Ye Fan was born into a declining family in the world of immortality. He was diagnosed as a "congenital waste body" since he was a child. His meridians were blocked and he was unable to absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, which became a shame to his family. When he was 13 years old, the family elders saw that he really had no talent for cultivation, so they spent their last savings to send him to the outer sect of Qingyun Sect, just to give him a place to live. After entering the sect, Ye Fan became the weakest disciple in the outer sect and has been stuck at the third level of Qi Refining Realm for five years. He was ridiculed by his classmates, bullied by his senior brothers, looked down upon by his elders, and became the laughingstock of the sect...
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The sect is your foundation and your home. You fight with each other every day and tear down your own home. What do you want to express, author? Are you planning to create a so-called invincible commander? Your home is gone and you want to be invincible. Isn't that a joke?
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The sect is your foundation and your home. You fight with each other every day and tear down your own home. What do you want to express, author? Are you planning to create a so-called invincible commander? Your home is gone and you want to be invincible. Isn't that a joke?
Good,,,
The plot description is clear and detailed.
The rhythm is tight, the plot is reasonable, the text is smooth, and the description is true and reasonable.