Transformed into a Fairy: My Benefactor Is Always Bullying Me

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star review 😳

So far, I think it's good, but I have some doubts. After the male and female protagonists returned to the mountain gate, the female protagonist obtained the treasure of the Reshaping Spirit Pill, and it was mentioned many times in the article that it was difficult to obtain. It was the master who gave him the treasure, but under the male protagonist's persuasion, the female protagonist hesitated for a while and agreed to elope with the male protagonist. She wanted to stay with the male protagonist's sect all the time. What about the female protagonist's original sect? Does it just serve as a backdrop for the emotional transition of the male and female protagonists and the restoration of the female protagonist? When the female protagonist agreed to the male protagonist, she also considered some emotional issues of herself or the male protagonist. The female protagonist did not think of the master and sect who gave her the treasure to protect her. The male protagonist's cultivation level was so high during the sect competition. It was obvious that the higher-ups also noticed that something was wrong. What about the male protagonist's cheap master in this sect? No one bothers to investigate? The heroine's physique master also knows about it, so you just let the male and heroine have contact with each other like this? Moreover, when I introduced it earlier, I only said that the male and female protagonists are from the same sect. It was only later that I found out that the male protagonist also has a personal background. So after all, the female protagonist's junior brother doesn't know him because he is a personal background? Are you always provoking the hero? Are you doing this just to advance the plot? And the senior brother who has a higher level of cultivation than the male protagonist doesn't seem to know that this person is called Ling Yunfeng. I didn't know until the sect competition. At present, these are the things I have doubts about, but the whole article is very good [I almost cried]

The heroine is very cute (so she is often bullied [laughs evilly])~ The hero's strategy is purposeful and the process is described (this is very good and quite novel to me) From the rough and straightforward approach at the beginning, he becomes more and more circuitous later on, mastering the art of appropriately switching back and forth between the two states of [reliable] and [vulnerable] in front of a woman, which eats up the heroine to death 😏 But when it's time to be honest with each other, the male protagonist is also unambiguous~ And the word "benefactor" in the title of the book was really mentioned along the way. The male protagonist not only pointed out the direction of the female protagonist's future and also presented teaching materials, even if he is not a benefactor, he must be a noble person 😂 Anyway, that's all~ I hope that the subsequent plot can progress just right and not be too delayed (I know that the plot progress of Xiuxian is also based on changing the map, but after all, it is not a second game, there is really no need to have too many maps 😂) and it should not be too bloody (what about Bai Yueguang's resurrection or something)

I can't help but it's really beautiful, both meat and vegetables, and I'm about to start school! When are you going to write the extra chapter? I beg you, okay? Author, write it quickly. I haven't seen enough 😢 😢 😢 😢 😢 😢 😢 [fear] [fear] [fear] [sad] [sad] [sad] [sad] [sad] [please update] [please update] [please update]

Very nice, I like it, not bad.

The writing is very good, unlike other marriage-changing stories where you fall in love with the male protagonist out of nowhere but gradually [please update]

It's very sweet, I like this kind of forced love very much

Hey, it's so sweet. Both the male and female protagonists have their mouths clear and there is no misunderstanding. Rourou also posted a lot of love in the comments section. I beg the author to publish more books! ! !

The male protagonist is so possessive, but I really like it. As the saying goes, if a man is not bad, a woman will not love him. What a girl next door! I ran away with someone else without even thinking about it. It feels like she has no thoughts of her own!

The writing is very good, the emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists are very realistic, the plot is not stuck, and the writing is relatively smooth.