(Multiple female protagonists, self-consistent logic, pure love is also pure love, slow to warm up, no male NPCs unless necessary, the author has a strong awareness of lightning protection)
As the remnant of the "Star Hub", he has the wisdom to analyze all things, but he is burdened with a body that may disintegrate at any time.
In order to continue the fire of life, he signed a life contract called "marriage" with the most powerful Valkyrie, Youlandel.
At first, he just wanted to be the gentlest shadow behind her, paving the way for her with the wisdom of the stars.
But he had calculated all the laws of the universe, but he only missed one thing - in this world full of regrets, "unreserved tenderness" is the most fatal temptation.
Kiana: "You said I was unique, right? Then don't treat me like a student or a child! Look at me... I also want to be the person you can rely on!"
Bronya: "When in contact with the teacher, Bronya's emotional module will have an unknown error. Suggestion: Make a deep physical connection to fix the bug - reject the 'reject' command.
Reader comments
This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to Huaguo Xiao's 108 monkeys. "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" expresses Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot.
It's awesome. Although it's a new book, you can tell by looking at the update time that there are a lot of updates every day. The author's writing is very comfortable for readers, and I didn't see any typos. The plot arrangement is also very smooth, and the interaction with Duan Goose is very sweet. It doesn't have the feeling of industrial saccharin. I clicked in without reading the introduction at first, thinking it was a single girl from Duan Goose. After reading it, I took a look It was only after the introduction that I discovered that it is a multi-girl novel. Although it is already very sweet, I still want to read the popular Minotaur and Basement scenes. It depends on the author's power and must be good at pacing. The flow of Beng San is not much in the first place. I am afraid that the author will run away one day, so I must not be a eunuch. I have been really short of books recently [laugh][laugh][laugh]
Finally, is this book's big brother or sister? Come on [blowing kiss]
The emotional writing of Daigouxian is quite good. Although it was a bit sudden at the beginning (it was a bit abrupt not long after we met).
But the scene where Mei saw the male protagonist eating something he wasn't used to (pizza) was a bit inexplicable in my opinion. Later, when he brought a lunch box to the male protagonist, you could say it was out of goodwill, but if he had to say that he was needed, it was a bit of a fuss.
3.5 Stars, because both love lines progressed inexplicably fast at the beginning.
Rounded up to 4 stars.
The first two volumes are pretty good, but the rest are not much different from other succubus novels.
I don't even understand how Kiana and the others could have a crush on the male protagonist, she's not too young. How about your "self-consistent logic"?
I only recommend the first two volumes, the later volumes are really not that good...
I won't change the stars and I'll give them to the first two volumes. I really can't read the later ones.
You might as well just add a succubus male protagonist to your profile.
It was a little hard to stretch at first, but it got better later and the feeling was very smooth. Sweet tooth lovers will enjoy this wave😋
Very well written, keep up the good work
Brother (I don't know if the author is a man or a woman, so I call him brother), the writing is very good, keep up the good work
The writing style is good, especially the amount of updates. This alone is worth learning from many authors. [Like] Come on, author.
Author? If you dare to put "slow heating" on the label, don't take advantage of it [laughs] Where is it slow? Although the sugar content is a bit excessive😋
Why is this book a harem? [Crying] I originally came in because of this, but because it was too sweet, I wanted to have a single heroine [Crying] The author is a celebrity [Crying]
I'll go, the author's writing is quite mature, and it's very interesting and interesting. If you like it, come and read more.
This is my favorite novel. Five stars straight away. It's so good.
This book contains but is not limited to the following elements: the incompetent silly goose, the broken him, the world-famous painting of the silly goose on a mission, substitute literature, the husband who was forced to betray his wife (bushi)
It's beautiful and has great emotional control.
Onegai, Vadasi😭
The third volume doesn't look good, it's a bit far-fetched. First, they forcefully hold on while their body gradually loses temperature. It's understandable, after all, the plot requires it. But later, after the silly goose sisters have replenished the protagonist's body temperature, the protagonist turns around and uses his abilities to treat Kiana. So what's the point of arranging Kiana's treatment? You can't keep the protagonist in a sickly condition, right? That's not to say that Kiana shouldn't be allowed to help the protagonist, but the cost of helping the protagonist is that the protagonist once again uses his strength to endure pain, which would be boring. There are many ways to capture them with tenderness. Don't always rely on her sympathy (originally, the character and the protagonist don't get along for long, so it's not normal to have so much affection for each other. It's only been two weeks). I still hope that the author will write better and better.
The protagonist's charisma is simply perfect
The story of Hollanddale is very sweet
The maid did not join the fight
Yusanjia's heart-warming little angel
Himeko regrets (sorrow)
Seele's surprising lead
Landale (big) Rita (little)
Yusanjia is almost
Xi'er's account is blocked
Wendy is online
The protagonist's mentality changes (incomplete)
In this regard, my evaluation is that it is a masterpiece.
The overall article is okay.
My only suggestion is to change the cover and give me something that looks like 2016 in 2026.
The emotions are delicate. It's probably not a newbie, but the number of words is a bit short at the moment. I want to keep reading, but I'm worried that I will die [face covering]
It's very sweet. The author basically avoided all the subtle points.
Definitely the best Honkai Impact article I have read in recent years [Blowing Kiss] also made me eat well.
It's really good, it's a good book
Anyway, the heroine has Hollander
Very pretty. Love to watch
It's pretty and sweet. Please have more of this.
Good book, just a bit regretful
Based on my reading time as an old bookworm, I give the following evaluation: a masterpiece
Final Fantasy, who is the heroine?
Hmm, I don't know what to say, just take a look
I've been watching it for a few days and suddenly I realized that I haven't rated it yet. Please give me one.
Bianca's books are relatively rare. I just like that sweet, greasy feeling. As a Beng San chef, it feels pretty good. Dream material is very strange. [Shy]
If you get five stars, please give me [Admiration]. It's so beautiful and it's even more [Admiration]. It's your turn to get these five stars.
This book is very interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is indeed too strong. If it weren't for Noxian's outer ring + Noxian guillotine. This wave of M4's six times strafing will kill you, among other things. I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to Huaguo Xiao's 108 monkeys. "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" expresses Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot.
It's awesome. Although it's a new book, you can tell by looking at the update time that there are a lot of updates every day. The author's writing is very comfortable for readers, and I didn't see any typos. The plot arrangement is also very smooth, and the interaction with Duan Goose is very sweet. It doesn't have the feeling of industrial saccharin. I clicked in without reading the introduction at first, thinking it was a single girl from Duan Goose. After reading it, I took a look It was only after the introduction that I discovered that it is a multi-girl novel. Although it is already very sweet, I still want to read the popular Minotaur and Basement scenes. It depends on the author's power and must be good at pacing. The flow of Beng San is not much in the first place. I am afraid that the author will run away one day, so I must not be a eunuch. I have been really short of books recently [laugh][laugh][laugh] Finally, is this book's big brother or sister? Come on [blowing kiss]
The emotional writing of Daigouxian is quite good. Although it was a bit sudden at the beginning (it was a bit abrupt not long after we met). But the scene where Mei saw the male protagonist eating something he wasn't used to (pizza) was a bit inexplicable in my opinion. Later, when he brought a lunch box to the male protagonist, you could say it was out of goodwill, but if he had to say that he was needed, it was a bit of a fuss. 3.5 Stars, because both love lines progressed inexplicably fast at the beginning. Rounded up to 4 stars. The first two volumes are pretty good, but the rest are not much different from other succubus novels. I don't even understand how Kiana and the others could have a crush on the male protagonist, she's not too young. How about your "self-consistent logic"? I only recommend the first two volumes, the later volumes are really not that good... I won't change the stars and I'll give them to the first two volumes. I really can't read the later ones. You might as well just add a succubus male protagonist to your profile.
It was a little hard to stretch at first, but it got better later and the feeling was very smooth. Sweet tooth lovers will enjoy this wave😋
Very well written, keep up the good work
Brother (I don't know if the author is a man or a woman, so I call him brother), the writing is very good, keep up the good work
The writing style is good, especially the amount of updates. This alone is worth learning from many authors. [Like] Come on, author.
Author? If you dare to put "slow heating" on the label, don't take advantage of it [laughs] Where is it slow? Although the sugar content is a bit excessive😋 Why is this book a harem? [Crying] I originally came in because of this, but because it was too sweet, I wanted to have a single heroine [Crying] The author is a celebrity [Crying]
I'll go, the author's writing is quite mature, and it's very interesting and interesting. If you like it, come and read more. This is my favorite novel. Five stars straight away. It's so good.
This book contains but is not limited to the following elements: the incompetent silly goose, the broken him, the world-famous painting of the silly goose on a mission, substitute literature, the husband who was forced to betray his wife (bushi)
It's beautiful and has great emotional control.
Onegai, Vadasi😭 The third volume doesn't look good, it's a bit far-fetched. First, they forcefully hold on while their body gradually loses temperature. It's understandable, after all, the plot requires it. But later, after the silly goose sisters have replenished the protagonist's body temperature, the protagonist turns around and uses his abilities to treat Kiana. So what's the point of arranging Kiana's treatment? You can't keep the protagonist in a sickly condition, right? That's not to say that Kiana shouldn't be allowed to help the protagonist, but the cost of helping the protagonist is that the protagonist once again uses his strength to endure pain, which would be boring. There are many ways to capture them with tenderness. Don't always rely on her sympathy (originally, the character and the protagonist don't get along for long, so it's not normal to have so much affection for each other. It's only been two weeks). I still hope that the author will write better and better.
The protagonist's charisma is simply perfect The story of Hollanddale is very sweet The maid did not join the fight Yusanjia's heart-warming little angel Himeko regrets (sorrow) Seele's surprising lead Landale (big) Rita (little) Yusanjia is almost Xi'er's account is blocked Wendy is online The protagonist's mentality changes (incomplete)
In this regard, my evaluation is that it is a masterpiece.
The overall article is okay. My only suggestion is to change the cover and give me something that looks like 2016 in 2026.
The emotions are delicate. It's probably not a newbie, but the number of words is a bit short at the moment. I want to keep reading, but I'm worried that I will die [face covering]
It's very sweet. The author basically avoided all the subtle points.
Definitely the best Honkai Impact article I have read in recent years [Blowing Kiss] also made me eat well.
It's really good, it's a good book
Anyway, the heroine has Hollander
Very pretty. Love to watch
It's pretty and sweet. Please have more of this.
Good book, just a bit regretful
Based on my reading time as an old bookworm, I give the following evaluation: a masterpiece
Final Fantasy, who is the heroine?
Hmm, I don't know what to say, just take a look
I've been watching it for a few days and suddenly I realized that I haven't rated it yet. Please give me one.
Bianca's books are relatively rare. I just like that sweet, greasy feeling. As a Beng San chef, it feels pretty good. Dream material is very strange. [Shy]
If you get five stars, please give me [Admiration]. It's so beautiful and it's even more [Admiration]. It's your turn to get these five stars.
It's very well written. I always like dumb goose.