Demon Slayer*************

I want to say something. First of all, this is the first time that the author has created such a large-scale fanfic. I only had the opportunity to come up with an updated version after returning home. The creation must have included many problems, and there will also be a lot of things that I have forgotten and typos (updates on my mobile phone). So even if you point out any faults or problems in my paragraphs, I will read them one by one and correct them, but I will fully respect the world view and story of Hara Demon Slayer. I think every character is flesh and blood. I just want to add my own thoughts and fantasies to this world. Thank you. First of all, thank you all for your suggestions and comments. I will pay attention to these issues in my subsequent writing and other books I may write in the future. The following content is not malicious or directed What's the meaning of low-scoring and negative reviews that give low marks to a work when you haven't even had half an hour to read it? I admit that there will definitely be a lot of problems and flaws in what I write. I am not the top scorer in the college entrance examination essay, but it only took me less than half an hour to write a very yin-yang text that I despise for hundreds of thousands of words written by others for countless hours. What is the meaning of venting my dissatisfaction with the unsatisfactory life in my life on the Internet? If the protagonist of a fanfiction that wants to redeem everyone has the same combat power as the locals, how can he be redeemed? The purpose of this book is simply to give everyone (including Zhu and Oni) a happy or relieved ending. I am not a writer who can carefully balance the writing to be the same as the original work. I only intend to write what I want to write and want to see. There is already a regrettable ending. Why do I have to read another regrettable ending of a fish-or-death battle in a second creation fanfic?

The author is better and better. Although it is not equal, some plots always make me hallucinate the book I read by Kiyogen Shiori. Rescued by a rock pillar - Water/Thunder Breathing Talent - Homemade Ice/Cold Breath - Ice/Cold Pillar - Xiao Ren sent knife oil, the human machine was returned - Spider Mountain ruptured, chasing wife/husband in the crematorium - Three strings/a revolving door. That's all I remember for now. The author's worry-free style still pokes me [blowing kiss]

I've finished reading it now, and I don't have any big problems. But, as the author, is the childhood of the male protagonist a bit too miserable? I really hope that the author can consider whether he can write a side story after the main text is completed in which a butterfly ninja travels back to the hero's childhood and tries to redeem him (many fanfics will write such a side story) In addition, I wish the book will be popular [laughing] It is indeed a pretty good fanfic [laughing]

It looks good, teacher, I love it.

Really beautiful

Looks good, looks good [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's very interesting. Come on, keep writing.

You can still work hard, I hope the protagonist and Butterfly will be together later [shy]

Good review. Although there are some minor flaws, the author will correct them after being persuaded. I wish the book a great success [Blow a kiss]

Personal feeling is good

It's almost 9 points compared to Mo Ranlingyou's three works [OK]

I have a legendary death-resistant king

It looks good, come on, the protagonist is so miserable [crying][crying][crying]

As far as the protagonist is injured, the least severe outcome for others is to be disabled and retired, but in the end he is still alive and kicking, which is really difficult to kill.

It feels like the first few chapters are similar to Demon Slayer: Wake Up Second and I am hated. In the first chapter, I am the one killing demons at the beginning, and I am saved by the rock pillar. I also let the crow choose its own name when I give it to him.