Zero Zone: Copying Miss Ya's Mother at the Beginning

Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, and there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration. It can be said that the setting is full, the descriptions of the battle scenes are full, and the author's writing style has also been improved after revision. The memories in the middle are a running account and do not affect the reading. The main plot is very exciting. I regret that I read it too early and stopped at the chapter where the true face is exposed. I just want to curse. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, especially the mother-daughter confession scene and the daily posts. Although the game settings are indeed imperfect, they can be set privately. When Naruto was not finished, those fan authors were also making up all kinds of stuff, tsk tsk. A piece of writing worth collecting.

It's okay. I've read Chapter 26 and I think it's quite interesting. But I still have to quit because I don't like watching multi-player movies. The plot feels very bland. I read that the author said the typos were changed but Tomato didn't update the main text. I don't know about other aspects. I feel fine.

The author listened, but I don't know what happened next

I am a new fan of the author, come pick me up! ! ! [Notice]

Can the author post more? I can do whatever you ask me to doಥ_ಥ

Good looking and good subject matter. The content is also well written. I just don't know why it looks a little weird.

Anyway, it suits my taste.

Very very nice looking.

Very pretty good looking

Just to prevent pride, let's give it 4 points.

Except for the main character's personal setting that causes his brain to shut down because he talks about unsettling things, I found it a bit strange. Everything else was fine. [Sinister smile]

Good luck, good luck, keep updating, I want to see the follow-up [Love][Love]