I Am Here******

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the writing is good. The plot introduction at the beginning is very good, and the protagonist's characterization is also very distinctive. However, the linkage within the cultivator is very abrupt in the whole world and is not attractive. The reason why many people like the full-time mage is that the battle setting and element design in a fantasy novel are very novel. It is a novel that combines Chinese and Western elements. Maybe the author prefers Jin Yong's works. There is no doubt about Jin Yong's works, but for modern novels, the world view and setting of Jin Yong's novels will have a small audience because of the small world view and old-fashioned setting. Therefore, it is recommended that the author when writing an internal novel like Quan Fa can change the new golden finger to the current audience, or directly write a Quan Fa that avoids the protagonist line. According to the author's writing skills, many people will read it on Tomato [Like]

我真的好喜欢主角性格 好喜欢作者文笔 好喜欢剧情安排 好喜欢好喜欢好喜欢 好久好久看到这么顺畅的书了 上一次还是在全召那本 啊啊啊啊啊作者大大我爱你 快更啊

It's still quite interesting. Regardless of whether it's a single heroine or multiple heroines, all the full-time novels I've read before have been blocked. What if... What will the author do, change the platform? Or should I repost it with a different name? [What]

The author can actually divide some paragraphs into more paragraphs, otherwise one paragraph will be too long and affect the perception, and some people like to skip reading. It would be better to divide some paragraphs into more paragraphs. Well, just like me, my personal opinion [laughs] I take back what I just said. This novel is pretty good, but there are a few too many poisonous points, and the segmentation is not done well, which affects the perception a bit, but other issues are not too big.

Really true, "I am reborn as a demon cultivator in France"

, I am reborn as a full-time Dharma corpse [face covering], the author can consider my name

So far, it's pretty good. There's nothing serious about it. I'd like to support it first.

It's half gold in Tomato, but compared with others, the improvement of cultivation is slower and the earning ability is higher.

Very good novel

It's well written. I've just finished reading it. The characters are well drawn. I beg the author not to stop. [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

The best French fanfic I have ever seen

Good writing, keep it up

Shang Ke, after reading the comments, some people said it was written by AI, but I can't tell it anyway. Is it necessary to care so much about whether it was written by AI? It just looks comfortable, right?

By the way, the author has found a new platform [shy]

Brothers, come in and have something to eat, it's too late to explain [smile]

Very interesting, not mindless

There are no big poisonous points at the moment, it's a pretty good comprehensive book.

It's a pretty good French fanfic. It has its own style and doesn't blindly drag the original protagonist.

It is well written, very restorative, and has its own independent originality.

Very nice, hope to keep it up

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

Seeing it now, I think the author can write that kind of redemption story [thinking] maybe [laughs] @ Ashes Panda If the author doesn't change the cover to a better-looking one, this cover will get weirder the more I look at it [awkward laugh]

It's hard to find a good book, but don't stop reading [Like]

Used it for the second time, it's really good, the flaws don't hide the flaws, it's great

Invincible, very beautiful

Support, the character is very good.

Pretty good, worth a look

Nice looking, clean, well written

It's pretty and interesting.

Okay, timeline.