be better to have some ups and downs in the Shura field to make the plot better, as long as there is no such poisonous point as misunderstanding. A small knife makes you happy, but a big knife hurts your body. You can also sublimate your emotional line at the end.

A very good counter-tweeting post. I'm writing a review even before I've finished reading the latest chapter. Many things the heroine does are reasonable from the perspective of the apprentice. It feels good to know that you can't do anything to me within the rules. It's awesome that the author can write the story of two characters so beautifully, but there are still scene restrictions (there is no third character, there are only two scenes, which means there are basically no branch plots and plots). The reaction of the male protagonist is also very interesting. If the gender were changed, I would feel like a tsundere young lady. The female protagonist would really be intolerable [laughing]. Although the speed in the pavilion in the middle is a bit faster, it also adds a bit of intensity to the confrontation between the two, which is good [like] (Although the heroine is depressed, she is not very perverted. She does not use clothes to hide things, which is a pity for me [cry])

I have read a lot of articles in this category, and I think this one is at least a 9. I think the writing is at a very good level in Tomato. The descriptions of the scenery are natural and delicate, the interaction between the two is also very good, the protagonist has a very good character, and there is a reasonable explanation for why he chose the ruthless path. After his heart was broken, he didn't fall in love with the heroine immediately. The description of his heart being broken down step by step is very good.

I love watching it. The heroine is very intelligent and knows how to hold back. The heroine has a really high IQ

By the way, is the male protagonist really a time traveler? Although 100 years of cultivation will cover the experience of the previous 20 years to a certain extent, I feel that it does not have a modern feel. It is better to design the male protagonist as a local and the female protagonist as a time traveler. In this way, maybe we can see more gameplay.

It's quite good. It turns out that a person's love can be so fierce. I heard that giving 4 stars will be included in the rating [Salute]

If you like Akaishi, you can close your eyes and enter

To be honest, the writing is really good. The emotional line should be written like this. The yandere apprentice works step by step, and in the end, he directly forces love. This is the second time I saw the yandere, but it is still very shocking. I must give it five stars. Six hundred and sixty-six, the male protagonist can be strengthened to an epic level, and he has grown a brain. This male protagonist is too difficult to conquer. He can still enter the 🆕 stage, which is even more exciting than palace fighting👏🏻

The writing style is delicate, and at first glance, Ding Zhen is a female author. Compared to a heroine, her style is more like a female channel, a master and a disciple. If you like this style, it is worth reading. There is nothing toxic at the moment [I understand] [I understand] [I understand]

Yes, the psychological description of the characters is detailed, the transformation of the male protagonist is not obscure at all, and the love between the two comes naturally. Very well written.

The female protagonist has a strong temperament, has principles, bottom line, and brains. She guides the male protagonist step by step and would rather be wronged than hurt the other person. Paranoid redemption + single heroine [admiration], delicious and if you like it, this is the one [laughs]

This novel focuses on the description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. It is very delicate, reasonable and beautiful. So there is no need for too many new characters and a huge world. Much more logical than other novels.

Good article. Although the heroine is sickly, she really loves the hero. The hero is also willing to face up to his feelings. It is much better than those who want and want at the same time. Both parties have brains and can talk. I support the male and female protagonists to be together forever, but I still look forward to the fight between the women later [laughing] I can't help this little hobby😋😋

Objectively speaking, it's really good. It's relatively more logical than those brainless yanderes. The writing style is a bit biased toward women. For men, it doesn't feel refreshing enough. The male protagonist is portrayed a bit like a girl. All in all, it's a good book. It's a bit toxic, but it doesn't particularly affect reading.

Good Good Good, the relationship between the male and female protagonists developed quite sweetly after they relaxed their mentality😋👍

Why do many Tomato books with mediocre writing styles have high ratings, while books with more natural and comfortable writing styles like this have lower ratings? It's so hard to find books. Maybe this book is just right for my XP. It's really good (ᵔᴥᵔ)

It's good among yandere novels. It's better than those yandere who kill people at every move. At least this yandere can think.

This is a particularly outstanding book in the same genre. The author has profound writing skills. I feel like I have read many books of this type.

I think the writing is okay, but no one reads it [what] Details🤏This is the author, I would like to call you the strongest🥵🥵🥵🥵 —————————————————————— The author is capable. He obviously didn't mention it in every sentence, but it was in every sentence. This looming feeling is simply irresistible [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [licking the screen]

It's really beautiful, but the author is too short [shy]

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It's super good-looking. Don't worry about other people's negative comments. You won't know how good it looks until you try it!