Saagiri*

It's very interesting to watch. The characters' personalities are restored and the timeline is acceptable. If there are any shortcomings, it's that some places are a bit off-topic. It's not a big problem. After all, I have read many similar articles. This article is very good compared to others.

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 99 Qiangyi is so delicious that it makes men menstruate and women go crazy when they see it. It is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of vegetative people. It makes tears flow from the corners of the mouth and floods the Qiantang River. , It's so good, it's God, it's my rose, it illuminates my dark life, it makes my world meaningful, I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, it makes me realize that God does exist, I'm so good that I can't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water and depressed. The nemesis of disease is the alarm clock of a vegetative state. It was so painful that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River. It was so painful. It was God, my rose, who illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, jumped, and danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. You are obviously not an ordinary person. You are so beautiful that you don't look like an ordinary person at all. Those two water-like phoenix eyes, although they always look at people lightly, are indescribably clear.

So beautiful, my first love in Xiawu Mountain is Bai Yueguang

I beg you to be really restorative. . It makes people feel that the rabbit has really come back and is trying to make up for his regrets in a gentle and gentle way (especially Giyong's 😭.) Many details have been taken into consideration, so I won't spoil it too much here. Then a food suggestion: Pair it with Guo Yifan's "I'm Here" Finally, please support our Sagiyama First Love! ! !

The character design is not OOC at all, it's as if Mr. Crocodile is here in person. It's so delicious. How can there be such a delicious Qiangyi fan? It's so delicious [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] Oh my god, I beg you, one person and one blood book, begging for the resurrection of the rabbit. ][Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Send the author's address and send you some gifts [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][cry][cry][laugh][cry][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] ][cry][laugh][cry][laugh][laugh][laugh][cry][laugh][cry][cry][laugh][laugh][cry][laugh][cry][cry][laugh][cry][cry][laugh][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][laugh][laugh][cry][cry][laugh][cry]

This is the first Qiang Yi book I've read. I don't think the changes to the plot are too big. After all, I'm reborn. I know a lot of plots and predictions about the future. If I want to change, there will definitely be variables. It's not just the highlights of Qian Yi and the other two, but also the descriptions of other pillars. They are very serious. They all have their own highlights, such as the one about Butterfly. I think the writing is very good. Although you are reborn, not everything can be changed. Regarding the known things The feeling of powerlessness that cannot be changed is well written, and the sensitivity of Yiyong's heart is completely combined with the emotion recognized by his colleagues. Qiangtu's feelings for Yiyong are also accumulated over time. When he knew his feelings for Yuyu, he did not say it out. Please read the article for more details. It is written very clearly. Yuyu also likes Tutu, but he does not understand what this emotion is. I hope the author can write about their happiness later! ! And other people's happiness. If what I said is wrong, you can point it out! Although there is no passionate love, it is this kind of cautiousness, protecting the other person, thinking about the other person, and taking care of the other person's mood. I really like this kind of love. The 55-60 part really makes me die [crying]. Both people are the most important thing to each other, but the 85-86 part really makes me die with "Why Did You Kiss Me"! Super delicious! ! ! ! Yiyong, you are so charming to the rabbit without knowing it! Anyway, Qiangtu likes it too!

This book is really good, but I need to pay attention to it. The emotional descriptions are very detailed. Because I personally prefer to read emotional descriptions, so I don't think there is a problem. But if you are the kind of person who is eager to watch the plot, you may feel that the progress is relatively slow. Also, the young couple is very sweet, Qiangyi 99 [blowing kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! There is a self-created breathing method! But super handsome! And the interactions between the young couples are so cute! The description is very delicate, there are some slight settings errors, but it does not affect the viewing! Show them all to me! Five ants! ! ! ! ! Very interesting, highly recommended, I just begged the teacher to give it a try! Teacher! Teacher, are you back for dinner? Teacher! Teacher, you must he! Teacher!

The author's writing is really very good, and the emotions are delicate (I wanted to cry after reading two lines😭). The reason why I gave it four stars is to suppress the score (there are many books that were written at 9:00 and were directly suppressed by 🍅, and it is not easy to be suppressed at 8:00). Teacher, you must improve it! So well written! ! !

Shocking and delicious❗️❗️❗️❗️❗️Where did the author get such high-quality persimmon! Isn't it true that this fanfic is too delicious? Chef, are we going to eat this today? Isn't it a bit too rich? To be honest, the author must have come from a god. This is so delicious. The emotional description is very detailed, and the metaphors and other techniques are also very good. It is just right. I feel warm in my heart when I read it. The author's writing style is also amazing. The description of the environment, the description of inner emotions, and the description of expressions are simply amazing. It's so fine❗️❗️❗️ and the sour feeling of pull between the young lovers is simply amazing! As I watched, I twisted and rolled on the bed, crawling in the dark. I punched my cell phone into the wall and knocked my head three times. All in all, it's very beautiful. The settings of the pair of Xiawu Mountain and White Moonlight are really amazing. It's so cool. Moreover, the author's setting of the rebirth of the second-generation Qiang Rabbit is also very satisfying to me. It's so delicious. . .

You must persevere, author From the first chapter I read, I wanted to give it five stars. It was really written so delicately. You can completely feel the emotion, which is my favorite way of writing [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The following is just my personal opinion: Reading through this text, which focuses on Qiu Usagi and Tomioka Giyu, the most touching thing is not the bloody events of the Demon Slayer Squad, but the author's tender and delicate brushstrokes. It does not deliberately amplify the edge of youthful spirit, nor does it originate from the exaggeration of tragedy, but blends the bond between the two into the daily sword practice time - it is the cloth handed over by Qiang Tu to wipe sweat, with the warmth of the sun; it is the figure that is never absent from Yiyong's side when he lowers his eyes in silence; it is the tacit understanding of standing side by side on the trial field, and even the arc of the sword swing reveals a fit that no one else can interfere with. The author knows how to grasp the balance of this feeling. There is no direct confession, but every intersection of eyes and every wordless protection becomes the most heart-wrenching confession. The concerns hidden in the scabbards and scars, and the mutual support between the long night and dawn, are written with realness and tenderness, as if they are not characters in comics, but young people who really existed, desperately trying to hold each other's hand in the torrent of fate. As for the friendship between Qiu Tu and Tomioka Giyu, the most disappointing thing is the regrets of the past, but it is also the most hopeful. I hope they can break free from the shackles of the plot and meet again in another world without ghosts and fighting. There is no need to hold a sword to serve the common people. All you need to do is sit under the cherry blossom tree in spring and watch the petals fall on your shoulders; wash your feet by the stream in summer and listen to the chirping of cicadas in your ears; dry the rice in the courtyard in autumn and let the evening breeze blow through your hair; cook wine by the stove in winter and slowly speak those unsaid words. I hope that in the years to come, there will be no blood and separation, but only the stability of three meals a day and four seasons, and staying together year after year. May this tenderness that grows in the light of swords and shadows finally get what you want, and be worry-free every year.

What I feel the most is the warm atmosphere of this book. From the very beginning of Yiyong's subtle sense of distance, I want to touch it, but I don't dare to touch it. I am afraid that it will be broken like a phantom. Qiangtu belongs to the kind of strong and gentle feeling. Reborn with the memories of the previous life, I have the guilt and sadness for Yiyong. When I am a spirit body, I can only look at myself. I think the best junior brother was misunderstood by others. I think he must be quite helpless. After reliving his life, he found that there seemed to be a layer of veil between Yiyong and himself. They both cared about each other, but one was awkward and the other could only guide. There was that feeling of flowing water, a very weak sense of happiness. This is the tenderness and strength of Bai Yueguang, Sagoriyama First Love 99 This is also the first time I have seen Qiangyi from a tomato. It's so fragrant, so fragrant. Author, I will follow you for the rest of my life.

It's totally delicious. This is the most realistic story I've ever read about the original characters. The awkwardness between Qiang and Yi and their reliance on a very dedicated relationship are very well written. I will continue to read more! The gentle and restrained rabbits and the little fishes that are a bit naturally stupid are the most delicious. I hope you won't abuse us in the future. 71 Please

OOC [][][][][][]

The writing is very good. It doesn't look OOC at all. You can read it with confidence.

The emotions are described very well! Both the writing style and the content are excellent! I particularly like the part where Tutu wanted to kiss Yuyu but didn't. I feel like this is how young lovers should behave in the early stage! 7199

This one is really well written. The timeline of Qiang Rabbit feels perfect, including the fact that it is not just a fan of Qiang Rabbit and Yiyong. I can really feel that the author is really writing well, and almost every character has no OOC. They all act in their true colors, and the writing is really delicate. It perfectly expresses Yiyong's emotions and the subtle love between them. I really like this book. It's really like reading the original work. I didn't feel any discomfort at all. Highly recommended.

I am a person who likes sadistic writing, so this book touched me very much. Their story is not only about reunion but also about being sorry for leaving again at any time. This book is not very OOC. In my mind, Yiyong will not be impulsive when he sees Qiangtu again. He has his own responsibilities, and Qiantu is very consistent with the original work. From the original sentence "He is the only one who is gone", we can know that Qiangtu's character is kind-hearted in sacrificing for others. Because he has the memory of the story in his previous life, he also works hard to catch up with Yiyong. It is a double-strength book. What touched me the most was the final battle in Infinite City. In order to save the boy with infinite possibilities, he used the Twelve Forms with huge side effects. That scene was really cool. He was really gentle and used his own life to treat others gently.

It's really good to read, and the characters are well created (≧▽≦). It's just that not many people have read it, but it's really good and well written👍

This is a CP novel that I highly recommend! I feel like I caught sight of it at first sight, it's really beautiful! I didn't see if there was any charcoal in the back, but Qiang Yi is really sweet. [Cry]

This character's personality is not OOC at all, and it made me feel happy! The writing is even more impeccable! Very good very good! There are also emotional lines, hey hey hey, expressing emotions vividly! The fighting scenes are pretty good too! Sweetness and abuse overlap! I love you teacher! Teacher, please continue writing!

Really, the author's writing style is super good, not OC at all. Let me tell you, the author is so solid that he can sell books [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]

This book is really beautiful. The author's writing style shocked me. It's so delicious, teacher! ! ! Can a teacher see herself when she looks in the mirror?

It's so beautiful. The author grasps everyone's personality so well, and the writing style is super, super, super good. It's sharp and sweet [please ask for more updates]. It completely describes the feeling of first love in Sagiyama. I shed tears when I read it in the middle of the night. Qianyi is happy, isn't it?

This is the most interesting book I have read so far. Qiu Tu's feelings for 🐟🐟 are very delicate and he is always trying to make up for his regrets, especially Qiu Tu's restrained feelings. It really poked me. I personally feel that there is basically no OOC, so it's worth it!

The author is really awesome My white moonlight The author stopped updating last year and revived it again this year It hasn't been updated yet, it seems like it's been discontinued again. To sum it up, it's really beautiful. I treat everyone to milk tea I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup, I have one cup. Copy and say The author's description and writing style are good, but the plot and rationality are a bit lacking. I hope the extra chapter will be a little sweet. I clicked in with full expectations and was amazed. After waiting for a year, I suffered a knife [I almost cried]

Simple Qiang Yiwen is too hard to find, and many of them are written by Soul Penetrating Qiantu. Finally I found Ben! The text expression is relatively complex and the vocabulary used seems too gorgeous, so you can handle it as appropriate. (Ps: personal opinion) Qiangyi 99

Very, very beautiful, the writing is exquisite, refreshing. I got up to read it at 4 o'clock in the morning, but the content may be a little verbose [snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][love][love][love][love][love][love][like][like][like][like][like][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

The writing is really good, and it fits Qiang Tu's character very well. Can we not let Qiang Tu die? Even if there is a will to wake him up before fainting, what will happen to Yuyu if you die? I watched Qiang Tu fall in front of me with my own eyes, and I couldn't let go. Then for four years, I lived with the image of Qiang Tu falling in front of me every day, thinking about the consequences of being awakened when I was kissed by Qiang Tu, and losing him.