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Pretty good. The plot routines are relatively common, but they have their own ingenuity. The upper limit is not high, but the lower limit is very stable. Regardless of the plot twists, I can write everything that needs to be written. There are a lot of detailed descriptions, and it feels like a daily novel. Fighting accounts for about 20%. It looks very relaxing, a bit like playing a martial arts game. Generally speaking, the early fantasy and daily novels seem to be very relaxing. The upper limit is not high, but the lower limit is very stable. It is still good to read when you are bored.

After reading half of it, I still felt that there was something wrong with it, and I didn't know what to say. I actually like to read bad Ke series, but the writing of this book is not enjoyable, it looks very bland and has no real character. I recommend the author to read the book "I Became an Immortal in the Tang Dynasty" at 7 o'clock, and then try to make the writing more delicate and forceful. Otherwise, it would be a bit difficult for this book to attract more people in the context of other books.

Some of the settings are quite similar to that of "The Enlightenment of the Red World, I Am the Living Immortal". It is similar to most of the same type of movies, and there is no poisonous point. I hope that if I continue to work hard, I can have some of my own style.

It feels like a long stream of water, but not as plain as a running account. The expression of events is not delayed, and the plot development is also good. Occasionally there are moments that are eye-catching. ... I quite like this style of writing.

Too many imitations of golden jasmine. From the frame structure to the pet design, it's all the same!

The writing looks very comfortable~, it is not the traditional cool writing about invincible immortality, it is a bit like a road writing. Although the climax is not satisfactory, the score of 6.3 Is still a bit low here on Tomato.

It looks very fresh and I finally got the money.

Delicate and beautiful writing

It's so beautiful. Dao Changsheng

Ollie, come on!

Good, new content

It is true to be calm and calm!

There are good books of this quality in Tomato, it's good

Is this going to be AI later? It sounds awkward.

The writing is good, the plot is light and interesting, and those who watch it will feel warm in their hearts.

It looks good. I'm tired of watching underworld cultivators. This kind of thing is really good.

Looks good, don't be a eunuch. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

Well written! There is a kind of ethereal flavor of being among the gods!

So far, it's quite good to read and listen to, and the scenes are described very delicately. I give it a five-star rating.