Hashirama: Madara, let me tell you... Blah blah... Tobirama... Blah blah...
Madara:?
Your brother is fine, he's mine now
Hashirama: Madara, let me tell you that Tobirama is really... Bala bala...
Madara, hugging his fur collar and nodding, not bad, not bad.
Hashirama:? Why does it feel wrong? That's my brother! ! !
This is a short story about a Mao collar being tricked by an Uchiha. OOC is unavoidable. Try to restore it as much as possible.
Reader comments
It's great. I saw Ban Fei's article on Tomato for the first time. It's great.
The writing style is a bit immature, and it's okay in the early stage but a little cluttered in the later stage. The content is quite interesting and novel, and you can see that it has some ideas. The ideas are clear, the timeline is a bit messy, and there are some minor flaws in the writing and characterization. There are no major flaws or surprises. It's still good to read. Highly recommended.
It's good to watch and the plot is also very appetizing.
Teacher, don't stop updating! ! !
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It's good to read. Recommendation index ★★★★★ Forgive me for my poor language and I can't express any beautiful praise. The author's writing style is also very good and he frequently updates it. All in all, it's worth reading.
It's very interesting. The content is clear and logical. Anyway, it's so interesting that you have to watch it to know it yourself (￣(エ)￣)／(≧ x ≦)＼／(≧ x ≦)＼
I remember a world where Tobirama traveled into Kakashi's body. Am I remembering it wrong? [What]
The subject matter is very novel and beautiful.
It's beautiful, I must keep writing.
It's so beautiful, I like it so much, I didn't expect to see such Naruto fanfics here that satisfy me✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎
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Come and feel my madness and eat it [Adoration][Adoration]
I saw a bit of a knife in the front, but it looks good.
It's great. I saw Ban Fei's article on Tomato for the first time. It's great.
The writing style is a bit immature, and it's okay in the early stage but a little cluttered in the later stage. The content is quite interesting and novel, and you can see that it has some ideas. The ideas are clear, the timeline is a bit messy, and there are some minor flaws in the writing and characterization. There are no major flaws or surprises. It's still good to read. Highly recommended.
It's good to watch and the plot is also very appetizing. Teacher, don't stop updating! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart]
It's good to read. Recommendation index ★★★★★ Forgive me for my poor language and I can't express any beautiful praise. The author's writing style is also very good and he frequently updates it. All in all, it's worth reading.
It's very interesting. The content is clear and logical. Anyway, it's so interesting that you have to watch it to know it yourself (￣(エ)￣)／(≧ x ≦)＼／(≧ x ≦)＼
I remember a world where Tobirama traveled into Kakashi's body. Am I remembering it wrong? [What]
The subject matter is very novel and beautiful.
It's beautiful, I must keep writing.
It's so beautiful, I like it so much, I didn't expect to see such Naruto fanfics here that satisfy me✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎
Good to see [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Come and feel my madness and eat it [Adoration][Adoration]
I saw a bit of a knife in the front, but it looks good.