(Family + Group portrait + Management) (Dynasty of Order + Fantasy + Mechanism + Alchemist background world view)
When Chen Heng reached the end of his life, he had almost forgotten where he came from, and only his wife and children were in front of him.
He passed away after giving the bead that traveled through time with him to his eldest son, but his consciousness awakened in the inner space of the bead...
What I cannot do myself can only be done by future generations.
The family history of each generation struggling to move forward is now unfolding!
Reader comments
In fact, the writing is very good. If you have read too many purely entertaining articles, you can read it. It doesn't feel like AI writing, which is more friendly. Today's AI writing is too annoying, smells like a machine, and always contains errors.
The interesting thing about this article is that in this kind of family portrait articles, usually the author will make the characters more interesting, but this article does the opposite. But it can be seen that the author's structure is very good and the plot is laid out smoothly. Therefore, readers often have no idea what will happen next. This actually aroused my curiosity and I am looking forward to what kind of plot will unfold next. But this may be the reason why this book does not attract most people, that is, there are too few exciting points and the characters are not interesting. The author needs to balance this issue!
After reading a hundred chapters, I found no poisonous points, and even the logical thinking was correct. The plot and character descriptions were very consistent with the times and identity. There are no second-generation officials who only know how to show off, and even children have to pay attention when playing.
This is a very rare group-portrait family novel. Blessed are book lovers who are tired of reading cool novels in which Wei Li is concentrated in the protagonist.
Each character is vividly portrayed, the pace is slow, but the writing is too little. I hope the author can speed up.
The writing is pretty good, but this type of writing doesn't seem to have much of an audience on Tomato, so I probably won't be able to finish it.
The further I read, the more I feel that the author can't finish it. I feel that the author is an old author. The author wrote something like a red building when the eldest son of the Chen family went to the Zhu family to buy mines.
I finished reading it in one sitting, and overall it was pretty good.
It's a masterpiece, but I guess I won't be able to finish it. I won't be upset if I don't feel happy about it. I won't get any results on Tomato.
It's not a cool story, the whole family is in dire straits. If you want to read cool articles, you can go.
From the first few dozen chapters, it can be seen that the author's writing skills are very good, the narrative and characterization are very smooth, and the details are well described. At present, it is an above-average book on Tomato.
Although the writing is mixed, the character portrayal is still good. Some characters are not likeable. I feel that this is normal for a book, but the plot direction needs to be improved.
Is Chen Rendao the author's emotional projection vehicle? I thought he was a dog licker, but he turned out to be a psychopath. If he didn't get it, he would just kill the person [Like][Like]
It's well written and the characters are clearly drawn, keep up the good work!
Every character in this book has flesh and blood, and some supporting characters can come to life in just a few lines.
After reading Chapter 120, I felt a bit like Dream of Red Mansions
Very beautiful, with clusters of portraits and clear depictions.
A good book
Well written, keep up the good work
Okay, very good
At least 8.6 Points. The pace needs to be accelerated. The third generation has not been born yet. It is too stressful.
I originally thought it was low martial arts, but I didn't expect that I would directly cultivate immortality in the later period [Research] I didn't expect it to be true.
It's not a cool article. If you have the patience, you can read it carefully. It's quite good.
The logic is normal and very realistic. For me, a person who likes family stories, it is top quality!
It's good to watch but I don't know why not many people watch it. Great support for the author.
It's not written by AI. The three brothers have distinct personalities and the story is not cliché. It's very interesting. However, the updates are too slow and there are not many people watching. It feels like it may not be finished.
In fact, the writing is very good. If you have read too many purely entertaining articles, you can read it. It doesn't feel like AI writing, which is more friendly. Today's AI writing is too annoying, smells like a machine, and always contains errors.
The interesting thing about this article is that in this kind of family portrait articles, usually the author will make the characters more interesting, but this article does the opposite. But it can be seen that the author's structure is very good and the plot is laid out smoothly. Therefore, readers often have no idea what will happen next. This actually aroused my curiosity and I am looking forward to what kind of plot will unfold next. But this may be the reason why this book does not attract most people, that is, there are too few exciting points and the characters are not interesting. The author needs to balance this issue!
After reading a hundred chapters, I found no poisonous points, and even the logical thinking was correct. The plot and character descriptions were very consistent with the times and identity. There are no second-generation officials who only know how to show off, and even children have to pay attention when playing.
This is a very rare group-portrait family novel. Blessed are book lovers who are tired of reading cool novels in which Wei Li is concentrated in the protagonist.
Each character is vividly portrayed, the pace is slow, but the writing is too little. I hope the author can speed up.
The writing is pretty good, but this type of writing doesn't seem to have much of an audience on Tomato, so I probably won't be able to finish it. The further I read, the more I feel that the author can't finish it. I feel that the author is an old author. The author wrote something like a red building when the eldest son of the Chen family went to the Zhu family to buy mines.
I finished reading it in one sitting, and overall it was pretty good.
It's a masterpiece, but I guess I won't be able to finish it. I won't be upset if I don't feel happy about it. I won't get any results on Tomato.
It's not a cool story, the whole family is in dire straits. If you want to read cool articles, you can go.
From the first few dozen chapters, it can be seen that the author's writing skills are very good, the narrative and characterization are very smooth, and the details are well described. At present, it is an above-average book on Tomato.
Although the writing is mixed, the character portrayal is still good. Some characters are not likeable. I feel that this is normal for a book, but the plot direction needs to be improved.
Is Chen Rendao the author's emotional projection vehicle? I thought he was a dog licker, but he turned out to be a psychopath. If he didn't get it, he would just kill the person [Like][Like]
It's well written and the characters are clearly drawn, keep up the good work!
Every character in this book has flesh and blood, and some supporting characters can come to life in just a few lines. After reading Chapter 120, I felt a bit like Dream of Red Mansions
Very beautiful, with clusters of portraits and clear depictions.
A good book
Well written, keep up the good work
Okay, very good
At least 8.6 Points. The pace needs to be accelerated. The third generation has not been born yet. It is too stressful.
I originally thought it was low martial arts, but I didn't expect that I would directly cultivate immortality in the later period [Research] I didn't expect it to be true.
It's not a cool article. If you have the patience, you can read it carefully. It's quite good.
The logic is normal and very realistic. For me, a person who likes family stories, it is top quality!
It's good to watch but I don't know why not many people watch it. Great support for the author.
It's not written by AI. The three brothers have distinct personalities and the story is not cliché. It's very interesting. However, the updates are too slow and there are not many people watching. It feels like it may not be finished.