Concave: Say Goodbye to Your Sun!

It's really beautiful ( ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧! ! ! There is no OOC in the author's bold version of Paius, it is exactly what I thought he should be like, and the fact that he has no cp is too friendly to me! The whole article reads very smoothly, the protagonist's growth looks very comfortable, the emotional line is also very well written, and the battle scenes are even more exciting, exciting, exciting to read! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Moreover, the author is very attentive to his own daughter, and has drawings of all kinds of combat clothing and weapons. Reading the full text is both a bit funny and refreshing, and there are no embarrassing plots or shocking settings found in other concave and convex fanfics. The anchor point of the protagonist is also very clear. She has a bit of a fighting maniac and a bit of arrogance. When exposed, she failed to catch a fish, and her ears will turn red. Hehe, it is really cute (*￣3￣)╭♡❀ What's more important is that she does not have awe, fear, or fear of angels and gods because she is a human being. She always treats the relationship between them equally. The emotional scenes make me warm. Wuwuwuwuwu, what on earth did I eat before I met the author? ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥ And when I first saw the cover, I was a little shocked. The design of this cover is really great. Li's sassiness and pressure were immediately revealed. When I clicked in, I was even more surprised. Don't worry, author, I will always follow you! ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩

There are few heroines who are not in love, plots that are not embarrassing, and protagonists who have ideals and beliefs and cognitions that belong to ordinary people in the current society. The protagonist's portrayal is very full, the original character is not obtrusive, and the sad plot is not forced to steal the scene. It does not feel stiff like other patterns, just like it is in the original plot. It is lighthearted and funny but also has the humanism that I prefer (I really like those related to the righteousness of family and country and human civilization). Overall, the plot is evenly distributed. It is a rare article that suits my preferences. I have not played the games in it and I don't understand it, but it does not affect the reading. The related settings do not play a major role, and it is very friendly to those who don't know. It feels quite comprehensive. It does not blindly display the settings and knowledge created by itself or imported from other places. It not only retains the color of the original world view, but also retains its own characteristics and concepts, which is very valuable (in addition, the name of the protagonist is really very affectionate). If I remember correctly, Li Yuan refers to the people, so I like the word Li very much. If you look into it carefully, I really like this article, so keep up the good work! Wadasi will definitely make people around you highly recommend your article. Good articles should be seen by more people.

It's really awesome. This book is not the routine of normal concave and convex fan fiction, not the normal kind of novel that saves the plot characters of the concave and convex world, but saves civilization and saves those mortals, and the plot characters are just one of these valued people. Qin Luo is raised by civilization. I feel that Qin Luo is really awesome. It is the kind of ideal society where the thieves are high in the technology tree and are awesome. Moreover, communism has been realized, and there is a sense of déjà vu in our country. It is a very beautiful society, the protagonist is also very strong, and overall it is quite enjoyable. At that time, it was directly blasted to pieces by the God of Power. Later, he was basically invincible and had high authority. However, the protagonist likes equality, has racial mysophobia, and firmly believes in the supremacy of human beings. Human beings can rely on their own strength to succeed instead of relying on the power of divine authority.

I really like this work, I read it in one go in half a day I particularly like the character of the protagonist in it. He is sad because of the departure of his friends, but he will not be decadent. He will get angry because of the civilized moth. He regards all beings as equals. Even if he has strong strength, he will not like killing and will not change his views. He always sticks to his own ideas. The author's writing is very good. I have read a lot of books. This is the first time I have written a review of a work. I can't express what I want to express in words. I really like [Love]

It's simply a fairy tale in concave and convex writing! It's been a long time since I've seen such a strong and capable article. I will always follow you [blowing kiss] The heroine, the great judge, is simply in love with her. She is so handsome and beautiful that I feel at ease. The story is also very good. The characters are three-dimensional and the interaction with the angels is also very loving (family is to be together). The stars and humans are supreme. I hope the author will write better and better as he writes. The only drawback is that he can't update a hundred chapters in a day (a pity~) and the few stars are just for the sake of scoring points.

At first I thought I would read the book review first, but I was a little surprised later. Most of the otome BLs I have read before were otome BL-oriented ones, and those without CP are rare. Without the packaging of love candy, the interactions between the characters no longer have that sticky and tugging feeling (I personally like it very much) The concave and convex world written by the author did not start with the concave and convex competition. How should I put it? I am looking forward to another possibility of the concave and convex world written in big letters (Infrastructure lovers are ecstatic (≧∇≦)). I am really curious about what the world will become by the time of the concave and convex competition. (✧∀✧)

It looks really good from the beginning. There is no scene that feels OOC, and it is also very consistent with a person who has engraved the red five-star education in his mind. It also explains that the protagonist has a different view of this universe. All in all, it looks very comfortable, and there is nothing illogical.

The hesitation when we first meet is the confusion of the time traveler; the transparency of "here you are, let's play first" is the freedom and ease of mortals; the determination when rejecting the mission of the Creator God is the rebellion against the "fate of cattle and horses"; the embarrassment when being called "star destroyer" and "the most severe mother of decadent civilization" is the most vivid human fireworks under the aura of divinity. She knocks on the door of gods with her ordinary heart and uses her complaints to break the illusion. In a world where the stars are the order and the gods are the shackles, she sticks to the obsession of "not traveling in vain" and turns all the imposed auras into self-mockery of digging her toes into the ground. This article is a love letter to all souls who don't want to be defined - even if they are pushed to the altar, they can still say "shut up" to all the shackles with a smile and the warmth of the world.

Super nice, logical and organized The characters are not OOC, creative, and the plot is novel At least every character I read and know in the book is not OOC, I can guarantee this. The CD-less setting in the book is really friendly to me. I was really happy afterwards. It feels better than every other book on my bookshelf. This is the most beautiful convex and convex fanfic I have found this year. Love it so much. The less points are just to keep the score low, so as not to get too high a score and seal the author's book. What should I read then?

I think the rating will go up later. If you see a negative review, please check the reading time. Why do I always see reviews that haven't been read for 30 minutes? There are a lot of red elements, and the writing is still a bit green at the beginning, but the progress is getting bigger and bigger! His narrative ability is first-rate, he is truly a rare fan! There is a little frustration in the front (this is a description based on other people's comments, but I think it is the heroine, as an earthling, growing up in the concave and convex world, a transformation, becoming stronger, and this is only when she becomes stronger, the training is It doesn't mean that I haven't learned anything later. I feel aggrieved when I hit others. You and I can only say that there is no other way. I want to see the kind of human beings who can punch and kick in the concave and convex world as soon as they come up. Give me some tricks. Let's read your cool articles. It obviously has a human-centered/centered core (I love to watch it), concave and convex worlds, and the victory of man over nature. I think it is normal to be hostile (referring to a certain plot when the heroine expresses her views on God and angels are relatively hostile). I have seen some people say that they are frustrated, Le, I think this is a normal thing. Many things in red are metaphorical. In my opinion, they are relatively natural and connected, integrated, and appear.

When I first saw the title and synopsis of the book, I thought it was another invincible novel. When I saw the three words "no CP", I was slightly moved. Then I clicked in when there was a shortage of books later. When I looked at the book, I thought it was similar to the group favorite, or the relationship with Paius was so close that the other characters were very weak. After reading it, I found that it was completely different from what I had guessed. It was really a pure friendship! Almost everyone (here refers to angels) has written that the relationship with Paius was almost like enemies at the beginning. I originally thought that the author might have to make a hard change, but in Chapter 14, it turned into friendship very smoothly. It was handled extremely well and the writing was great! ! ! ! ! ! There is a small climax in Chapter 18, which is really well written! ! ! This is the feeling I want, the feeling of being upright and very confident. This book really has zero sticking points, my God! ! ! !

I declare! This is the most popular and correct among the concave and convex fanfics! Not one of them! The logic is clear and the conception is complete. It almost fundamentally solves the long-standing problem of slave feudal theocracy in the concave and convex world. Every character written by the author plays a role as a new protagonist in his life. I feel refreshed after reading the whole book! Looking forward to the future! !

The author writes so well. The protagonist is very individual. She gets along very harmoniously and warmly with the God of Creation and the angels. It is indeed a cool novel. The heroine can be said to be the best among two people and more than ten thousand people. She is also very nice when writing about getting along with humans. My favorite part is the plot of Thunder King and the management game. I believe the author will write equally well in the future.

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome 😘It is God and it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I am so cute The tears won't stop and the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that it will flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, and I realized that God does exist. I was so good that my tears didn't stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water [Crying R]

The protagonist is well portrayed, and we can clearly see Li's growth and changes, as well as her heart that will never give in no matter how many twists and turns she goes through. The development of the friendship line with Paius is very delicate, and the interactions with other characters are also very vivid. You can clearly feel the author's love for each character. And the pictures drawn by the author are really beautiful. In fact, when I saw the later part, I did feel a little emotional. The growth and changes of the protagonist were obvious, but some were too obvious. She has gone through many layers of transformation, which makes me feel strange. Maybe growth is indeed like this, lose something and gain something. And I feel that Li has become more indifferent, maybe because of the tempering of time, or because she will eventually leave, but she always feels like there are many people around her, but she always feels like she is walking alone. She can make friends with many people, but in the end no one can always walk with her. And although Li is still fighting for humanity, she has an inexplicable feeling that she wants to separate herself from the category of human beings, including I remember that in a chapter later, she also mentioned the word "mortal". (I can't remember the previous chapters, but it seems like she didn't like the word or something.) This is really the first book in which I hope that the protagonist can forget everything that happened in the other world after traveling back in time. Li's state of mind is really very different from that of ordinary humans. If she still survives in her original identity and body after traveling back in time, she will feel very uncomfortable. But after all, the state of mind is backward compatible, so there shouldn't be much of a problem, right? (? I hope to see more about Li in the future. In short, I am very grateful for this book. It has been almost six or seven years since I started quitting the game. Finally, I came across this book on Tomato one day. Looking at the familiar characters in the book, I suddenly returned to the game. The role of Li also left a deep impression on me. I think I may not forget this role in nearly 50 years. I would also like to thank the author for presenting us with such a wonderful story.

It's such a masterpiece! The author is awesome! The logic of this book is quite strong, which is rare in Tomato's embossed articles. It can be said that it is almost interconnected. If there are loopholes that I haven't discovered, I really haven't found them [laughter] I think the setting of the protagonist in this book is very interesting. She is human but immortal. Although she often sleeps, she still has human characteristics. Her character seems to be developing towards a god, but she is not completely a god, just somewhere in between. The author has grasped this aspect very well. If she does not go astray later, this book will definitely become popular. Finally, the author is great, please update [cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's a very good, very normal article. I like this kind of three-dimensional view. I think the plot other than the concave and convex competition is also very good. It has a sense of life and getting along with the angels is very happy. The plot is also very good, very normal and very happy.

The black and white text becomes increasingly red. . Very! Nice! The characters are very well controlled and don't feel OOC at all, the laughs are dense, and the plot is smooth and the conflict points are natural. Especially the part about Thunder King Lei Xiao made me cry [crying] in the middle of the night (and the ones in Palos later); I also watched the heroine's awkwardness from the beginning to The invincible growth in the back, the very empathetic writing, the heroine's values are very righteous, the Spark Project has ignited so many like-minded people in the vast universe, human civilization, the inheritance of fire, resistance to theocracy and corruption, and endless development. . . . I'm so touched, I still have more to say. I'm looking forward to the teacher's new book. It's so beautiful that I'm just reading it🥺 ps: The daily interactions with angels were delicious! Ah, I love how everyone has delicious little cakes. . . I left it because of the plot of Paius in the early stage. This battle is so fun. The more you taste, the better it tastes😋

It's tied, the protagonist has a brain, everyone has a brain, the battle scenes are really cool, the battle scenes are really cool [laughing][laughing] It deserves five stars.

I love to read it😋, it is judged to be a super large article. The timeline, foreshadowing, recycling, etc. Are very clear, and it is one of the few works that will not make readers dizzy after seeing it later. The writing style is very good and not too dramatic. The characters are consistent with the original work, almost non-ooc. The timeline is written from the time when the Original Angel staff was complete. It may be a bit boring at first, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I still miss the early days of living with the Original Angel. There is a lot of interaction between this book and Paeus, both cb and cp are delicious (the heroine in the book has no cp, but I personally think cp is also delicious when I play with this pair😋) There are not too many stars, the heroine's abilities and the like are involved, the added settings are not obtrusive, and it does not affect reading if you are not familiar with the stars. In the early days, private settings were added because the original work had no settings, but the private settings of this article are well integrated with the world view, unlike some mythological and humanistic novels that are like filling in their own OCs... The writing of Lei Xiao is really good, and it can be fake to the extent that I suspect that the original work has added new settings that I have not read. After being naked for so many years, shit fan fiction finally made me naked to the extreme, which made me feel a little emotional. This book is being updated twice a day, and I hope it won't end halfway through. I hope we can maintain this quality in the future.

The plot is huge and novel. It is completely different from other embossed articles. A new path to take. But it doesn't feel boring or procrastinating at all. Emotional processing is normal. Normal writing without sensationalism or anything. The main attraction of this book is the plot. Recommended to watch

This article is indeed well written, there is no doubt about it, and there are a lot of pinyin to help you learn unknown words, but I feel that the protagonist has changed later, which is indeed a bit extreme, but it is okay and can still be understood. Personal comprehensive evaluation: highly recommended to watch

It's very beautiful. I watched it for two days, right? I stayed up late and finished reading it The heroine has no cp (then I secretly kowtow, and the omnivorous party kowtows cpcb crazy) Then the writing was very comfortable. Zi Tanghuan discovered that his ability was not to tame animals, and he became more confident in developing his abilities. His acquaintance with Jin also changed, and he became a helping hand. It turns out that An Mixiu's disgustingly handsome character is no longer so abrupt, maybe because the starting point has changed? One is to attract women's attention, and the other is to protect women's respect and unconsciously learn to like them, which makes them more comfortable and less offensive. And the attitude of Lei Shi and Garder Ross towards the protagonist is not abrupt. I think they are handled very well! In some other embossed articles, there are often special OOC situations, but this article is much better (in fact, in my heart, it is very perfect, but it is difficult to adjust it by everyone) And what I think is more special is that although the heroine has changed the life trajectories of many characters, she does not make people feel like an octopus, that is, wanting and wanting at the same time (I want to be his white moonlight, I want to be his playmate, I want to be his savior, I want to be his savior), but she is a natural participant. I think everyone can come and take a look, it's really beautiful

Nice! I used to read otome stories a lot, but now after reading this article, my head is all red 🤣, and now I can't read otome stories at all. Help! A very good article. Li's character is also deeply rooted in people's hearts. To be honest, the author handled the name of the heroine very well. The name of the mission in the concave and convex world is biased towards Western fantasy. If there is a surname, it will look very abrupt. The author uses single words when asking the heroine to introduce herself. The impression when reading the article is really good. I like it. The impression without CP is that I can be an omnivore and eat whatever I want😁

I'm begging you, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo According, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it, look at it😭It's been a long time since I've seen a fanfic that suits my taste, there's no cp direction, no ambiguity, cb direction is also super warm, it's just a very ordinary and funny interaction, but super warm. When Taylor's "Comrade Zhang" came out, I almost wanted to cry. It really integrated Marxism-Leninism into the grand world view of the concave and convex world very well. There is no embarrassing plot. I beg the author to update the concave and convex contest as soon as possible. I really want to watch it. (Os: I really want to watch the censor's rectification of the gods and the concave and convex contest) 😭😭

Nice! It's just that the pace is a bit too slow, but I also really like this sense of daily life. Each angel's character is very distinct and the pace is very comfortable. I really like the heroine's character because she knows that she is a human being and that humans will eventually know everything. I like the arrogance the most. It's so handsome.

Oh my god, I enjoyed watching this plot so much. I have never eaten such royal relief food, and I will eat it on my knees. The characters in the plot are all controlled very well. I look forward to the follow-up scene where Zhang Li blows up seven trash cans. Will Li Li lose his horse in the end? This article is really authoritative. . . Lei Xiao, we miss you so much. Come on, author, please don't be tired. It's so exciting. Every time I read this article, I am very patient. Li is so strong. I have been thinking for the past two days that I am really going to be tricked by the teacher, but it is not allowed in the national examination. . What a huge world view, the logic of the boss is really great, objective and impressive. I will support all your decisions (every time I run, I will think of a sentence in the comment area, "May this trip eventually reach the stars." When I think of such irritating words, my head no longer hurts, my waist is no longer sore, my legs are no longer swollen, and my whole body feels better. In short, the author, cheers!! Looking forward to your follow-up! ୧(´▽`★)୭

In fact, after reading the entire book and watching the finale, I feel that this is indeed a very good work among the concave and convex fandoms. The contradiction between human rights and divine rights is a very novel point of view. It is not like other cliche articles. I think the interaction with the concave and convex protagonist and then participating in the competition is a highlight. As well as the shaping of other characters, what impressed me the most is Lei Xiao [Crying] I really cried when I read it. This is also the first book I have been able to read in its entirety in the three months since I started reading the book. It is worthy of evaluation and may be re-read in the future. Every time I read it, the sense of pride I feel as a human makes me excited! ! ! [Laughing out loud]

Very nice! It's not cliché. Other book friends have said it. I think it's the most relevant book for me (I only read two books in Aotu, and this is one of them). The characters written by the author are very thoughtful, and the writing style is top-notch in my opinion (Above). I've patiently read the first fifty chapters, and the more I read, the more flavorful it becomes. Hehehehe. It's abstract and a little sharp. I've read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I'm ready to read it for the second time. This is the only time I've written such a long book review. It's so good! ! Saved my book drought hahahaha, author, I like you so much. I hope to see your new masterpiece (I mentioned a bunch of paintings that express my love to the author) ____ This is a book review left by a fifteen-year-old (for reference) Now I've finished reading it. I really haven't seen enough. I want to read cool articles + abstract + logical and no-brainers. But if you like the concave and convex main plot, no-brainers and cool group favorites, just give it up, because it is related to the original plot but not much (referring to the friendship with the protagonist group)

[][][]，！ ! ! ! This infrastructure is so cool! ! ! [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] The teacher's hand is the master who rescued me from the book famine. Like my mother, she worked slowly and meticulously to bring the words and many characters to life. Like the sweet river water, it nourished my hungry and thirsty heart. Like a master, she wrote penetrating and resonant words that made me look forward to reading every day. So what if I didn't enter the Battle of the Two Gods? ! I enjoy the daily chapters so much and like this rhythm [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration].