Hell Inn: Don't Say No

The very rare Hell Pickup King has a good theme [like]

It's quite well written. Even though the protagonist is biased towards hell, he doesn't describe heaven as a pure buffoon. The author's writing skills are very good.

It's very interesting, and the descriptions of hell and heaven are very reasonable. Didn't heaven become lowered because the original drama was dominated by the hell side? I'm very looking forward to the protagonist's return to hell. This sudden change will make the protagonist restart the trial?

It's well written, but the transitions in some places are very sudden, which disrupts the rhythm. It is a very tricky way to create a character with top combat power, and then find a way to weaken and suppress her combat power so that she cannot influence the main line of Deus Ex Machina. As long as she is weak, she will be evaluated as having a weak combat power.

The subject matter is great! There are really very few fans of the Pickup King, so it's really cool that these two have a connection. It just felt like the transition was too sudden! It looks messy, I hope to add a dividing line!

Should I say A+? No, all evaluations are worthless in front of your work! Your work will become the most dazzling gem on the ring! The whole city will sing about your good name! Even the rats in the back alley will etch your name into your soul! Your works have transcended the common people in the city, like roses blooming from the ruins, eye-catching yet graceful. Your works are both easy to understand and extremely profound. They integrate abstraction, reality, and life into one, making even the ring masters feel ashamed!

Very beautiful😋especially delicious, the theme is very novel! ! ! ! The daily life is so heartwarming ❤️The characters are written in a three-dimensional way, and the protagonist and the relationship between the characters are well written! ! ! ! ! 🥰There are many small ideas, which are different from the previous articles of the same type, and you will not feel bored because of the same plot (because the previous plot is the main line and has not started, so the early stage is the plot written by the author himself, which is really eye-catching!!! ❤️❤️❤️) Although I have not watched the Hell Pickup King, the author portrays the protagonist really well! ! ! So handsome! ! ! It's really beautiful every day! ! ! The author writes really well! ! ! It makes me want to stop reading the book after reading it (because I usually can't finish a book...🌚) In short, the author's writing is really good. Instead, I read the paragraphs and comments. The author's replies have a kind of AI flavor and feel cute🥰But for such a beautiful book, not many people seem to read it, which is also very good! ! ! I hope the author will not abandon the book🤓Come on! ! ! (This is my first time writing a quick book review, so it may not be very good, so I'll just read it😁) Moreover, the author takes the questions very seriously and will accept suggestions and answer questions. I hope more people will read this book and raise their ratings ❤️ Come on, author! ! ! ! ! (There is a typo in the last sentence... Just change "quick" to "long". I found that there are a lot of typos... I'll just read it...) By the way, can this be considered a long review? I found that the author sometimes updates a little late (but it's so delicious). The author should pay attention to his health ❤️

It's very interesting. It has a lot of original plots. I don't know why. I've read several Hell Inn fanfics before, and many of them follow the original plot exactly. The protagonist's sense of presence is very low, but this one is different. The protagonist has a strong presence and is almost tied to most of the characters on the screen. The plot development is also moving in a completely different direction. The future is bright. The only pity is that the updates are a bit slow, but as long as the updates can be maintained, I won't force it [laughing]

It's so life-saving😍My heart beats faster😘I breathe faster😍My ability to purify smog surpasses that of tropical rainforests😊I will become the new lungs of the earth🤤I kneel down the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau into a basin with a plop😙I cry until the South-to-North Water Diversion Project is no longer needed😋Howl until the wind power generated can be used by people around the world

I like it very much. It's very beautiful. I like it very much. I like it very much. I hope it will continue until the end.

It's a very novel subject matter, and the writing feels pretty good. It's acceptable to throw away some of the little poisonous points in the brain (personal opinion)

Go there to find people who watch both My Little Pony and Hell Inn

He really became the king of picking up girls [face covering] Reading the whole text gives me a very smooth feeling

Good review! ! ! ! ! ! ! But too little! ! ! ! Not enough! ! ! ! [Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical] I absolutely love this book! ! ! !

Shockingly delicious, the two chefs are ecstatic, the writing is good, the plot is well blended, and the fat is good.

Strong, recommended. It's as cool as having the extra meat chef cook the wrathful waves of the demon after beating the Demon Chef.

Super pretty! ! ! Great author, come on [like]

Looks good! It's not enough. I finished it in less than half a day.

Justice, you pick-up king! [Notice]

Super pick-up king, who dares not to eat the food cooked by my goddess?

This volume is very well written, and the protagonist really becomes the queen of hell's pick-ups. Can you write more about the interactions between the protagonist and other (female) characters? After all, it's really novel to write about this kind of subject, it's still the kind of hell pickup king plus hell inn.

Seriously, the content is very good and worth watching [Learned] The only problem is that the author's transitions are a bit sudden, which makes people pause every time.

It looks good. Come on, the author.

After reading this book, I went to play the Hell Pickup King ex game for an afternoon. I no longer want to play this kind of game [crying]

Very beautiful, very beautiful It's so pretty, so pretty\(//∇//)\

Good looking This is really beautiful

It's beautiful, the main character is so handsome

It feels so good to see me

I like this, keep up the good work

Write, keep writing