Collapse of Iron: Bo Ming's Employees Travel Again

The book is quite interesting, except Yang at the back. When I saw her fairy boat and walked with the Star Core Hunters, I suddenly thought that those who joined the Star Core Hunters had something they wanted to gain, so I searched in advance and looked at the relevant ones at the back. I saw Kafka said that Yang can take them out of the established future. At that time, Yinlang was still saying that the "program" that they were family members had penetrated into Yang's heart, and for no reason it felt like Yang was being used as a tool. Also, thinking that the protagonist's colleague was being used as a tool, I didn't want to continue reading. However, I felt that the previous part was okay. Keep up the good work.

At first glance, it's a pretty good book. Although it has a few minor flaws, it's not as good as those big writers' works, but it's still readable and the plot is novel. I highly recommend it to those who are short of books. I also hope that the author can write more, and the expected value is 500,000 words.

I feel like the heroine could be Bai Ye's

I'm actually not a very demanding person, but this book made me feel very disconnected. The plot suddenly skipped while I was reading. If you don't want to write, you can omit large sections, and just write it to the end. After all, I am not the author, but I don't feel disconnected when I read other people's books. The author needs to practice more, and there are too many fragmentary thoughts in the book that have unclear meaning. Finally, the theme is novel and unique. Please support it with four stars.

Well, generally speaking, the first ten or so chapters are okay, but the emotional line and the role of Yang are a bit too abrupt. I suggest you write a rough outline (although I know the author is quite busy), which may give a better impression (mainly from book recommendation). It will be very useful to increase the number of readers of your book (★≧▽^))★☆

It's well written, looking forward to updates. I still have to say that ego is spiritual equipment rather than clothing, but the writing is really good.

Personally, I feel that the plot is a bit lacking. Most of the descriptions are not particularly vivid, but the overall content is not messy, so I give it four stars. I hope the author can write better. (In fact, it is normal to read the complicated plots again. There is no need to deliberately delete them. In addition, the selection of materials is inherently biased. If you write more, it will always be easier to understand.)

A very good book, this book can be read with gusto by someone like me who is a cloud player regardless of the game. Especially Bengtie, I almost only know a little bit about it. But you can keep watching. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Very nice. Keep up the good work.

A single person's knowledge of the King's book

It's very good. There are quite few books about Beng Tie and Yue Ji. Come on, don't stop updating, author.

I really like Lobotomy Company

It's so beautiful, I want to watch it forever 😁

OK, but the author stopped updating

Just complaining, I feel like you can accept Angela too (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ)

A good book, but I hope the author pays more attention to himself

Come on! ! ! Five-star praise for you