HP: Harley, Her Last Name Is Lestrange

"Overall, it's been good so far, but I'm a little confused after seeing this. That is to say... As a traveler who went back in time, Harley didn't actually give full play to her prophetic intelligence advantage, especially on the issue of Horcruxes. Harley should have told Dumbledore the information about Horcruxes in advance. The seventh part is quite lengthy. There is a detailed description of the Horcrux, including its characteristics, location, surrounding environment, and protection measures. She could send a letter to Dumbledore and tell them one by one, that is, the ring (Resurrection Stone) will be a little harder to find, so be careful not to take it with you. The locket is in the cave, the gold cup is in Gringotts, the diadem is in the Room of Requirement, and the diary is in the Malfoy house." "What do you mean? I don't understand why Harley wants to make it more difficult for herself to pass the level? She is clearly labeled as the daughter of a Death Eater, so why would she go to Slytherin like asking for trouble? Is Slytherin a good place?"

The writing in the fanfic is already very good, although there is a problem like other HP fanfics in which the original work is not fully read: Thicknesse actually joined the Death Eaters after being cast by the Imperius Curse in the Deathly Hallows, and Kingsley is Voldemort. After his resurrection, Dumbledore only recruited members when he reorganized the Order of the Phoenix, etc. There are some details that are inconsistent with the original work, but this is the case in most fan fiction. After all, most people nowadays have not actually read the 10-year-old Harry Potter original work, but know more about it through movies.

It's well written and very true.

A very special HP fanfic, looking forward to Harley's subsequent growth [Sending my heart]

She is simply my idol

Awesome, awesome