Mr. Variety Comics Agent Will Not Die in the Band Shura Field

First of all, let me talk about a more important point, which is polishing. It is obviously polished by AI, but it is true that the author made changes after polishing. After I finished reading, I felt that the protagonist didn't have many friends around him. There were too few friends. That's all I can say. It is indeed difficult for the protagonist to make friends now, but before that girl happened, it was impossible to have less friends than managers and musicians. I think it's normal to make some true friends among these friends. I feel like they are true friends. Some of them are too few. There are basically no one except the girls in the band. After Chapter 48, AI is used too much. Most of the chapters after Chapter 48 are all about AI.

If this rhythm continues, we will witness the birth of the King of Girl Band novels It's an order for everyone to read this novel [laughs]

It feels more coherent than the previous book, and the plot is more acceptable than the previous one. The protagonist of this book feels more humane than the previous one, and the portrayal is not so stiff (the above are my personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like it)

It seems that the author has re-refined it, and it seems that there are more details and thoughts on things than what I read in the autumn. It is not the same as last time, and it is much better. (Actually, I really like to watch business types, but I don't like emotional black and white films.)

What does this book say? I think it's quite real. Everyone is based on their own interests. And the protagonist is also a god. Overall, it's very interesting. Everyone can take a look.

The early plot is explained in more detail. There is no need to emphasize that the protagonist is actually a kind person like the previous book. The writing rhythm is also better.

Author, you have to take care of yourself😭 Write novels when you have a rest😇 When I'm hungry, I write a novel😭 When I'm full, I'll write a novel😇 When I'm tired, I write a novel😭 When you feel good, write a novel😇 When I'm sleepy, I write a novel😭 When you wake up, write a novel😇 Write a novel when you cry😭 When you feel excited, write a novel😇 If you lose followers, write a novel😭 After getting a haircut, I will write a novel😇 If you are angry with Party A, write a novel😭 Once Party A gets the rice, write a novel😇 When I stay up late and become bald, I write a novel😭 When you are radiant, write a novel😇 When you run out of inspiration, write a novel😭 After carrying the pot for initiation, write a novel😇 I suspect that I will write novels when I am born 😭 When you are free in this world, write novels😇 When I miss my family and friends, I write a novel😭 When relatives and friends come to visit, I write novels😇 Write a novel when you are besieged by keyboard warriors😭 The keyboard warrior writes a novel after being sanctioned😇 If the computer crash project is gone, I will write about it Big ghost, I respect your mouth and teeth [cry][cry][cry]

After this modification, I have become a well-deserved good fan. This time I have added more processes and inner changes, including the characters' thoughts and mental journeys about various events, goodo(￣▽￣)ｄd

From the part I'm watching now, I can see that the protagonist the author wants to create is a mask of reality because of the past. His essence is still the original emotional personality. He usually shows interests mainly, but some details can also show the tenderness of the protagonist. In my opinion, the main plot is a bit like cultivating a girl band with potential. You get the training points of the system and then change the past that makes you regret. However, the overall system component is a bit low. It is mainly to promote the main plot. And at present, I speculate that the system may have been integrated by the person he regrets because the system is a bit too human.

It looks good, the writing is good, the male protagonist is a reliable adult, and he is better looking than the male protagonist of the same age as Asasi

My personal impression is very good. The background of this article is more realistic than Bangbang's world view. To put it simply, the existence of the system is to give the protagonist a chance to redeem himself, and secondly, to give the indigenous protagonist a script to open his eyes. The setting of the protagonist is probably that he used to be a very pure musician, and later chose to be a manager due to the breakup of the band. When he was a manager, he mistrusted someone, which led to the lead singer of the band committing suicide. After that, the protagonist chose to use profits and quantification to suppress his emotions. At present, many aspects have been written to show that the protagonist is still as passionate and sincere as before, admiring those musicians who can sing their own voices and have a pure love for music. Although he is tough-talking and arrogant, he cares about each band member no less than the Asasi male protagonists in other books. At present, the author's plot feels that it has not reached a real climax. The protagonist's true and careful observation of his own heart; the emotional interaction with some female protagonists; that perceptual system is probably the lead singer who committed suicide. How did she become attached to the system? What important role does it play in shaping the protagonist's character? I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. With the protagonist's current personality, I feel that it is difficult to start a romantic relationship before the inner demons are removed. I also want to see how the author cuts in to solve the protagonist's psychological problems. Five stars are given, cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's very interesting. As a manager, I've mixed it with Thorns, MYGO, and Lonely Rock. I hope that the follow-up plot will be more interesting. [Chigua]

Let's talk about the conclusion first, it's very nice. It is not a cliche time travel story. The protagonist has a system but is used more as a tool. The protagonist is a reliable adult and handles a group of troubled girls appropriately. However, the protagonist is not a saint and is not the type who can handle everything. There will be twists and turns in the emotional line and it is not a complete industrial saccharine. The style is strong and logical and reasonable. The author's imagination is online and he listens to advice, so he can interact happily with the big ghost.

Everyone is welcome to come and see [Sending Hearts] Let's talk about the overall plan of this work: First of all, my goal is to have a harem of 26 female protagonists in four groups: 19 + Caicai + Mana + Hoshige + Kiuri + Soma + Erori. However, I cannot necessarily guarantee that the strategy plots for all characters will be of the same high quality. After all, I still have preferences for characters (for example, Tomato is definitely the one I love the most) Secondly, the length must be more than 2 million words. Maybe it will reach 2.5 Million words. Please give me your support. The income of fan fiction, especially single bands, is really poor😭 Finally, there is the Lily issue. I didn't expect to emphasize it so many times... All plots with this tendency serve the harem plot. If I have to struggle, I am going to write Bai Po. Although I think most of them cannot be counted as Lily. It is just based on the tone of the work. I think the normal performance of the characters who are not OOC will inevitably have some Lily flavor sometimes. I can't help it. Everyone has different opinions.

The cold and heartless agent! 😭👍

This book is much better. It's so well written. I like you.

There is a question, how does the author deal with the relationship between the child and Momoxiang, and it is a bit of a borderline with Lily.

The writing is really not bad, but for a work. But from a web writing perspective, it's not that great. Judging from the article, the writing style is very good, the plot is relatively smooth, there are no problems with the structure, and there are not many flaws in the plot logic. However, it cannot be said that there are not many that are refreshing (personally speaking), which is very fatal for an online article. After all, compared to tea that needs to be savored slowly, the imported multi-flavor beverage milk tea can capture the public better. But it is precisely this that makes me feel that the author is really careful, using plot development to influence the characters, instead of using character behavior to develop the plot, which is something that many online literature cannot do. Judging from the character descriptions, they are very delicate. It can be seen that the author has carefully studied each person's personality characteristics. However, the main character, to be honest, is somewhat downplayed and not that "standing out". This is a good thing, it means complete integration, but it is also a bad thing, there is no sense of substitution, and it feels like reading something like "Norwegian Wood". But in short, the flaws do not hide the flaws. If you can continue reading, there is no doubt that it is a good book. Hahaha, the author xp has short hair, red and near-red eyes, right?

Yes, it's a very good book. My personal favorite is Tomo's emotional line. From the initial defensiveness and vigilance, to the melting of the ice in the middle, and then to the close relationship where he almost becomes a biological father, it is all exciting!

Holy book, I have read so many band articles, and this is the first time I have read such fine chaff. I beg the author to complete it.

It's amazing, the portrayal of the characters, as well as the thinking about psychology and plot.

It's very exciting, the writing is very good, the characters have arcs, and he is a super user who wants to be strong but suppresses it first. There is no strong poisonous point. Even the pressure of the protagonist in the early stage makes me uncomfortable. The second group, my second group, my level 64 Street Fighter portrait [crying]

I've caught up to this point, let's talk about the conclusion first (spoilers involved) It's very good to watch, really good to watch, especially the live part of the tour is very well written. If there's anything wrong with it, it's the handling of vegetarian food, and some of the twists are a little too blunt. I personally think the overall score can reach 8 points. I don't know why the score is so low. Some bands with the same number of words are pure and pure. This one is really good-looking. I recommend it.

Have you seen "Crackling Drummer"? The author is very similar to the coach. I can't stand it anymore. Come on.

I finished it in one go, it's good to watch, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I'm waiting for the author to fill in the holes. Come on. The progress is too fast later on, and the heroines all take the initiative to give it away, which is a bit bulldozing. There is not so much to pull the plot. Sure enough, an awkward person like me likes to watch more awkward stories?

It is a ten or even nine-point delicious novel. Although there is a small amount of AI involved (questionable), it is superior in character portrayal. It is also a counter-routine, closer to the real environment than the original work. The story line advances without delay and can hook the audience's interest in reading. In short, it is over!

Contrary to the introduction, the depressing plot before Black Light and Tuilupa was very enjoyable to watch. After that, it was a bit tasteless to let go. The kind of serious and serious interaction with the characters at a certain distance is what I want to see. I can only say that everyone has their own love, alas.

It's good to read. I think I've read the author's previous chapter before, and I found it quite interesting when I read it. Changes were made this time, and the changes were very good.

Book reviews that are true and objective, with multi-dimensional descriptions, clear structure, and substantial content can help more book lovers. I can't change it. Hey, I'm done reading it anyway. Do I need a reason to write a book review? All the book friends are talented and speak well.

Ernegai, author, how about writing for the rest of your life🥺Wadasi