The Dong Brothers in Demon Slayer

The characters of Bataro are all online, and you can tell his voice just by looking at them. The reason for the advancement of the plot is also very suitable for Taro. There are also some sensitive characteristics (disregarding the high blood pressure that Bataro may have). The time traveler is added in the middle, and he is just a tool person. He has very few scenes, so Bataro is Fans don't have to worry about time-travelers going crazy. Tao Zi is still as invincible and confident as ever, Ghost Sister is still as funny as ever, Dog Brother is wanted as always, Chicken Brother is as normal as always, Ape God has less scenes now, Jiro is getting better too, he has formed Dragon Fire, I'm really looking forward to working with Tai. When Lang met, the store manager was still wiping cups as usual. Poor Shark was left there, but he also came by the Den-O train. Tao Zi also came in a way that was very consistent with his character (referring to jumping from the train). The Brain Man trio also followed the dog brother to escape. The two made a big fuss in Infinite City, and then were thrown out (no other scenes so far). I would like to give the author two suggestions. As long as the characters of the Dong brothers are not broken, and the role of the time traveler is minimized, it will be fine if they are not needed in the future. As long as these two points are done well, it will definitely not be lower than the level of a masterpiece.

I really feel like I'm watching a side story of Bataro. The character description is really right, and it integrates well with the plot of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba.

Except for time travelers, I don't like it very much, but as a fan like you, too much, too much, too much, too much smells like Bakutaro, so go and review it right away.

This work is really well written. [Laughing] The most important thing about fan fiction is that it cannot be OOC (contrast writing is a special case to be discussed separately). This work ensures that the story unfolds smoothly while maintaining the character creation of the original work, so that the work not only conforms to the basic logic, but also well solves the problem of running accounts that can easily occur due to excessive differences in force values between different worldviews. (Anyone who has tried to write a book will understand how difficult it is to do both at the same time.) And because the author uses a narrative technique that intersperses setting introductions during the development of the story (such as proper nouns such as Team Gear and Breathing Method), this technique allows readers who do not know much about the original work, or who only understand part of the plot, to read it smoothly. Overall, this is a promising fanfic.

It's so well written😭, it's very funny like Bakutaro, and it's also full of sensitive misunderstandings

It's super pretty and smells like Bataro! ! !

The writing is very ghost-like, the interplay between the two time-travelers is okay, the plot is okay, and the characters are not OOC. I just feel that the story is a bit too rushed. I originally thought it should be updated to at least 100 chapters.

Hahaha, interesting idea. I am a Sentai, Mitsumi, and Demon Slayer player who has been cheated a lot, and I have a lot of Minshi misunderstandings. I still have to deal with the airwaves. Because I am Taro, anything is possible. I can really watch Taro's extras, and Mitsumi just smiles when he enters the trap (even though he is a tool), which is like dancing in XP [face covering]

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Not bad, it smells like Baotarou