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The protagonist is a standard Madonna, she is not like a human being, she was stabbed by Qin behind her, but she can still bring her back. When the group suspected that the protagonist was about to separate, the protagonist was really cowardly, as if he would not be angry, and felt like I saved you, or I was wrong, but let alone the little angel Keli, if she had not met Keli and Qin in the early stage, I felt that she would have collapsed earlier. Keli is truly our lovely little angel [Sending Hearts]

Let's talk about the recent problems with this book: (Adjustments and modifications have been made so far. You can consume it with confidence. The following content contains some spoilers. If you mind, please avoid it.) 1. The first is the most controversial Chapter 12. In this chapter, you said that the protagonist Lin Yue was too holy and not like a human being. When he was stabbed to death by Qin's back, he was not angry at all. When I wrote it, I only thought about how the protagonist died without considering too many other factors. At present, adjustments and modifications have been made to add more plots of Qin's hesitation and Lin Yue's angry struggle. You can check Chapter 12 again. 2. The second problem is that some people have reported that there are too few psychological descriptions of the protagonist, and there are too few dialogues between the protagonist and other partners. I took a closer look and found that there are many descriptions of psychological activities, which is not too little. However, it may be because it does not describe first-person psychological activities, so you feel that the resonance is not strong. It has been optimized and will adjust the writing direction after chapter 50 to add first-person psychological descriptions and dialogues. As for why there are so few dialogues, think about it. In the early stage, I ran for my life like crazy in the doomsday, and I was so exhausted from running that I was out of breath. To be honest, I wanted to highlight the violent start and depressing atmosphere of the entire Mondstadt chapter, so there may be very few dialogues in the Mondstads chapter, but you can rest assured that in the second volume of the Liyue chapter, this problem will be solved, and I will add a lot of dialogue. 3. Why is there no love plot? Some brothers, some, start from chapter 50 to implant the sweet plots you like to read. It won't be sad all the way, so you can eat it with confidence! Finally, I would like to express my sincere thanks to the readers who have supported me all the way. If you have any questions, please point them out in the comments. I will continue to make optimizations and modifications to try to give you a satisfactory result. Thank you all! [Blowing kiss] I admit that there are still many problems with this book, but a good word will warm you in winter, and a bad word will hurt you in June. If you have any problems, you can point them out, and I will see if I need to revise them based on the situation. I would be very sad if I gave a negative review directly... [I'm about to cry]

Yes, the writing is okay, and the character setting is not too deviant, but I hope that the protagonist's ability will not be like that of the next door "Life in the World from Zero", which is to directly travel to the next timeline. Then, Alice in those worlds will definitely destroy the entire world. Okay, it's really "Zero - Starting Life in Another World". I'm hopeless. Get ready to take a knife.

Highly recommended! ! ! ! It's rare to see a Genshin Impact fanfic. The first thing this book gave me was a brightening feeling. Most of the Genshin Impact fanfics currently on the market are cool and sweet. The author actually dared to try to start the chapter with a sadistic text. It is really original. The setting of death's return is indeed very good in conjunction with the opening chapter, and the sense of immersion is ridiculously strong. Especially after watching the part where Qintao is the protagonist, I became hostile towards Qin when I played the game [smile] Then, Little Angel Keli is really well written, very healing, very touching, and I like it very much. It would be better if it could be more intimate [full] The question is, I wonder if I will meet more people in the future. Is the pollution of this humus really so strong that even Zhongli can't withstand it? Zhongli has endured the wear and tear of six thousand years. I hope Zhongli faked his death (in line with the original work) [Read carefully] I am looking forward to the following content, and the author will continue to update! Also, I would like to ask if Wuxiang's sword can resist Tevarin when going to Daizuma? Or will Rudo fight against Tevalin? The current mutated Tevalin can be summed up in two words: exceeding the standard! [Crazy] I've read the latest chapter and I can't stand it. Author, please stop [crying]

In fact, I always thought that Yuan Shenwen had a shortcoming that cannot be ignored. It was based on the second creation of the game. In the past, there were only 2 or 3 countries in the game. This inevitably led to novels where I didn't know how to write the latest plot of the game. You can't make it up (after all, the second creation is the best). (Taboo ooc), so I almost never read Genshin Impact before, but the author's style is quite similar to a novel I've seen before that combines Genshin Impact with weirdness. They are both very well written. I won't say much more. After all, I will be gone soon. I can only wish the author many five stars and good luck.

There are three ways for me to read books. The first is to not substitute anything. The premise is that I want to understand why they do this? The second type is to substitute all of them, and the premise is that you have to be patient. The third type is to substitute into the protagonist, and the premise is that it conforms to my values. I have been thinking about the previous paragraph for two and a half years and I don't know how to understand it. I can understand that you have died so many times that you have a mental breakdown, but you are suspicious of someone who you regard as a friend, comrade, and even saved her life several times. , Even after each life-saving, the description in the original text is that instead of being grateful, the suspicion becomes a little deeper, and then the protagonist is killed. Yes, one of the characters kills her savior, the protagonist, and then the protagonist becomes numb to the end after dying again and again, and even forgives the other party after explaining that he believes it. I can't understand it anymore. Before I read this, I thought about everything I could think about, but I just didn't think of the need to write this. Although the author said that this is sadistic, this is no longer sadistic. Is this training? I don't know if this is OOC, but at any rate, it's a person who has saved many lives. If you doubt it, kill him. Do your best to make your own objective evaluation, don't criticize if you don't like it Let me tell you specifically where the poison lies in the first ten chapters of Qin? When I read this, every character was substituted. I doubted that there was no problem in the writing, but killing the protagonist was very problematic. No matter from the perspective of sensibility, rationality, interests, etc., It was stupid. In terms of sensibility, even if the protagonist had problems, she should not have saved so many lives. Of course, if you only read this, it is not poisonous. After all, in the original text, the protagonist's demeanor when he saw Qin killing him. Rationally speaking, the protagonist has problems but has saved so many lives. What a normal person should be thinking is, does he have something to hide? Instead of thinking about killing him! Finally, the benefits are even more unexplainable. If the protagonist infers from the situation on the road ahead, then the danger may continue to exist in the follow-up. Does she think she has that ability? If there is no protagonist in the front, he is already dead. Under normal circumstances, you should turn a blind eye and act as if you don't know what to do. Wait until it is absolutely safe before interrogating. In terms of probability, if there is a problem with the protagonist, there is a 100% probability of death after killing him. Keep the protagonist. The protagonist has There is a 50% probability that it is good, and there is a 50% probability that it is bad. However, the protagonist has released good intentions throughout the whole process, but it does not rule out the confusing behavior of lowering vigilance in order to get something. It is calculated as 45%, but there is still a 55% probability of surviving. Doesn't it make sense now? As for why the probability of killing him is 100%, it can be calculated by calculating the previous road section. Besides, the journey is so long, even if you actually reach the destination, it may not be really safe. That's it! It is now Chapter 96. Yi Jing is much better, but it is better not to make the protagonist too humble (this can be understood as a problem with my thinking); but there is no system, which makes Yi Jing surpass most fan fiction. I'm a little confused whether the author likes to read regretful articles.

It's good to read. I hope it won't be like other books that have to be updated after 100,000 words.

There is no problem overall. I just don't like multiple heroines

The writing style is very good, it doesn't make people feel procrastinated, and it is also very easy to understand.

It turns out that the author is Hutauchu

Very good, very good, very beautiful [blowing kiss] But I want to ask is Morax really dead?

The subject matter is novel and the writing is also very good. Come on, author, keep writing.

Very nice, hope to continue to update,

It's simple, leave a good review.

I can only say it's pretty good

Good looking, good looking, good looking

Support keep going

Very good very good good

This subject matter is very fresh, but the development of the plot feels very abrupt and weird. It feels like writing a book for the first time. Give it a four-star encouragement.

I like the smooth writing and it looks so comfortable!

If I don't want to mend it, I need to see if there is a knife or not [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

The writing is good and can be read properly, but it's just too little.

Beautifully written, love reading it

Fat novel, Mond is really depressed and desperate

The author writes very, very beautifully!

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

Very real, unlike other weird novels

The writing is very good and the details are well drawn. I haven't seen such a good work in a long time🥰

Among the Genshin Impact novels I have read, the writing is excellent, ranking third, and the only one that is being updated. I recommend reading it.

The writing is very similar to the weird Iron Collapse written by the author next door, both of which are very beautiful.