The Girls from the Ruined Village, I Disappeared from Sight with Them!

It's partial, because the plot requires that the male protagonist and the girls will not have action scenes for the time being. However, the descriptions of actions and expressions are very good. I hope the author can write the plot clearly. There are too many girls. If the plot is too complicated, it may have a negative impact. If the plot is too simple, it will be too biased towards Long Aotian. Let's see how the author writes it. There may be more updates from Dechi in the future, please wait for the author's update, [Adore][Adore]

It's good-looking, it's good-looking, I guarantee it based on my reading time, but some of the previous details will definitely need to be rectified in the dark room later. When the number of words increases, or when more people read it, it's time to enter the dark room. I wrote it well before, but why did I suddenly become confused? [Laughing and crying] [Laughing and crying] These pictures are too toxic. How could you come up with a plot where the male protagonist is stunned and raped by several unknown women? The key prop, the jade pendant, was also robbed.

Many readers who are attracted by the survival theme feel that the plot structure has loopholes. Compared with the survival novels in the same series, it may not be rigorous enough. However, rather than treating this book as a survival novel, I think its bigger selling point is its emotional description. The author's emotional portrayal is very well controlled, the writing style is also very delicate, and the overall plot can also very well stimulate emotions and increase the sense of substitution. And I think the most powerful thing about the author is his detailed description, which can be said to be penetrating, meticulous and very eye-catching. Overall, this book is very good despite its shortcomings. It can be said that even readers who are not familiar with the relevant content or subject matter can read it very comfortably. [Like][Like][Like]

Yes, it's well written. As long as it's Chu, I'll give it five stars. There's no place for shabby shoes in harem writing.

This is the plot of Nomo to Muli [Adoration]

The writing is very good, the author's writing style is very good, it can be used as a galgame script.

It's half of Liu Beiwen. Reading the comments, it seems that he borrowed the settings from a certain nook and cranny. Overall, it's okay. It was quite interesting when decrypting it.

It actually feels pretty good, but it does have quite a few shortcomings. It's just that the progress was progressing too fast. Kisaragi's progress suddenly felt a bit rushed, the sudden secret kiss, and the hot girl's feelings were also a bit sudden. But the author also said in advance that this is the reason for "Jixiang", it just feels quite sudden. Then I joined St. Mary's College and other female protagonists. I don't know if they will be added later. Then I am very curious how the author will deal with the "god to go" behind the village, whether to end it directly, or continue the Shura field. Personally, I still hope to continue watching Shura Field. I hope the author will be longer. If it ends with leaving and an open ending, it may only have 300,000 words. But if the map is changed, different female protagonists will use different advantages to impress the male protagonist. Different personalities, in the same scene, it will still be a bit boring in the end. Adding their own economy and different family backgrounds will be more interesting. Now the author writes out of interest, and he still has his main job to do. Although he earns 6k a day, I feel that the author may finish writing and leave the village. I hope the author sees my comments and can keep writing. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

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The worldview is a bit of desert island survival and Japanese supernatural. The settings that are extended from the original topics will not be too abrupt. The ideas are quite novel, but the content may be biased. The author has performed very well within the current framework. I suggest that the author not only describe the characters' emotions alone, but also add some in-depth characterizations. It is a great book with potential and is worth recommending.

What can I say? This book gives me a strong feeling of Gala Game. It wouldn't be surprising if it was made into a comic book.

It's beautiful. The author has written down the feeling of Se Se and encountering mysterious events.

I read a review and said it was adapted from a game, so I didn't give it a high score, but for someone who has never played that game, it's actually pretty good.

Isn't this the book about Lost in the Abandoned Village? Protagonist Mitsuya Hayabusa [laughing]

Come on, big brother who writes about the little emperor uncle

It looks good. Please write it quickly. After Chapter 50, the male protagonist suddenly becomes a 🐢man. He is drugged, treated like a toy, and humiliated. There are so many 🐢🐢 in this book

Update soon, there are only 26 chapters so far and I can't comment much [exploration]

This is how we give up to players in every corner. Taking advantage of others is as easy as breathing [take a closer look].

Ancient style ➕dj, the more you listen to this song, the more powerful it becomes.

The writing and logic are very good, the plot is smooth, and it is truly a masterpiece. I don't know how much better than a bunch of chronicle articles.

When I watched it at night, I actually felt it was a bit scary, but it also felt creepy, full of memes, and weird. How did the author combine these two?

I want to see the protagonist having a party It's okay, at least I don't feel nauseous anymore.

Looks good, very good [laughs]

Resurrection my love! !

Not bad, pretty good-looking.

Once you know what writing method suits the subject matter, you know you won't be able to go far.

Come on, author, write at your own pace and don't be influenced [Sending Hearts]

It's very readable and in-depth.

The subject matter is good, very innovative, and the content is also very interesting. I hope the author can keep writing with high quality and quantity [laughs]

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