Beast City: Qilin

I feel that as a fanfic, it is too overwhelming. The four organizations in the original book do not have a strict organizational structure at all. You have made so many innovations in this area, but the original book is just a black gold, and you have made a bunch of messy ore. The Cangmu God teaches the rats in the gutter, and you let it cooperate with the Qilin Union at the beginning. You used the background of the original book, but changed it beyond recognition. Gao Yang's system's first-generation god heir didn't show up at all, and the image of the dragon was turned into paranoid, authoritarian, and suspicious. Original text: Long believed that Gao Yang could successfully break the dilemma from beginning to end, but before you got to this moment, Long already suspected that Gao Yang had rebelled? You changed Mr. Li into a brainless fat man, and added a level 9 awakener, who is really the unique show of Qilin, and somehow the dragon knew that Qilin was reborn. Gao Yang was like a fool, so he followed Qilin's plan. The setting of lucky talent is to increase attributes by spending time. What did you change it to for others, tripping others up with your thoughts? Is it too low? If you change all the names and talent names of all the people and create a separate book, it will be better than just copying it here.

In this book, I have modified the abilities and part of the world view of several characters. Please forgive me! Do you think you should join Wang Zikai?