[Barely Surviving Low Ratings] [Multiple Heroines] [No Blood Relation] [All Characters Are Adults]
During a school trip, several female classmates and I accidentally stumble into a mysterious abandoned village sealed off by mist.
The student council president, once so unattainable; the arrogant gal; the aloof, proud kendo girl... In this forbidden place, where the law no longer holds sway, they undergo startling changes in temperament because of the strange "feminine scent" permeating the air.
As the only useless nobody of a guy in the group, I just wanted to survive in peace. Instead, I keep getting pushed to the brink and even used as a tool.
Now that the rules of civilization have failed, it's time to reshape order according to the oldest laws of all.
"I wanted to get along with you as classmates, but you had to push me into this."
Facing these "witches" who are trying to devour me, Lin Yu will no longer hold back.
Well, I guess I'll have to step in and thoroughly "tame" every last one of you.
It's partial, because the plot requires that the male protagonist and the girls will not have action scenes for the time being. However, as for the action descriptions and demeanor descriptions, the psychological descriptions are very good. I hope the author can write the plot clearly. There are too many girls. If the plot is too complicated, it may have a negative impact. If the plot is too simple, it will be too biased towards Long Aotian. Let's see how the author writes it. Dechi may follow up, please wait for the author's update, 🥰🥰
It's good-looking, it's good-looking, I guarantee it based on my reading time, but some of the previous details will definitely need to be rectified in the dark room later. When the number of words increases, or when more people read it, it's time to enter the dark room. I wrote it well before, but why did I suddenly become confused? 😂 😂 These pictures are too toxic. How could you come up with a plot where the male protagonist is stunned and raped by several unknown women? The key prop, the jade pendant, was also robbed.
Many readers who are attracted by the survival theme feel that the plot structure has loopholes. Compared with the survival novels in the same series, it may not be rigorous enough. However, rather than treating this book as a survival novel, I think its bigger selling point is its emotional description. The author's emotional portrayal is very well controlled, the writing style is also very delicate, and the overall plot can also very well stimulate emotions and increase the sense of substitution. And I think the most powerful thing about the author is his detailed description, which can be said to be penetrating, meticulous and very eye-catching. Overall, this book is very good despite its shortcomings. It can be said that even readers who do not know the relevant content or subject matter can read it very comfortably. 👍👍👍
Yes, it's well written. As long as it's Chu, I'll give it five stars. There's no place for shabby shoes in harem writing.
This is the plot of Nomo to Muli 🥰
The writing is very good, the author's writing style is very good, it can be used as a galgame script.
It's half of Liu Beiwen. Reading the comments, it seems that he borrowed the settings from a certain nook and cranny. Overall, it's okay. It was quite interesting when decrypting it.
It actually feels pretty good, but it does have quite a few shortcomings. It's just that the progress was progressing too fast. Kisaragi's progress suddenly felt a bit rushed, the sudden secret kiss, and the hot girl's feelings were also a bit sudden. But the author also said in advance that this is the reason for "Jixiang", it just feels quite sudden. Then I joined St. Mary's College and other female protagonists. I don't know if they will be added later. Then I am very curious how the author will deal with the "god to go" behind the village, whether to end it directly, or continue the Shura field. Personally, I still hope to continue watching Shura Field. I hope the author will be longer. If it ends with leaving and an open ending, it may only have 300,000 words. But if the map is changed, different female protagonists will use different advantages to impress the male protagonist. Different personalities, in the same scene, it will still be a bit boring in the end. Adding their own economy and different family backgrounds will be more interesting. Now the author writes out of interest, and he still has his main job to do. Although he earns 6k a day, I feel that the author may finish writing and leave the village. I hope the author sees my comments and can keep writing. 😘😘😘
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The worldview is a bit of desert island survival and Japanese supernatural. The settings that are extended from the original topics will not be too abrupt. The ideas are quite novel, but the content may be biased. The author has performed very well within the current framework. I suggest that the author not only describe the characters' emotions alone, but also add some in-depth characterizations. It is a great book with potential and is worth recommending.