Quick Transmigration: The Lazy Fish Coasts to Victory, and the Big Shot Spoils Me!

I'm here to evaluate (remember to reply) About (Qi Ling Island Salted Fish Beauty) 🌟 Core Highlights 1. The fusion of themes is innovative Breaking away from the cliché of "farming, doing business, and fighting for the best" in the 1970s, it combines the background of the island era with artistic creation, and upgrades the core of "salted fish" from "lay down, win, and waste" to "seriously experience life", giving the period story a light and deep core, which is obviously different from similar fast-travel period volumes. 2. The image of the heroine is tenable The growth arc of the heroine is clear. From the initial "salted fish" lying flat, to interpreting the relationship between life and art with "beauty in front of you and art in the lower place", she completed the transformation on the spiritual level and got rid of the instrumentality of the heroine who traveled quickly. The character is real and has memory points. ❌ There are shortcomings 1. The supporting characters are weakly portrayed Except for the core supporting character Xu Wenyuan, the background and character descriptions of other characters are simple and lack a sense of hierarchy, which to a certain extent weakens the real atmosphere of the Q0 Island background. 📝 Overall summary This volume is a mid-to-high-quality chronological unit in the fast-traveling novel, with the theme innovation and the creation of the heroine as its core advantages. Although it is limited by the fast-traveling framework and has shortcomings in supporting roles and branch plots, it still successfully creates a unique character of "Salted Fish Beauty", which is the highlight of the entire text.

Hello everyone~ I've summarized everyone's comments, questions and my thoughts, and chatted with everyone in unison👇 1. You Baozi feels that the story is a bland flow story. In fact, the heroine of Salted Fish mainly focuses on lying down in her daily life, but she also accurately received the suggestion that "the content lacks ups and downs". I will think hard about how to make the plot more interesting, and will gradually optimize it in the future~ 2. Baozi also asked if the male protagonist is the same. This setting has not yet been determined. Do Baozi prefer a fixed male protagonist or a different male protagonist in each small world? You can tell us your preferences in the comment area~ 3. Baozi also accurately captured the contrast between the heroine who is "lazy but can do anything". In fact, the heroine's "laziness" is a Buddhist mentality, and "knowing everything" is the foundation of her ability accumulated in the past. This contrast of "can be lazy but can't really cook" is the core setting of the "salted fish beauty" that I want to create. However, this is only the setting of the first few small worlds. The abilities of the heroine in different small worlds will be presented differently in the future~ 4. If there is a setting you particularly like, feel free to leave a message in the comment area and let me know. I will refer to your ideas to polish the subsequent plot~ As a newcomer who writes this kind of fast-travel article for the first time, the first two worlds are still in the exploratory stage, so there are inevitably shortcomings. Special thanks to everyone for your tolerance and thoughtful suggestions. I will read and respond to every comment you make seriously. I also welcome you to continue to speak freely in the comment area. Your thoughts are very important to me~

After reading the previous two articles, I fell in love at first sight + alone, but... Not sweet 🤦